AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 55

Originally posted by: -SilverSparkle-

Finally caught up with the first eight chapters, highly captivating, particularly since Asad's profound unidentified realization.

Hey, good to hear from you 😃
Glad to know you are enjoying reading this story

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting update...

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: ksen

amazing part

well written

asya talk was interesting

good zoya was strong

made clear about her intentions

asad dragging zoya to rehaan

was interesting twist

curious to read the next chapter

thanks for the pm

Thanks dear for the lovely comment:)
Glad u liked it
Next part is definitely more entertaining 😃

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Omg that was so hot
Zoya is clearly apprehensive and asad uncontrolable...
Who is going to win? ????

Yup let's see who will give up first???
Nect chapter is good 😊

Originally posted by: velvetrose

read all the parts

the story is getting interesting

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Glad you enjoying reading this story :)

I expect the next chappy would be fun to read but I really hope that asad doesn't embarras zoya

Unres pg 73

Originally posted by: anopama

Unres pg 73

Will not be available for next 48 hrs

As I have a death in the family so leaving for NY

Dear Anopama, I am so sorry to hear about your loss. Pkease acceot my condolences.

Will miss you a lot here 🤗

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

I expect the next chappy would be fun to read but I really hope that asad doesn't embarras zoya

Updating next part in few minutes...you'll get your answer :)

Originally posted by: anopama

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Unres

Omg it was so hot in the RV it might have caught fire

It was with desire and with anger

They both know they want each other

Asad is like a bomb he is just ticking and time will run out soon

Aww zoya she knows who she wants but she wants the plus more

Love the endearments both used for each other

A little bit of the past of each is shared

Aww love Asad fav memory in the house

And his sarcasm had me cracking up

U think I am too big to fit on the canvas

And zoya got so hot and bothered just painting his features

Want would happen when she actually touch them

So he is taking her to show her Rehan truth

Guess her little bubble will be burst

Thr is if she still had any hopes with Rehan

Waiting for what is next

Thank you so much for this amazing feedback Anopama.
You've been so supportive ever since I starting posting here
I look forward to read your feedback...it gives me encouragement
Love Ya 🤗