AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 37

Awesome update
The very start was so good asads jealousy haaay so cute
Then asya morning convo was fun "show me" lol zoya has scars on her body y I wanna know
Even zoya was jealous by maya
Asad doesn't wanna fall in love too bad but he will no one can help him now lol
Continue soon

Originally posted by: shailu123

Awesome update 👏
Aww asad is so jealous 😆
He is going mad thinking about her 😆
And now zoya is also jealous 🤣
Continue soon 😊

Thanks Shailu
I am glad u liked it 😊

Originally posted by: anopama

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Hope u enjoyed ur thanksgiving

Awww what can I say yum yum

I just keep wanting more

Asad what potential lost

Ur heart u already lost it but u haven't realized

For a man who don't want to fall his heart break and melted so many times for her

I think u read my mind I planned on letting u know Asad will explode soon if he don't get zoya

And it was mention in this chapter

Also u do a lot of edits as I mentioned last abt the endearment Asad calls her (or was it part of the original book)

And what it will be next

We r onto thornbush as sweetheart and honey didn't fit her

Wonder what will will be the lasting one

Aww he shared a bit of his past to get her some of hers

So she is scarred front and back was it fire or acid

My food ,her fridge ,our stuff ,together ...nice Asad a future😉

Jealousy jealousy jealousy

So so much of it

The Rehan scene was so good had me rofl Asad could have started a fight

Love how he dismissed Rehan and the new company policy

Wonder it it withholds for him too but he only said flirting not anything more😳

Zoya flirts and she shots daggers at her

Then men together the one she wants to want and the one she shouldn't want

She wants the one she shouldn't want in her bed though she is not seeing no one else but him

Her jealousy hehe it is so hard for they each to believe the other is jealous

He wants to rush to her but he wants to run away too

Asad make up ur mind soon

The two of them will be morphing to each other no one in between

Wonder how long it would take them

Waiting

Hi Anopama,

I had a great time last night...lots of yummy food 😛
I ended up doing some shopping too 😆

You know for this book I'm doing lots of editing. This book is a part of a series and this is the 3rd one...so lot of things doesn't even make sense but I'm trying my best to make it more suitable for AsYa
😊

The scars on her body has come from a fire. 😭 The scars reminds me of asYa scene from QH
Remember when She showed it to Asad and the background score...oh my what a lovely scene...I just have watched it 50 times 😊

Glad u liked the chapter overall. Your comment always brings a smile on my face 😃
Will update at regular time today :)

Originally posted by: fatima30

Silly silly Asad...
He won't be able to date others now for sure...so he should stop trying lol
I'm happy Asad has given Zoya her own space...he's a real gem!

How will they fight this attraction?
Looking forward to reading on

Thanks Fatima for this lovely comnent :)
Yes it will be hard for them to fight this attraction but they are sticking to it for now
Will update soon

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

Nice make asad fall in lov 1st

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Jealousy on both side. First asad & then Zoya. Curious to know what happened next as asad left with maya. Like their eyelock when he want to leave maya & be on Zoya side. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Thank you 😃
I am so glad u liked it

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Thank you

Originally posted by: cutie15

Ahaan an early update. .:)
Thank you..:)
Happy Thanksgiving to you as well..!

Coming to the update it was superb. .
asad and zoya do have sparks between them..
they both are falking for each other..
the jealousy factor proves it..
I'm so excited for the next update. .:)

Thank you 😊
So glad u liked it
Yeah I posted this chapter earlier than my regular time...I was going out for thanksgiving dinner and didn't want to leave you guys without an update 😃

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Wow...an early update

I was surprised and with a wide smile I red it...oh God it was worth reading wd a smile...I loved it..

Do Update soon plz😛

Thank you 😊
So glad u liked it

Originally posted by: MayurChan

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">HAPPY THANKS GIVING DAY TO YOU TOO Pia..🥳😃</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">The Update was Wonderful , Well written and very very Good...👏⭐️</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">The story is moving at the right pace...👍🏼</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">And in a way Asad's real character is coming out slowly slowly...like how he is also a considerate and a caring man behind that ONE NIGHT STAND KING tag😆and now with Zoya being around him he will change for good...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS">Zoya is very good at flirting I must say...she is a bookworm matlab itne aache se usne uss book ko follow kiya and Rehan se baat karne ki koshish ki,...😉😆</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I see Flames are burning on both the sides and both were jealous today...hahahaha and the funny part was Rehan joining the drill...🤪</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Very Good part...ending was grim and interesting...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Continue soonish😃</font>

Thanks Mayur for this wonderful and amaxing comment 😃
You are right Asad's real character is showing...he wants to show everyone that he is not a good guy but Zoya is bringing out the real Asad out...so caring, helping and loving 😳

I told you their jealousy scenes will be hilarious
Both are idiots 😆

Will update soon :)