Mine; Always & Forever. An AsYa ff. Chapter 13 updated on pg 86.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Kal karoongi dearest, for sure 😊

okiee aapi 😃time ??😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written!

Thanx 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Missadorable

okiee aapi 😃time ??😛

Kal shaam, jaise hi chance miley ga or pehle agar i finish editting the part sooner.

By the wai, i loveee ur siggie and your avi 😉😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Interesting update

Thanx 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: -Prinky-
Such a wonderful read Nims
So beautifully penned...
Rahul is such a great friend...loved their bonding...
AsYa...their feeling...emotions...after meeting over years...so aptly portrayed...
each scene was just like I m watching...seems so real...
I am so curious to know about the past...why she is hurt..??
continue soon plz...

Hi Dear,

Im so happy you found the chap interesting. Thank you for ur kind words.

Updating kal, 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: anopama
Wow what an update
Loved it
Seems to be some serious issue between Asad
He seems to not know but she remembering his words halted her steps
So I can see Rahul will be playing the jealousy factor for Asad
Hope is is a true friend to zoya and no hoping for more
I know Asad will not like their closeness
So Inaya is playing the safe sort of Cupid for Asya
love radil they consider her their daughter so don't they have more kids only Asad
So Asad consider zoya his sunshine hope she keeps shining for him
Aww love the group hug with the he friends
But we know it was Rahul who enter
Continue soon

Hi Dear,

Thankss 😃 so happy u liked the update.

Rahul will play the role of a best friend or more, a little wait will unveil that question.

Asad is the only child here.

Love

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Nim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
lovedbl the update...

Thank u :)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: ASYAaishu
Awesome dear...love it...I felt truly emotional..I'm crazy over emotional stories,...
Plz continue soon...

Thank u Dear. 😊

Will post soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: jas91

Huggies Nimmi🤗

& thanks 4 letting me call u Nimmi 😳

Hope u have been well😃

U came back so soon awe 😛

I loved d 2nd part & u got me so hooked😆

It ended so quickly I wanted 2 read more pouts

Loved Rahul & Zoe's scene in d start he's more of a family member I mean not only he had been Zoe's support he's close 2 her family too d way u wrote him talking wid Innaya's Fianc Hassan

awe Dillu Rashid meeting wid Zoe was very heart warming they take her as their daughter right

Nimmi I m little confused about family tree what about Zoe's family members & there r some new names too so plz 1 baar clear bta do sabke mummy papa aur Bhai behan ke naam lol

but d highlight of d updt was Asya ki pehli official meeting oh that feels😛

Both admired each other we can feel d love d passion d agony d pain both wanted 2 hug but controlled themselves...I m so so dying 2 know what's d past story what Asad said & if he's at fault why he wants Zoe 2 give him answers 😕😆

Innaya & Asad shared nice bond & he asked her 2 bring Zoe 4 a reunion hehe

Last scene was very lovely & u ended on cliffy wid entry of Rahul I guess

Nims plz Rahul Zoe ka angle mat dena pretty plz

& u r doing a great job wid d new story I m loving it...I m hooked excited & what not 4 story 2 unfold😛