Qubool hai: a second chance [link for the second thread=p20]. - Page 3

Nice update
Loved it
Full time emotional as Zoya got to know abt safaa/seher. Liked Maya interrogation.
Asad decided to go India to find his lost family. Update soon plz.
Thanks for PM

Well, i read all parts in one go. The story till now is interesting and hopefully the family will be reuinted. This story is definitely far better than actual leap they had shown. Loved the interaction of asad zoya. Do include more of asya. Do write often.

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Loved it
Full time emotional as Zoya got to know abt safaa/seher. Liked Maya interrogation.
Asad decided to go India to find his lost family. Update soon plz.
Thanks for PM

Originally posted by: tikit

Well, i read all parts in one go. The story till now is interesting and hopefully the family will be reuinted. This story is definitely far better than actual leap they had shown. Loved the interaction of asad zoya. Do include more of asya. Do write often.

Hi guys! I'm just so happy with the positive comments you leave that i decided to update today 😊So here's the new part I hope you'll enjoy it

~4~

Bhopal, India, two weeks later.

Safaa was in Bhopal. She still didn't talk to Maya as she was too busy looking for her family. Maya's mother was very kind with her and she had helped her with her searches.

England.

"Ammi? Why can't I come with you?" Antara asked crying.

"We have to do something very important Antara. And for your safety, you have to stay here ok?" Zoya explained with her eyes watery.

"Will you come back?" Antara enquired.

"Of course. We will come back." Asad said.

"When?" She asked.

"We don't know love, but we'll do everything to come back as soon as possible." Zoya answered. Antara hugged her parents then they hugged Sheereen, Ayaan and his family. Even Nikhat was there to say goodbye. Zoya held Asad's hand as they got into the plane. It was time for them to take revenge on Tanveer.

Punjab, India.

Sanam's dhaba was almost done and she hadn't speak to Aahil once. She didn't even knew that he was building another dhaba. Rehaan went back to Bhopal as he had to do some work. Dilshad and Haaya had taken care of Sanam during the past two weeks. She had recovered very well and she was ready to find a job for her family. On the other hand, Haaya was smitten with Rahaat, her childhood friend who was back from the army. He was very gentle with her and has offered to help the family. Dilshad eventually accepted and they were staying at his home in Punjab.

Aahil had followed Sanam during all this time. He had sent her medicines for her wounds and he was finishing her dhaba. Sanam was obviously not aware that Aahil was the one who sent her those medicines. He even decided to gave her an amount of money to help her.

Dilshad was doing her namaz when she felt some sort of relief! She ended her namaz and cried for her children, praying for Najma, Asad and Zoya to rest in peace. But she oddly found herself saying "Give my son and his wife a long and happy life." She was surprised as she never said that in 17 years of sorrow, she never wished for them to have a happy life and now she did this. She found herself crying asking god to cease the pain still present after all those years. She prayed for Seher as well. She wished to find her as soon as possible, she wished to hold her tightly, to tell her how sorry she was for letting her behind!

Bhopal, India.

Zoya and were finally in Bhopal. Nikhat had proposed them to live with her adoptive son Rahaat but they had kindly refused because they didn't want people to find out that they were alive. That was why they bought a house far from the urban side of Bhopal. Zoya was unusually quiet during the journey and Asad had planned to organize a romantic night in order to give her some happiness in her sorrow.

Zoya's pov.

Allah miyaan! It was very odd how Asad could manage to be so calm! An amount of emotions were in me. I was excited because I would be able to meet my daughters, but, I was frightened to meet this crazy bitch again! I understood Asad when he had said that we should stay in England but I just couldn't. I couldn't see my life without my children and seeing how beautiful Antara was, made me realize that Tanveer had taken this from me. She had taken my right to see my babies growing up, she had taken my right to see them going to school, to see them becoming women. Because of her they even grew up separately! "Me, Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan, I swear on my life that I will fight until Tanveer Beig pays for all her crimes. She will pay for killing Najma, my abbu, my father-in-law. She will pay for separating a mother from her son, she will pay for separating two sisters, she will pay for making Haaya an orphan, she will pay for everything." I promised to myself.

Seher's pov.

I was looking for someone who could give me information about my parents. I walked and walked until I reached a beautiful house. This house seemed to be familiar. Like I had already seen it. I left the place quickly as I saw a car coming near the house and I continued my path. I approached a mosque, so I covered my hair and I entered it to pray for my parents even though I didn't know them. When I finished my prayer, I was going to leave the mosque when someone held my arm.

"Zoya?" He asked. It was an old man and he seemed to be sure that I was this Zoya.

"Sorry, but my name is Safaa." I declared.

"That's strange, you look like Zoya. Is she your mother? She was very kind you know. But when she introduced you years ago, she said "here are my daughters, Sanam aur Seher. So are you Seher or Sanam?""

What was he talking about?

"What do you mean?" I asked confused.

"I must be wrong but you're one of Zoya and Mr Khan's twins, aren't you?"

"I don't know, don't you know where I can find them?" I asked.

"Beta, Zoya and her husband have been killed."

Amazing chapter

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing chapter

Loved it

So the journey towards the reunion has begun

Looking forward to know what happens next

Please continue soon 😊

thank you😆

So, finally seher and asya have reached bhopal. Loving this story to core. The laast line was so painful that asya are dead. Really excited for the reunion of the family. Lovely update. Thanks for the pm. Do pm me the next part.

Nice update
Asya in Bhopal now. Journey towards family reunion started. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for PM

Originally posted by: tikit

So, finally seher and asya have reached bhopal. Loving this story to core. The laast line was so painful that asya are dead. Really excited for the reunion of the family. Lovely update. Thanks for the pm. Do pm me the next part.

Thank you 😛 I know that the last line is really painful but I'm trying to give a lot of feelings through lines just to make you feel what the characters would feel in this situation. Then, the reunion will happen but not soon. And I will gladly pm you for the next part. Thank you for your comment 😊