Mine; Always & Forever. An AsYa ff. Chapter 13 updated on pg 86.

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Yayy
what an awesome update nims 🤗
Itni achi update ke niche spot chaiye tha mujhe *pout*
bt ye abi ka bacha mujhse pehle aa tapka !pichli bar bhi dusre pg pe spot mila meko 😭 by the way mera pichla comment ka review kidhar he?
Let me knw pg no.
Abhi ye update to kitni achi thi asya wali
m loving rahul like how he tease zoya hahaha 😆
even rahul noticed smthng between asya
my heart broke when asad said to rahul that maybe he wasn't worth mentioning oh how my heart goes for asad!
That ice cream wala scene was too good and hahaha zoya being hs lucky charm made asad win 😆
U WROTE IT SO WELL NIMS!
Entertaining bhi thi update and emotional bhi ! I cried with asad when he confronted zoya in her room!
That scene u nailed it! Every emotion came alive ths was so hearty oh good!
So party me hua kya now we're getting sneak peek
continue ths asap nims i can't really wait! Have a test for coming 3 days
mujhe wednesday night update chaiye pls

Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Beautiful update dear

Loved reading it

But not understanding the reason for the distance between asya

Hope the misunderstandings between them get sorted soon

Please continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

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Aashka

@Chillichick

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

What has Asad done to deserve such a treatment?

Why is Zoya so hostile towards him?

Asad must have felt so awkward and uncomfortable when she was talking to everyone but him...

Eagerly awaiting the next one for the answers!

Update soon!

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Wonderful Update Nims..
Well we had a cute ASYA scene also in this and i thought everything was going to get on track slowly...but i was wrong...hahaha
Soo this is all related to a party...which happened 7 yrs back..kya hua hoga. ???
Interesting & Intruguing part..
Continue soonish.

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Interesting Part.😊

The way Asad(KSG) feeling sad for Zoya ignoring him,it was so sad.

Rahul part was so Nice.😊

The Whole Baby Part was so Cute.😳

Asya(KABHI) Part while Playing Cards was so Nice.😊

Asad(KSG) Asked Zoya about Ignoring him,but she said nothing is there,it was so Interesting.😊

Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Res for My Sis, Choco, My sunshine, CBP and all the sweet people I've befriended here.

mera res 😛

unres

thanks a lot for res and pm nim 🤗

update is too good

loved ittt

asad pe itnaaa zulm kyun 😭

i like how zoe unknowingly asad se normal bat karti hai

hope rahul ko samjh aaye

and i'm sure he vl the one who will bring asya together again

when asad tried to sort out and zoya ran without giving him a proper answer

loved that scene a lot

update soon dear

love u

Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#167

I felt so bad for asad.. zoya should clear to him what problem she has with him.. one side she behaves normally and den she's back to square one .
asad is so guilty and wants his zaza back.. hope all the problems solve soon..
awesome update. .:)
Do pm me pls .
thank you..:)

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#168

awesome part

thanx for pm

sorry for late commenting

plz pm me for next part

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Nice update
Both was hurt & I m curious to know the reason what happened 7 years ago. Waiting for story to unfold. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

wow...wonderful update..
curiosity killing me ...
what happened in their lives...waiting to know ...
that ice cream wala scene and lucky charm scene
loved the bond sharing between Rahul and zoya...
but poor asad ...zoya is normally behaving all others except asad.. :(
plzz update next part soon :)