New Asya SS: Heart to the test, Chap7, 28-8-16 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
what have u bring me into Rada😆
its such a painful intense story oh my poor heart😆 Kaise jhelega yeh journey till end
aaj no bak bak siddha comnt😆
part 2
so Asya r married & suffered a big storm which shattered their love nest🥺
Rada u wrote d starting part of their confrontation Brilliantly but I love d 3rd Chapter one's more😉😆
U know what after getting 2 know d reason of accident I wanna strangle this Asad.😡
I mean why d hell he was using phone while driving I hate this cuz this often leads 2 major accidents which causes life lose & major injuries that u suffer 4 life & exactly that happened here. I agree no one can predict or saw future but I was more mad knowing they were happily teasing each other, Zoya scolded him once but than forgot d seriousness of d matter & joined him in d tease, she should have immediately cut d call. One laparwahi (negligence) led to lifelong suffering It might b d other driver's fault but we can't avoid their own fault too.
Khair that's 1 thing & sorry 4 d rant 😳
moving on I loved d whole updt confrontation was wonderful & d flashback part was super wonderful😆. I loved d love they have😃 or still have we can see tabhi they r feeling this pain.😉
btw I noticed 1 thing I thought 2 share ; during d start opening lines u wrote Zoya was so happy & over d moon on winning award that's ok but 1 felt there should b 1 more line added 2 it that she was waiting 2 b back home 2 meet ASad sharing this news wid him & see his reactions cuz as its clear it was him who encouraged her 2 do this movie. SO widout this line I felt her feelings shallow I mean I don't mean d exact word just so cuz any other word is not coming in mind right now toh shallow likh diya😳😆 But I hope u got my point cuz she should feel na that her success is incomplete widout her love her hubby & she should feel like running in his arms 2 share her happiness & say see what u said comes true We did it. 😛OMG how dramatic it sounds na🤣 I know Asad's would have reacted differently than expected but yet she should have but wid Asad's bitter welcum she didn't even tried 2 hug or pass a smile ignoring that😆
Hope I don't make any blunder once again still if u can't get me give me a chance 2 explain Rada b4 jumping 2 conclusion U r my Guruji apni position ki laaj rakhna🤣
PS- btw 1 irrelevant qstn do these actors sachi main kiss each other like real main lol🤣
PSS- Sachi this time I wrote a small reply but than this thing came in my mind so thought 2 point that too😆 Stubborn shameless me🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
part 3
OMG I wanna strangle Asad again😡😆
He's intentionally hurting Zoya cuz he want her 2 think that enough is enough & leave him cuz he thinks she's doesn't deserve him oh god😵
My sweet innocent yet dumb Asad what if it would have happened d other way U would have left Zoya like that 😡
Ok out of my ranting body😆
Rada Excellent updt 😃
Confrontation was Bravo Rada u totally nailed that👏
& yes I loved Zoya just when she slapped Asad TWICE🤣
True he deserved that just 2 push her away said so mean, hurtful, disgusting things any1 would have slapped him
I know his physical inability is slowly killing his zeal 4 life he's bitter, I guess stays at home, doesn't want any1's company & all info about his wife he gets through news & we know how media is; they exaggerate d smallest of things so all these things r killing his positivity he has come 2 see himself as an helpless burden his wife is carrying & only bcuz he has immense love 4 her so he doesn't want her 2 spoil her life wid him. Which is very very sad my heart went out 2 him😭 but yes he needs Zoya his light 2 bring him out of d darkness
but I m happy finally Zoya got 2 know reason behind his bitterness
His deep inflicted pain that is eating him up but why he feels guilty IS it that Zoya is stuck wid him😕 If so he could have accepted Zoya's offer or himself would have given her divorce but he wants her 2 leave him herself make d choice is it. But this can b easy 2 say & hard 2 do as he loves her so much
Zoya tried her best she feels she succeeded but some things have struck hard & deep in ur system only something big can only remove them & I hope Zoya succeeds cuz I love their love story😛
btw I didn't like Ahsan he was drooling at Zoya😡 I m sure Asad would have beaten him if only he was not on wheelchair😆
PS- I know I shouldn't feel this way Rada but I felt Zoya kissing Asad was so funny my stupid mind is finding it funny can u believe that 😆😆
PSS- Its official I can't type short comnts I always fail lol🤣
PSSS- Oh yes I love u guruji🤗
PSSS- Waise Rada did u noticed u always come up wid 1 funny & 1 intense painful story😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
what an update rada...
mind blowing and totally awesome...
just loved it...
first...asad's taunting on her character still being possessive when ahsan drools...(loved his reaction then)
its good..that they yelled and freed themselves from this misery...
This was totally interesting scene...
I was reading it so curiously and seriously...dont have words to explain...
and... what comes after confession was even better...
still being stubborn...asad for her to leave..& zoya...for him to accept her..
the scene of asad banging his legs to table was painful...
his fall...zoya's care... then..their reveletion of true feelings...
beautifully written...
it was intense, sincere as well as hot...what happened in bedroom..
loved the reaction and patience zoya show after he pushed her...
but..at end... she succeed... they succeed... atleast..they are ready to try..
loved it...completely...
keep updating it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
amazing
u know how deeply n lovingly u write
omg
i am astonished
great u n ur parts are
ahhh
i wish i could also be like u
anyways

fabulus
awesome
dasging wala
romantic wala
absolutely cute wala
n most gorgeous wala

thanks for pm
sorry for the late
exams thats y
all the best
cnt soonish dearest
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was so so emotional rada.. 😭
Asad and zoya are going through a tough phase...
but I'm glad that zoya still had hope in her relation and believed in it.. 😊
Way to goo
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Nice update
Asad fear was justified but he can't hurt Zoya for that. He will do the same thing if it's vice versa. Some improvement as he let her heal him. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Spell bound
Such a beautify update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Hello Rada...
just read both the parts...very nice concept it is...!!!
firstly I am so in love with your writing dear...the deepness in your writing...just give the feel of each emotion...So lovely experience it is...& mostly as I read this one & then started to read Lost somewhere...both are so different concepts...& the way you write...just Amazing...!!! I will come on that thread after reading all parts...
So coming to this story...it was so intense...
The way you portrayed Asad's state..the pain...anguish...hats off to you...
flashback scenes were so lovely...
in last update...the confrontation...he said those hurtful things to her...she slapped him...but then I really felt so bad for Asad...his bitterness was justified at some point...
nice to see the way zoya tried to heal him...she had that faith...in their relation...
continue soon...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow
Reading these updates r a test to my heart too
So Asad and zoya has it out
All was put on the table
She slapped him a few times and they argue they fight he insult and she fight back
He wanted tht he didn't want her silence or pity
She beg for a chance a little hope
Their memories r beautiful
Ahsan is a creep Asad has him pin though
Glad she asked for a chance and he give they will work together
They will fight for their happiness
Aww he feels so helpless he has this woman this beauty he can't satisfy
Oh Asad let her do all the work their r some much more to do
Glad they have an understanding now
All seems clear
But he still think she should leave
Continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just awesome rada
I felt pain of Asad Zoya
They stood like two ends
Asad pushes her from life
He through the he can't give justice to their love
Can't able to satisfy Zoya
He hide emotions behind his ego

But hats off to Zoya
She brought him back
In love their is no any importance in physical relationship but it's needed

Very well written
Seems very busy you are writing updates
Miss you so much

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