AsYa OS (KaBhi) - Mending Walls - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
LET ME CLEAR U GUYS ONE THING
HANDSOME MERA HAI SIRF AUR SIRF MERA 😡

😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

belated happy birthday to u too ...
i at times read u in raja rani forum ...🤗


😆

Kabhi kabhi drop in bhi karo.😉 I see you on all Ankie's threads actually. The only place where I see U.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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tujhe pata hai sue danda kisee kehte hai 😡 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup


😆

Kabhi kabhi drop in bhi karo.😉 I see you on all Ankie's threads actually. The only place where I see U.


main threads nahi banati 😭 😭😭

Raja kabhi mera hubby huya karta hai ⭐️ 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank U guys! 😳


Originally posted by: anopama

Aww this was so sweet

If only
And Asad making out with zoya b4 marriage
Nice


Thank U but they were NOT making out. 😳


Originally posted by: KT15661

Wohooo..it was a cute yet confusing is...humeira and ayan ?? Kids????


Thank U! The objective to say so is that AsYa will always remain the ELDERS while AyRa the young ones. 😳

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona_naksh

omgeee...dis is my birthday gift ...i ll read it but one thing for sure is i love u :* :* a little more for it


haan ji 😳 maine plan toh kiya tha to post before 20th but I got so restless and then had been too tired that I couldnt write. The only OS that took me more than 5 days to finish. 🤢 😆
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: ASYAaishu

Sweetest ever...love it..awesome update...I wish to have such...plz do writes more like this...


Thank U. I'll try my best. I love writing sharing my thoughts and what I wanted things to shape up and all. I want to write but the problem is I dont have time. 😆😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

i just loved it sooo much ... 🤗...
i always wanted asad n rashid union to b a slow n steady process ..so i loved it more :* ...

baby please keep writing 🤗 its just so good to read abt asya ...

AWW DEE Apko sachi pasand aya? 😳U r so busy that it took u months to remember that i exist 😭. Just like Payal Dii🤢. she toh has forgotten that I am alive 😭 😆
But sachi apko pasand aya? I am so soory I forgot your bday.😭 Moble Fb mein bdays they dont show in notifs. 😡 Waise mera notifs ka toh🥱 ... khair u must have an idea what halat it has everyday 🥱 😆
But I am still sorry and I hope from the bottom of my heart that this OS makes it up for that khata. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

tujhe pata hai sue danda kisee kehte hai😡😆

humka ee danda ka baare ma koi jankari ni he
bs itna jaant he ki handsome ke ird gird danda naamak koi cheez naahi aane denge 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup

Yaay! 🥳 Belated B'day wishes, Noodle Khaala!😛😆

U too, Sona! 🤗


DEKHO DEKHO MOO MEIN BAAT U DONT GIVE.😡 Last year U warned NOT to do anything so I did not 😭. But then how can I stay PASSIVE 🤔 ITS YOUR BDAY and sona dee's too ! HOW CAN I SIT WITHOUT DOING ANYTHING 😡. Though it took me so much of time 🤢 because Muse uncle chale gaye 😡 😭 And you must know who all have all of my attention grabbed these days 😉 😆 ek janab ab toh saal mein do baar mauka comes and rest ab se retirement tak all the year around😭 . kya kare 😭 bolo 😭



Waise, I already told U...but I didn't tell U enough.

Ofc HOW CAN U EVEN GET ENOUGH OF MY AWESOMENESS 😎

First of all, this was a dear scenario for both of us...Asad reconciling with his dad. ❤️...Mending walls! 😳

Mending walls. By Robert Frost. Good fences make Good neighbors 😉 😆
Original plot mein I planned to keep it till Wajid. But when I wrote the Dilu part it seemed khaali khaali suna suna also Do Pal Ruka kahin bajj raha tha. So added that part. Utna acha nahi aya jitna ki I thought it would turn out to be. 😕

Bachhe...Told by Wajid and then Asad and then Zoya. Asad becomes a father figure as always...that was the essence of his character. So even after he has mock- fought with his father and told him to get well soon because he is tired managing both the companies...bachhe phir bhi bachhe rahe..Only Zoya got promoted.😉😆


I always felt the need of Zoya growing up. But she has NOT been promoted. Isnt she Asad's BAYBEE 😉 😆
I felt there was a need of Asad's mock-fights and comments because his character was vindictive. Even if he forgave he would rub salt on wounds, in a jovial manner. 😛

It is always a pleasure to read tracks from the original show...you really brought the memories alive! 👏

I will be honest, I surprised myself. 😆 Few days ago i felt that the characters that lived in my heart had rusted but when I started writing this I realized that they are still living. only dormant mode pe hai 😆

That is the best gift of all...So, Thank U! 🤗


FINALLY A HUGE COMMENT FROM MOMMA 🤗 I am a sucker for these LONG LONG LONG COMMENTS U know? How will U know even? 😕 I am toh STRAY KITTEN 😡 😭

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