AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 54

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Posted: 9 years ago


Thank you 😊
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Thanks Amina 😊
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

It is going so interesting with every update..
I'm loving it.!
I think asad has some clever idea in his mind to get zoya forget rehaan...
he so wants zoya.. zoya wants commitment on the other hand..
looking forward to the next update. .:)
Awesome. .! :)



Yeah Asad does have some clever idea. He knows his friend better than Zoya. That's why he said "you think Rehaan is marriage kind" 😆
Let's see what happens ...glad u liked this chapter :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Pia

Hugs so u r back & I m happy🤗

& moore than that I m happy that I m succeeding in being consistent wid this 1😆

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<em>coming 2 updt i'll b honest I found it not upto d mark😳

see u spoiled us na now we don't accept thanda updt😆

Nothing much happened Asad showed wid food

Zoe's favrt Bacon & she happily relished that

Asad planed 2 seduce her in which he failed

& in d end took her hand 2 take him 2 Rehan whom she want 2 have a family wid only that's what her mind says😆

Past was not much revealed but we got a hint that after he noticed Zoe actually desires him but just pretends that she not; & this big news or realisation made him determined 2 get her.

Interestingstage 4 comingtwists has been set now lets see what happens now😉



A big hug back to you Jas 🤗

Yeah I know this chapter didn't have much masala since everyone had high hopes to read about nude Asad 😆 but what to do...I have to follow the story per the book.

This story has 28 chapters and there will be lot of twists and turns along the way...some chapters will be just a build up for the following one.

I am sure you'll find the next chapter more entertaining 😃
Edited by iluvasya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: noesha

"Come here" he insisted " Please Zoya"

"Let my body be your canvas and your lips the brush."

OMG girl I nearly fainted.

Loved it! Cant wait to see what happens next.




Thanks Noesha 😃
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Oh my poor lovers!

They both have what the other needs yet they want to involve random people and complicate stuff! Why?

How could such a tempting evening go so wrong?

Sigh...

Eagerly waiting to know how things go on...

Update real soon!



Thank you
Glad u liked it
I know things always complicates when a third person gets involved 😕
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva



Completely respecting his first girlfriend who died unfortunately, I still feel Rehan too deserves his happily ever after!

Really wish that all the three bachelors are well settled by the end...




Rehaan does get his share of happiness but that's a separate book altogether. Later I will the name of you wish to read and wants to know what happens with him 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima30

Brilliant update
Love Zoya...she's honest about what she wants

Looking forward to this conversation with Rehan



Thanks Fatima
Glad u liked it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

wow wow pai so lovely update❤️

Like Asya conversation☺️
and how asad thing about zoya
now u can't stop there yaar continue soon😳



Thanks Shailu 😊
Glad u liked it

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