AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142 - Page 77

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Sanjhari thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was a beautiful update.
Poor Zoya is sick but good that Asad decided to take care of her...
She keeps on forgetting that she is zoe.. for him.
It's treat to see jealous asad.
Really excited to know how zoe gonna reach India n reveal everything to asad.
Looks like it's gonna happen in one or two episodes...
Pls continue soon..as its too difficult to wait. ...
Edited by Sanjhari - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago


Unres it too 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow asya in bed together
Oh asad u wished u would wake up and finish no her to be a different woman
If only u know
So do they share bathrooms
Love how he came and try to take care of her
I am ur husband I have to take care of u
How he held her and don't want to let go
And she just seek his comfort his warm
Her lies eating away at her
Oh his jealousy for his brother
It is like he is saying y y did u have to be with my brother
I was thinking this might have a bad ending but him wishing for her to not be his brother wh**e
Tht gives me hope lots of hope
She had 2 slip of tongue and he missed both
Lucky much
I so wish she would come clean so it really don't blow up in her face as it would if he find out from tht b of a sister
Him holding her and tasting her so sweet
Let's see what happens
Edited by anopama - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Unres it too 😉

I know I am not doing it lately.
But my sister is visiting me... no I mean hardly getting any time ..
But I promise I will 😊

Edited by Sanjhari - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pls update soon
I want asad to know she is not Zoe bitch but zoya gold
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

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Aww Pia u have a lot of request from ur readers
Wonder if u r considering
So glad u changed this story to fit Asya
So the update loved it
Love Asad and rashid face off
Amazing
So he figured out zoya speaks Urdu
She sold herself out and she didn't even realize
So he kissed her again
And he questions her abt her secrets oh boy
She keeps denying but he want to know what her eyes hide
So he ask for a real marriage
For lily sake but I also think bcuz he can't resist the urge to being with her and close to her
I am so dreading when the truth is out
But I guest it wouldn't be a huge drama bcuz the story ends in the chapter after
But I am dreading it might not be a happy ending
Hopefully update soon



Ha ha yes lot of demands are coming...which is a good thing
I guess everyone are liking the changes 😃
I will surely try to fit everyone's request
I think I am going to have two extra chapters :)
It is a happy ending
But the book was so abrupt
Seriously if you get a chance do read it and you'll be like what was that
Zoe's character get away with everything
But not in my story
I want her to suffer and regret 😡
Already updated the next chapter.
Will look forward to read your awesome feedback 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs



Ohh if Mary knows she should talk to her n knock some sense in her head.
Yes father son convo was good...and thanks to u for sharing the story...

Please continue soon.

Waiting for the update😭



Awww I enjoy sharing these story with you guys too 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update
I loved how asad took care of zoya and held her close to him so that she can feel better..
Zoya was so close to saying the truth so many times in this update
But overall this update showed them very comfortable with each other and so caring towards each other
It kinda gave me peace that they both aren't going to fight so much now..
Awesome update
Loved it
Update soon..:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Pia.
This Part was intense...really Intense...and emotionally provoking kind off..
I think the comfort & care here which Asad showed was good but still Zoya's fear and insecurities about the dreaded moment when Asad will know about her farce is eating her up and the moment also...don't know how painful it will be...
But I have a this feeling from this chapt...and some from previous ones...like whenever Asad ask Zoya about anything which she is hiding and want to confess...it is like he knows that something is not right and is sucspicious...or does he know she is not Zoe..???
Interesting part.
Continue soonish.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Next update Zoe is going to enter?
Asad is so kind and gentle with her...

He is definitely in for a shock

Update soon

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