AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 35

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Happy Thanksgiving to you too.
Yeah we do celebrate...will be having big thanksgiving dinner tonight followed by black Friday shopping 😃
How about you? Do you celebrate?
I will be updating early today...maybe like in an hour since I'll be busy for rest of the day. 😃

Coming back to your comment...as usual you are best at it
Rehaan won't be coming between AsYa neither he'll be helping them to become one
AsYa will do all by themselves 😆
Both are idiots especially Asad. He feels he's not good enough for her
Zoya seeing his one night stand reputation is scared to involve herself with him
She wants stability...can't blame her
Yes, one terrible incident changed her for a better person 😕
Last scene was really funny 😆
Will update real soon :)


Thanks for the appreciation
I am over the top at times
Thanksgiving for me is in October
My sis was begging me to go to NY but I am leaving for Florida next week so didn't
So sad I am missing the Black Friday sale
But now we r doing it here too so get some really good deals

Looking forward for more of this amazing story
Can say u do choose some awesome books to read
Glad abt the early update
As I will also be heading out to take advantage of the sale whic is starting today here
Enjoy ur dinner
And I am very thankful fo u and ur stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hope u enjoyed ur thanksgiving

Awww what can I say yum yum
I just keep wanting more
Asad what potential lost
Ur heart u already lost it but u haven't realized
For a man who don't want to fall his heart break and melted so many times for her
I think u read my mind I planned on letting u know Asad will explode soon if he don't get zoya
And it was mention in this chapter
Also u do a lot of edits as I mentioned last abt the endearment Asad calls her (or was it part of the original book)
And what it will be next
We r onto thornbush as sweetheart and honey didn't fit her
Wonder what will will be the lasting one
Aww he shared a bit of his past to get her some of hers
So she is scarred front and back was it fire or acid
My food ,her fridge ,our stuff ,together ...nice Asad a future 😉
Jealousy jealousy jealousy
So so much of it
The Rehan scene was so good had me rofl Asad could have started a fight
Love how he dismissed Rehan and the new company policy
Wonder it it withholds for him too but he only said flirting not anything more 😳
Zoya flirts and she shots daggers at her
Then men together the one she wants to want and the one she shouldn't want
She wants the one she shouldn't want in her bed though she is not seeing no one else but him
Her jealousy hehe it is so hard for they each to believe the other is jealous
He wants to rush to her but he wants to run away too
Asad make up ur mind soon
The two of them will be morphing to each other no one in between
Wonder how long it would take them
Waiting

Edited by anopama - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

Am first for the first time



Ha ha you are so cute 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama



Thanks for the appreciation
I am over the top at times
Thanksgiving for me is in October
My sis was begging me to go to NY but I am leaving for Florida next week so didn't
So sad I am missing the Black Friday sale
But now we r doing it here too so get some really good deals

Looking forward for more of this amazing story
Can say u do choose some awesome books to read
Glad abt the early update
As I will also be heading out to take advantage of the sale whic is starting today here
Enjoy ur dinner
And I am very thankful fo u and ur stories



Oh wow! Really thanksgiving for you is in October...that's nice
Enjoy your trip...florida will be fun 😃
I do not like going shopping on Black Friday...it's so damn crowded everywhere 😕
Probably will go later but till then nothing will be left for me to buy 😆

Have fun shopping...will update tomorrow at my regular time...anyways this chapter is really long one :)
And I am thankful to have such a wonderful reader's like you 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Silly silly Asad...
He won't be able to date others now for sure...so he should stop trying lol
I'm happy Asad has given Zoya her own space...he's a real gem!

How will they fight this attraction?
Looking forward to reading on
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



Really 😲
I thought it will be cold and foggy now
How go you spend your days.
I've noticed you have started a new SS...will read and comment soon...probably today 😊

some days ago it's like storm here but now it's all hot 😆
We used to it
OK read when ur free 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice make asad fall in lov 1st
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Jealousy on both side. First asad & then Zoya. Curious to know what happened next as asad left with maya. Like their eyelock when he want to leave maya & be on Zoya side. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ahaan an early update. .:)
Thank you..:)
Happy Thanksgiving to you as well..!

Coming to the update it was superb. .
asad and zoya do have sparks between them..
they both are falking for each other..
the jealousy factor proves it..
I'm so excited for the next update. .:)

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