AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 62

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Posted: 9 years ago
So, what to say. Ok, I have to admit, I maybe reacted quickly by saying that Zoya should leave this house and Asad. I reacted emotionally 😆. A girl will run but not a woman. She didn't do anything wrong and he didn't do anything wrong, both of them stayed on their opinion which pushed them apart. Like I used to say, love and attraction were not enough for life commitment.
And in the same time, Asad proved me wrong, he still care for her and he didn't save her from her misery just to have some favor from her (even if a handsome guy save you, you will feel debt to him).

A typical girly chapter : gossip and gossip. It was really funny to see three different personalities fighting their inner voice to help her or not. At the end, Priya's advice was the best to give, if he liked her for what she was, she should not change at all. And I can't agree more, if he is worth, he will come back and she didn't need to fight for someone who will only make feel low.

Anyway, if I have to think logicaly ( which I don't have at all).

Zoya want Asad + future= forever [infinity]
Asad wants Zoya - future= short time [ days]
Zoya has feelings = known
Asad and feeling = unknow

So the equation will be :

y=AsadX + Zoya with y correspond to the future and x to Asad's feelings

Am I make sense to you? If it's not, then it's good 😆

Lovely chapter and you said that chapter 13 everything will change, is he going to see her scars or I imagine that Asad will be in trouble and Zoya will stand by his side.

And for her scars, was she beaten by her father or did some guys took revenge from her?

Hope to read the next soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Now zoya has a gang to help her win asad
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: blueberry02

Awesome part dear
really loved it
thanq




Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786

Nice chap
I like d girls talk esp wen khushi n anjali were speaking in d background on phone lol
Priyas advise is right she should be her selfi if asad loved her he will respect her choices
I want to know whats going on asads mind now



Thank you for reading
Yeah the girly talk was really funny 😆
Asad's POV in the next chapter:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

I didn't even realize the chapter was coming to an end already. And I was like NO!!!!

It's so beautiful that you would want to keep reading and never stop.
Misson win Asad's heart and be his special someone. Aww Zoya, you already are one.
Are they friends now? The girls? I hope so. She needs some female figures in her life.
24 hours...can I fast forward your clock? lol



Yeah all the girls are her friends now 😊
Their gossip session was really funny 😆
Next chapter is really long and very interesting 😛
The wait will be worth :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

<font color="#0066ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Very Good and Interesting part Pia..👏</font>

<font color="#0066ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Atleast I was expecting this behavior from Asad..😆..and Priya said it rightly that Asad is that little boy who have been denied toy🤣</font>

<font color="#0066ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Zoya really need a clear mindset to think about what next she has to do about this thing with Asad..</font>

<font color="#0066ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Well Written part..⭐️</font>

<font color="#0066ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Continue soonish.😃</font>



Thanks for reading and comnenting Mayur 😊
Glad the girls were able to help her and now she has made friends with them :)
Let's see what will Zoya do now? 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

nice part

loved it
girls talk was good
zoya should follow priya's advice and be herself
and be strong in her decision
wonder when asad will realise the importance of
commitment and be with zoya
waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm



Thanks dear for reading and commenting
Glad you liked this chapter
Yes, Zoya should follow Priya's advise.
My poor Asad though...he is not a bad guy
You'll know that in the next chapter:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
well with the sceming heads put together will they bring the lion down ..that too for Zoya...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Asad was ignoring her & she didn't like it. She shared her thoughts with priya khushi & anjali. Finally got a suggestion which she needed. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm



Thanks dear 😊
I am so glad u liked it
Yes, she finally has done friends to talk to :)

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