AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 58

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

I thought asad zoya and rehan were being threesome...their meeting was so funny
Asya show clear passion
Asad needs to realize that he would need zoya forever



Well, I am sure one day he is going to realize what he feels for Zoya
Glad u liked this update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786

Nice chap
I loved the kissing n romantic part but zoya backed off good asad wants one night stand n zoya wants a future
Wen will he get to know of the scars



There is still some time before he gets to see the scars
Glad u liked this update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Asad scene with Zoya & Rehan was nice. He was burning with jealousy. She want a relationship & asad didn't want it. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm



Ha ha yeah he was burning in jealousy but still doesn't realizes his feelings
Glad u liked this chapter
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

interesting part

asya and rehaan scene was nice
finally zoya realised it is not rehaan for her
good zoya was strong and wanted commitment
wonder what will happen now
thanks for the pm



Yes, I agree with you. It's good Zoya backed out.
Glad u liked this chapter
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

U can't stop here 😔
Awesome update
Continue soon



Aww will update soon :)
Glad u liked this chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kadia717

heya
a very big sry 4 nt rlying in any of ur update...my exams are near..so i m nt getting time to read ur story..i egarly want to ..but cant...so after 16dec, i'll read ur all parts...

i m commenting right now to say a very big thank you for pm me eveyday even i m nt rlying..so thank you so much dear..u r really sweet ...lv u



Hey thanks for informing

Good luck with your exams 👍🏼

Hope to hear from you soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Thanx for pm...
Do continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Nice part.

They kiss finally..good...
But still they are still there...
I'm glad Zoya got back to her senses..



Hey Tehs, thanks for reading and commenting
Yup they are still there...want different things in life
Let's see what happens :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Hugs Pia🤗

I m loving this what a superb part😃

Yeah it left me confused wid Asad's last comnt 😆

but otherwise it was amazing 2 read

I personally loved d confrontation in 1st half😆

there make out undoubtedly was hot

but 4 me d 1st half did beat d making out 1😆

so Zoe in d end realised where its heading & stopped

Asad would b disappointing but wid his last comnt I think he's thinking about what other girls think that they want 2 b more wid him not just a night but Zoe want 4ever.

This is a double meaning dialogue I guess which Zoe meant in other way & Asad took in another

But Rehan's part I m still thinking why was he so interested when Asad told d topic& than discouraging at d same time when Zoe was touching him😆

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<em>4 last reply on my comnt I m happy u didn't mind me saying I din't liked d updt that's really kind of u🤗Love ya 4 being so sweet & understanding😃



Rehaan was just playing along with their stupidities until Asad told about the marriage. That's when he left in anger.

Zoya pretty much understood the last line of Asad. I think the reader's got confused. Both understood they want different things. Asad is not ready for forever. That's when Zoya said then it's nothing.
Basically in a way this was the end for them.

Glad to know you enjoyed reading this chapter 🤗

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