AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142 - Page 97

Main kahan se start karoon? Just caught up wid all the chaps. Ryt now im feeling all sorts of emotions, few mins back i was crying.

One thing im sure if at this moment is that my words wud do no justice to ur story, its heartbreaking and touching, both at the same tym. Simply beautiful. I loved each chapter to bits.

There's one thing i want to do desperately and that is to kill Zoe. Even the word bitch looks paler in comparision to her personality and dirty deeds. I wish Asad wud have thrown her out himself. It might have reduced my anger towards her a notch. But i guess the biggest slap to her face will b when Zoya resumes her responsibilty as Lily's mother with Asad by her side. Cant wait. Plzz update soon.

I'll begin with Mary. I dnt hold her responsible for being unwelcoming towards Zoya, it was a natural instinct. You wint b hospitable towards someone who has caused hurt to one of ur loved ones? But with time as she observed Zoya's interaction with Lily and in general as well, her opinion changed. She started caring for her as well. She wanted the best for Asad and knew Zoya was the one for him. Im glad she supported Zoya even after figuring out who she really was.

Coming to Rashid. Well i wnt let him off the hook so easily. Not for being rude or disrespectful towards Zoya, he is a father grieving his favorite son's sudden demise, but for being so rude, bossy, stern and emotionless towards his elder son. I honestly hated the way he treated Asad. It hurt me a lot. Asad was ryt, its easier to put the blame on someone else than own ur mistakes and dats exactly wat Rashid did. He was the reason why Asad turned up late to meet his mum but Rashid always overlooked that detail, indulged himself in alcohol to hide the guilt, remorse n pain. It dsnt like it worked for him but it surely did break Asad's heart many tyms. All said n done, im glad he accepted his mistake of treating AsYa wrongly before dying.

Now my babies, Asad and Zoya. There were so many moments which broke my heart and all i wanted to do was hug Zoya tight. I dint approve of her way to protect Lily but i dnt hold her responsible for it or dislike her. Her love for her tiny neice was so deep n strong dat she cud even throw herself off a cliff just to save her. She truly is Lily's mother in all senses. Apart from being a tender hearted mother, she's a woman too who lost her heart to the man who had left no stone unturned to show his dislike and vowed to never fall for her charms. I honestly had tears rolling down my cheeks reading this part. How desperately Zoya tried to make Asad understand but then realized she had lost him n den her goid bye to Lily, it was lyk someone twisted my heart. I swear u've used such words that it was as if i was watching it unfold instead of reading the scene. This scene was heart wrenching.

Asad... well cant blame him really. He always showed resentment, anger and hatred towards Zoya but it was never directed towards her. It was meant for Zoe, the one who played the part in his bro's death. N despite making it clear repeatedly n vowing as well he cudnt help but fall for the lady in his home. Zoya hasnt realized it when he screamed falling for her cox she was too upset n broken by the turn of events but im happy, v v happy, dat he has fallen in love as well. The part where he removed her fingers from his arm was like a punch, seriously. Anyone in his position wud react the same even worse but am glad he saw Zoe for wat she really was and realized his mistake but not soon enough to hold back the person he has come to love.

Well now he needs to do some search n then apologize for his sarcastic comments.

Hope Asad finds her soon enough cox hearing Lily's cries is heart breaking.

Pia, this story has been absotutely fantabulous. Thank you for sharing it wid us. Waisey tumhare paas raat kab hogi? Ab to subah honay wali hai :( plz update soon, plzzz.

Lovee.

Pia? R u posting now?