AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#351

Wow...an early update

I was surprised and with a wide smile I red it...oh God it was worth reading wd a smile...I loved it..

Do Update soon plz😛

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#352

HAPPY THANKS GIVING DAY TO YOU TOO Pia..🥳😃

The Update was Wonderful , Well written and very very Good...👏⭐️

The story is moving at the right pace...👍🏼

And in a way Asad's real character is coming out slowly slowly...like how he is also a considerate and a caring man behind that ONE NIGHT STAND KING tag😆 and now with Zoya being around him he will change for good...

Zoya is very good at flirting I must say...she is a bookworm matlab itne aache se usne uss book ko follow kiya and Rehan se baat karne ki koshish ki,...😉😆

I see Flames are burning on both the sides and both were jealous today...hahahaha and the funny part was Rehan joining the drill...🤪

Very Good part...ending was grim and interesting...

Continue soonish😃

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 9 years ago

#353

awedome updates...

loved it so much

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: life4me
Awesome

Thanks 😊

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Pia23

@Pia23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: Amina...
Superb👍🏼

Thank you 😃

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#356

The story is definitely getting interesting update after update

And i am just loving it

Jealous asya are always a treat to read

Love bells are surely ringing on asad😆

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Please continue soon 😊

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ksen

@ksen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#357

interesting part

enjoyed reading it

excited for the next part

thanks for the pm

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#358

Hi Pia

Sachi u make our Mornings wonderful😉

this updt was really entertaining 😛

Asad Zoya Rehaan scene was so amusing loved it😆

I know Rehaan will always b a teaser in such scenes cuz all 3 frnds know Asad has a thing 4 Zoe

Zoya's 1st morning at the new room & all d monologues I still feel 4 her it not easy 2 go through it She's really a brave survivor👏

I loved d contrast when during Rehaan Zoe realised Asad is getting jealous & in office wid Maya Asad also felt d same

Both desires so much 2 b wid each other both physically & at heart but r fighting the barriers/shells they drawn around themselves

It was awesome read Pia keep it going

& yes wanna hug 4 d Pms I at times kept disappearing but u always continued sending Pms that was really sweet of u girl🤗

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: iluvasya

Yay! Good to hear from you again Jas 😊
Glad u liked this chapter
I really liked that part too where Zoya imagining hersekf being saved from super Alpha male 😳
She's always imagine herself as dismal in distress 😆
I love this AsYa and their inner thoughts are hilarious 😆
Yeah that scene was heart wrenching when Asad asks her to eat and she gobbles all the good while Asad watches her 😭 😳
Last scene was funny but more funny in the next chapter 😆
Will update soon :)

Sachi I was picturing that scene & it came out so hilarious always as damsel 😆

Totally agree there inner thoughts r more rib crackingly hilarious & I feel amazed wid d writer. She's really talented on 1 side she cracks us & other tears us when we read Zoe's miserable lifestyle.

Absolutely & I hope more such fun scenes will come our way😉