AsYa OS (KaBhi) - Mending Walls

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Hello all. 😎


This OS is dedicated to two persons whom I immensely love and adore for their JANAM-wala-DAY (s) which will again come next year. 😆



This OS is really took me a lot of time to write, because I got distracted every time I sat to type. 😆


I hope U guys especially Noddle Mama (chicksoup) & Sona Dee (sona_naksh) [<WISH THEM BELATED BIRTHDAY 😡] like it. 😃


Having said all that I wanted I'd add that I am going to be EXTREMELY glad if I receive more chocolate cakes and candies [LIKES + COMMENTS] than joote ande and tamaters. BE KIND 😡 OR ELSE I WILL STOP WRITING 😡 YES IT IS A THREAT 😡 SERIOUS WALA 😡





Disclaimer : This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited. 4Lions own the Original Characters.




For More Works of Fictions Do Have A Look At My Index 😳





p.s. gifs taken from Google. Credit to the respective owners.







p.s. THANKIE PET JANNAT for helping me with the URDU DICTION 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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THIS IS THE BEST THING I HAVE READ IN AGES!
OK so it was worth the time u took to pen it down...

Finally dil rashid in the same room 😆


Edited by Gulaabo - 9 years ago
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Handsome
Un-handsomizing!

The starting was intense...poor asad! He's always so taut worrying about his family

Wajid ka part kinna accha tha...felt awesome reading it

Then asad's convo with his parents... That is the soul of this os n as usual u have nailed it!

Then the change from intense to funny coz ms farooqui entered...asya's convo was endearing

I wish I could keep on Reading but every good thing ends n this too ended

But yes jaldi se naya likho!

Edited by Gulaabo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mera Mann kehne lagaaa
Misshumpty ab os karegiii
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res :)
Hello Ankie 😊
It was a wonderful story of asya .👏
I so wanted to see the reunion of asad n raashid in the show and also the transformation in asad's character in siddiqui mansion .but I guess we were not lucky with that.😭
But your os brought me back to the good old days,asya's cute nok-jhok,asad's compassion for his loved ones. Everything is so beautifully written. It brought a huge smile on my face .I so wished this to happen in the show .
Very well done Ankie.👍🏼
thank u.
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FINALLYY!! 😡 Loved Asad's&Wajid's/Asad's&Rashid's convo! Asad n Zoya were as usual as adorable and cute as they could be❤️ (Imagining my HC to be😃❤️)

A BIG 👍🏼
P.S. Welkiii🤗😉

Edited by JannatKhan780 - 9 years ago
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Awesomely beautiful.I guess this says it all dear..

Loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful One-Shot..Loved It...
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Ankieee! 😳 I absolutely loved it!!! Beautifully written one shot!! 😊

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