AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 61

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Posted: 9 years ago
Very Good and Interesting part Pia..👏
Atleast I was expecting this behavior from Asad..😆..and Priya said it rightly that Asad is that little boy who have been denied toy🤣
Zoya really need a clear mindset to think about what next she has to do about this thing with Asad..
Well Written part..⭐️
Continue soonish.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

I think it's one of the best chapter of this story. It was beautiful as much as it was painful to read.


Zoya has lost a lot as she said, and internally, she wished to live with Asad a good life, but because of her hard life, she didn't want to fight for someone who only spent his life running and being selfish. Both of them are selfish but Asad was more. I must say I didn't like Asad, he maybe helped her and gave her a good life, but I can't stop myself from thinking that he did for one reason, this strong attraction that he had for her and for all the mystery that surrounded her.

HE though that like any girl, she will melt for him, men and their ego !!!!

In this chapter, Zoya was strong enough to stand for what she really needs but not for what she wants, him.
I just hope she will leave him and go away from him, he needs a lesson and what better that Zoya's pass 😈. But I feel that he will hurt by flirting with other girls, telling what she lost. Sadistic man or not? Let's see what will happen in the next chapter.

She is hurt and I felt for her. He was arrogant enough to know that she was attracted to him but glad that she shut him up but in the same time, she broke her heart.

I really want to see how Asad will release that he did wrong. But in the same time, he was honest enough for not giving her any false promise. He is honest with her and she was with him. This is so conflicting for me, but because I am a girl, I preferred to stand by her side. 😃

Hope you will update the story soon, it's really a good choice again.

I also Agree with you on this theory of yours Rada...being a BOY 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice part
loved it
girls talk was good
zoya should follow priya's advice and be herself
and be strong in her decision
wonder when asad will realise the importance of
commitment and be with zoya
waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Asad was ignoring her & she didn't like it. She shared her thoughts with priya khushi & anjali. Finally got a suggestion which she needed. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really nice part...
The distant Asad 😆 as if his fav toy was taken away from him.
Loved the girls conversations and khushi lol...

Waiting to read more now...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update pai 👍🏼
Asad behaving differently with her 😔
Love girls conversation
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update as always .
loved it..
zoya was in a mess.. she so badly wanted to talk to someone..
priya finally helped her..
excited to read next update. .:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey there again Pia🤗
I m proud of myself now that I m being regular wid this 1😆
so another amazing updt it was
Zoe thought Asad will kick her out now😆
but he didn't after all he has fallen hard 4 her😉
but he's being angry & pissed obviously like a spoilt child😆
I Loved Zoe's scene wid d girls it was so entertaining
there reaction's on Asya's equation were really funny 😆
specially Khushi I m sure she must b thinking how she got d players eyes while she can't😆
& I love Priya here 4 d awesome advice she gave btw that scene was also lovely when she & Zoe were talking on phone...I m just thinking is she being nice on her own or wid what relation she shares wid Asad
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Rehaan was just playing along with their stupidities until Asad told about the marriage. That's when he left in anger.

Zoya pretty much understood the last line of Asad. I think the reader's got confused. Both understood they want different things. Asad is not ready for forever. That's when Zoya said then it's nothing.
Basically in a way this was the end for them.

Glad to know you enjoyed reading this chapter 🤗

Oh ok this Rehaan guy na really confused us😆

Yeah right even I got that but d way he said it mayb that was confusing😳😆
Waise 1st I thought during d make out Asad will get 2 see her scars & he will leave her which will break her & steel her resolve that she has nothing 2 do wid him he-shit as she fondly call him😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting..
Asad is giving cold shoulder to Zoya..
Loved how Khushi told that its because his favorite toy had been snatched...
Loved the whole convo of girls..
Continue soon...😊

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