AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 60

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Posted: 9 years ago
R
Unres
So had miss this
Had my son reserving my spots
So now asad was t successful in getting zoya he is pissed
He is not talking to her and he is snapping at her
Aww so right his fav toy got taken away
So love the girls bonding zoya can have some girls time now
Love maya note so true
Khushi is too much and Anjali had me cracking up
Great advice by priya definely be ur self
Don't try to be something u r not
If he is for u he will be urs if not move on
So zoya is the big V word
Omg the girls couldn't believe
After all she was the parking queen
So how come 😆
So see where zoya takes this
Edited by anopama - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima30

Wow...
Well I'm glad Zoya spoke up...
but I hope they get together soon...



Thanks Fatima 😊
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

So now I suppose that AsY separation is on the way... I really want zoya to leave RV n I m expecting a little leap...I dnt knw why a leap but lets see... and yeah I loved zoya's decision...

Nice update pia...😊



No dear there is no separation...at least not right now ...
Where will Zoya go? She doesn't have any place to go
Glad u liked this chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago



Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

<font color="#000066" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I think it's one of the best chapter of this story. It was beautiful as much as it was painful to read.</font>


<font color="#000066" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Zoya has lost a lot as she said, and internally, she wished to live with Asad a good life, but because of her hard life, she didn't want to fight for someone who only spent his life running and being selfish. Both of them are selfish but Asad was more. I must say I didn't like Asad, he maybe helped her and gave her a good life, but I can't stop myself from thinking that he did for one reason, this strong attraction that he had for her and for all the mystery that surrounded her.</font>

<font color="#000066" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">HE though that like any girl, she will melt for him, men and their ego !!!!</font>

<font color="#000066" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">In this chapter, Zoya was strong enough to stand for what she really needs but not for what she wants, him.</font>
<font color="#000066" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I just hope she will leave him and go away from him, he needs a lesson and what better that Zoya's pass😈. But I feel that he will hurt by flirting with other girls, telling what she lost. Sadistic man or not? Let's see what will happen in the next chapter.</font>

<font color="#000066" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">She is hurt and I felt for her. He was arrogant enough to know that she was attracted to him but glad that she shut him up but in the same time, she broke her heart.</font>

<font color="#000066" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I really want to see how Asad will release that he did wrong. But in the same time, he was honest enough for not giving her any false promise. He is honest with her and she was with him. This is so conflicting for me, but because I am a girl, I preferred to stand by her side.😃</font>

<font color="#000066" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Hope you will update the story soon, it's really a good choice again.</font>



Wow! What an amazing comment...you just made my hectic day so bright 😃
Glad to know you are liking this story
I know as being girl we can feel Zoya's pain more...but I do sympathize with aasad as well.
He must have gone through some hell to that has made him this way:(

Both are really open about what they want and that's the best part about it
Things will change from ch 13. 😊
I hope to read your feedback again sometime soon :)
Already updated ch 12...enjoy reading it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Hey Pia (If I'm not wrong)

Just read this story in a go.
And now it has me captivated to its wondersome and I'm hooked to every single word of yours. I am dying, literally dying to read more. Please update the next part soon. Soonish!
Anee



Thanks Anee for such a lovely comment
Glad u r enjoying reading this story
I pretty much update daily...hope to read your feedback again :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhlgirl

Hry...pls update chapter 12...can't get off bed without my morning dose...



Ha ha ok just updated now...enjoy 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part dear
really loved it
thanq
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chap
I like d girls talk esp wen khushi n anjali were speaking in d background on phone lol
Priyas advise is right she should be her selfi if asad loved her he will respect her choices
I want to know whats going on asads mind now
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Posted: 9 years ago
I didn't even realize the chapter was coming to an end already. And I was like NO!!!!
It's so beautiful that you would want to keep reading and never stop.
Misson win Asad's heart and be his special someone. Aww Zoya, you already are one.
Are they friends now? The girls? I hope so. She needs some female figures in her life.
24 hours...can I fast forward your clock? lol

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