AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#781

Nice update dear
So many times she blurt it out something & then rectify it. Hope Asad will get to know soon abt her identity. His simple confession that he forget all his grief & problems when he was with her. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#782

Hi Pia 🤗

Hope u have been fine

I know I m late again but lets get quickly 2 My comnts 😆 saving my bakbak 4 some other day😆

PART 10

Zoe is such a disgusting women every1 hates her 2 d core🤪

threatens Zoya & even insults her just bcuz she thinks too high of herself😡

I wonder how these 2 r twins they r poles apart just like black & white...Zoe is black & Zoya is white 😆😉

Asya's part was wonderful

so our dear Asad can't resist her but in d end always blames her lol😆 it happened 2wice in 1 night that he kissed her & than blamed her😆

I so wished Zoya would have told d truth how different their story would have been😕

so they ended up wid fight & sad note

PART 11

I think Mary decoded d Zoya mystery after Zoe's call😉

that's why she is being more nice wid Zoya or she would have shared all things wid Asad itself 1st thing

Asad tried 2 correct his mistake by paying check what kind of remorse that was 😆

its good Zoya tore that in front of him😆

their journey was Superbly penned

Asad caring her when she panicked, their entry in KV & meeting wid Rashid nicely written👏

Loved Asya's convo in front of Dilshad's portrait

Both Asad & Zoya r carrying their guilt & neglected siblings

PART 12

Asya's dinner wid Rashid scene was very intense

Finally this time Asad gave away all d emotions of his heart out when Rashid began insulting Zoya

btw I loved it how Asad stopped his father its a big deal if u stop ur father any1 else would b other thing but standing against ur father 4 ur wife that's huge & I admire that thing👏

Its good Rashid left cuz we got another Asya kiss but this time no fight happened😆

infact Asad proposed Zoya 2 consider 2 turn there marriage real🥳

but Zoya was sad cuz she wants Asad 2 want her as Zoya not fake Zoe

PART 13

awe Zoya fell sick & Asad came 2 take care😛

It was adorable how she started crying

Asad behaved way to kindly & honestly I loved this part d most😃

cuz they were not fighting or insulting 1 another wid no ego

They behaved like real couples 1 fell sick other cared & they also had heart 2 heart convo which I enjoyed😛

not only Zoya but Asad also had fallen 4 her & I was happy when I read he was wishing if Zoya was not Zoe only if he knew his wish was actually reality😆

I m actually disappointed wid Zoya as she's missing every opportunity coming her way. Asad gave her so many chances yet she keeps lying I m afraid Asad will take this against her later.

So wid this my review 4 last 4 chap's is over

Pia u ruined my habit 😳 last time after lot of effort I kept myself regular but see this time u broke ur daily updt rule & see what is my situation 😆

I m telling u come back wid daily wali policy back cuz seriously my morning is boring widout ur shots & that's only way I can stay on time😆

Chal see u & take care🤗

btw how many chaps r left I heard its gonna end soon..how come? abhi toh truth bhi bahar nahi aaya don't tell me 1 saath revelation, confession, d much talked about challenged consummation & Zoe ko punishment ho jayega😲 we won't accept it sachi😆 Yeh Chalugiri mat karna ok😆

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#783

Very nice update
Wish zoya could have told the truth
When asad asked whether she is hiding something important
Sure asad will understand her
Thanks for the pm

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Fatema

@DoremonLove

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#784

Lovely chap
Zoya sick asad taking care
They shared same bed 😳 zoya should have told the truth 😭
Asad has fallen for her he needs to know she's not Zoe
Update soon

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#785

Originally posted by: iluvasya

Ha ha yes lot of demands are coming...which is a good thing
I guess everyone are liking the changes 😃
I will surely try to fit everyone's request
I think I am going to have two extra chapters :)
It is a happy ending
But the book was so abrupt
Seriously if you get a chance do read it and you'll be like what was that
Zoe's character get away with everything
But not in my story
I want her to suffer and regret 😡
Already updated the next chapter.
Will look forward to read your awesome feedback 😃

So so glad Zoe will get what is coming to her

She will hopefully learn her lesson

So looking forward for ur added chapters

Wonder what u have next for us

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velvetrose

@velvetrose

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#786

aww nice asad taking care of zoya

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tuna_star

@tuna_star

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#787

Just awesomeee👏👏 ... thank for writing such a beautiful work... waiting for the next part and asad's reaction when he comes to know the truth...😊😊

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#788

Unres on 109

Onto me this time...😆

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#789

Asad is melting
Seems that live is on its way
Nice
Continue soon

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Pia23

@Pia23

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: Sanjhari
😊
Unres
It was a beautiful update.
Poor Zoya is sick but good that Asad decided to take care of her...
She keeps on forgetting that she is zoe.. for him.
It's treat to see jealous asad.
Really excited to know how zoe gonna reach India n reveal everything to asad.
Looks like it's gonna happen in one or two episodes...
Pls continue soon..as its too difficult to wait. ...

Thanks for this lovely comment 😃
I know you are busy so thank you once again :)
Glad u liked this update
You'll get your answer to how Zoe is going to reach in india in the next chapter
Will try to update soon