AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142 - Page 80

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

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Wow asya in bed together
Oh asad u wished u would wake up and finish no her to be a different woman
If only u know
So do they share bathrooms
Love how he came and try to take care of her
I am ur husband I have to take care of u
How he held her and don't want to let go
And she just seek his comfort his warm
Her lies eating away at her
Oh his jealousy for his brother
It is like he is saying y y did u have to be with my brother
I was thinking this might have a bad ending but him wishing for her to not be his brother wh**e
Tht gives me hope lots of hope
She had 2 slip of tongue and he missed both
Lucky much
I so wish she would come clean so it really don't blow up in her face as it would if he find out from tht b of a sister
Him holding her and tasting her so sweet
Let's see what happens



Yes, they are sharing bathroom and now bedroom too 😳
The scene where he held her and she cried is written beautifully
You are right Zoya had too many slip of tongues and she'll have many more in the next chapter
I wish she told him the truth but she didn't 😕
And here comes Zoe in the next chapter :(
Thank you Anopama for always taking out the time to give such a wonderful feedback 😃
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanjhari


I know I am not doing it lately.
But my sister is visiting me... no I mean hardly getting any time ..
But I promise I will😊




I was just kidding...don't take it to heart...but thank you for the lovely feedback Inspite of your hectic schedule 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kAvya_678

Pls update soon

I want asad to know she is not Zoe bitch but zoya gold



He'll know in the next chapter 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Wonderful update
I loved how asad took care of zoya and held her close to him so that she can feel better..
Zoya was so close to saying the truth so many times in this update
But overall this update showed them very comfortable with each other and so caring towards each other
It kinda gave me peace that they both aren't going to fight so much now..
Awesome update
Loved it
Update soon..:)



I agree Asad has fallen in love with her. Both are so comfortable with each other 😳
I wish she had told him the truth...I am sure he would have understood.
He loves her inspite of everything
Next chapter finally Zoe is making her entry 😡
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Pia.
This Part was intense...really Intense...and emotionally provoking kind off..
I think the comfort & care here which Asad showed was good but still Zoya's fear and insecurities about the dreaded moment when Asad will know about her farce is eating her up and the moment also...don't know how painful it will be...
But I have a this feeling from this chapt...and some from previous ones...like whenever Asad ask Zoya about anything which she is hiding and want to confess...it is like he knows that something is not right and is sucspicious...or does he know she is not Zoe..???
Interesting part.
Continue soonish.



No, he doesn't know that's Zoe
He is confused by her behavior and slip of tongues
He knows she is hiding something but I am sure identical twin thought must have not cross his mind
In real life too we don't assume these types of things
The dreaded moment everyone is waiting for is finally arriving in the next chapter
Thanks Mayur for your wonderful feedback
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Next update Zoe is going to enter?

Asad is so kind and gentle with her...

He is definitely in for a shock

Update soon



Yes, Zoe is going to enter in the next chapter
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: raspi

it was nyc bt u didn't pm me fr the update



Thanks dear 😛
I have no idea why U didn't receive the pm because I sent it to everyone on my list.
I will double check next time :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ayat20

Hope zoya tells asad about the truth

Before its too late...



She won't
It will be too late 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Applef

Awesome update..

Asad has been so gentle and warm throughout the update..
Zoya was very near to tell him..
Asad care about her..
And still think there is something zoya is hiding..



I know Asad has become very caring and loving tiwards her
But poir guy will be left heart broken 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks 😊

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