AsYa OS (KaBhi) - Mending Walls - Page 10

Asad's character is so well written...

Luvd it...

This comment is to apologize for the huge delay! I'm going to read it and enjoy it!

Kill me later!

Love ya!

XOXOXOX

You miss me?

Anyhoo! I loved this OS! Mending Walls was the perfect title for this. I had mixed emotions reading this!

At first, I was very confused. Everything started off very gloomy and began to wonder whether he was lonely in the big bad mansion! But as I continued to read, it started falling into place. His conversation with Wajid made me laugh, this is the grumpy Asad that we know and love! He seemed very bitter but that I started understanding why he was the way he was. If that makes sense.

He was always this responsible son, who always cared about others before himself. I got emotional when he entered his mother's room and the way he sat there watching his parents. Almost shed a tear when Asad- Rashid talked. Oh my days. You wrote that part wonderfully, I could feel the tension, the emotions, Asad's hesitation, Rashid's longing for his son. It gave me goosebumps! At first I was taken aback when he ordered the doctor's appointment at him, I was like waitup what just happened, did he just scold his ill father? But then I read it again, and I understood their relationship and Asad's way of showing him love. Their whole conversation was beautiful! I loved that bit a lot! You nailed it!

FYI, I thought they actually had kids! LOOOL! Asad's OCD, I love that trait about our sexy guy! It never fails to make me laugh! As soon as he entered the room, I can practically feel him cringing. Asad cleaning and then muttering Zoya's trademark lines! What gets better than that? I love the transition from both of the scenes, from intense to you making us laugh to feeling gooey! The moment between the lovebirds were too cute for words. They are not married yet, I thought they were! Either way, you did a great job! I love the way she cares for him. Asad is the perfect son, brother and fiancee. I love the way you depicted his character.

And with that, I just want to say another awesome OS from you! When is the next one coming!!!!!!

I love it! I am not going to repeat what you already know! You're too good at this stuff. Sorry for reading this so late!

MUCH LOVE

XOXOXOX

Was smiling throughout whike reading .

Missed reading about asad and zoya and realised it just while reading this one.

Sorry for the late comment ...logged i after months

Asad and Zoya treating Ayaan and Humeira as children.. was cute..His talk with Rashid was also good... 😊

Keep writing.. Take care !!