AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 39

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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

This is getting hotter by each and every word...

Zoya flirts leaving Asad raging mad
Now Asad riles Zoya so much so that she is ready to break her nails on that lady Maya...

This is just so good!

Good to see Asad helping her out but when will he accept that he has fallen for the beautiful girl with sad eyes?

Eagerly awaiting the next update



Thank you
And glad u liked this chapter just as much as I did 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786

Awesome update
The very start was so good asads jealousy haaay so cute
Then asya morning convo was fun "show me" lol zoya has scars on her body y I wanna know
Even zoya was jealous by maya
Asad doesn't wanna fall in love too bad but he will no one can help him now lol
Continue soon



Thank you
So glad u liked this chapter
Both were getting jealous and it was fun to watch then like this
Asad diesn't want to fall in love but he is already in love 😉
Only he has not realized it yet
Will update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

This part really got me engrossed..

I'm loving Zoya the way she is giving confident answers to Asad n not succumbing to the growing attraction...

Loved the RV scene in the morning...

Each and every part was too good.



Awww Tehs, so good to know you liked this part so much
Yes, the morning scene was cute
Especially him calling her by different names and Zoya asking her to repeat his name 😆
I found that part very cute 😳
Wi update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Reading 3 chapters seems a gift after a traumatic exam
Nice story
I love it so much
Guess jealousy will be cupid here



Awww I hope you did well in your exams :)
Glad u r enjoying the story
Yes, jealousy will help them to get closer 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago


I will in the evening (my time) 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvasya



I will in the evening (my time) 😃


Ohhh..so wht's the time there?😕
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover



Ohhh..so wht's the time there?😕



Oh it's around 2 in the afternoon. I'll try to update by 7 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update soon plz
Ur story is amazing
I can't wait to read what will happen next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update

Rehan asad zoya scene was hilarious ...she is not comfortable still trying to flirt with him...and Rehan was like enjoying the situation and yet confused why asad's girl interrogating me?...asad!!!! Man he was all jealous ...so funny...he made a new policy and according to that flirting is not allowed ...good going asad.

Finally zoya is enjoying all the comforts...she woke up to asad ...Thornbush??? What happen to sweetheart and honey asad miya? ???..and he said she is working for him not for company ...he is already so possessive about her...

I loved it when zoya accepted her mistakes. And apologized for that...asad hold her supported her...zoya too is jealous because asad will be spending time with another lady..

Asad is feeling wrong to hold her ...he want to go to zoya but thinks it will not be good for him and her...when he will learn to listen to his heart? ?????

Looking forward to the next chapter ...thank you so much for adding me in your pm list dear...love you

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