ASYA OS-LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT - Page 6

Originally posted by: jas91

hi dear

I got ur PM but mistakenly it got deleted & it took time 2 find it on my own that's why I m late😳

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coming 2 d story it was absolutely fantastic😃

I guess its ur 1st writing & if so u did a fab job👏👏

Loved d start of Asad meeting as teens & it was only revealed later that Zoya fell in river bcuz of Asad's frnds only who pushed him resulting in d fall😆

Than their match & Asad sorry part was very nice & sweet

thanthey again met in college & frndship soo turned 2 love & theytied their relation in a beautiful bong of mrg ❤️

& d ending was so nice Zoe is pregnant & they discussed how they fell in love & Asad's dialogue in d end 2 d baby was super cute😳

<em>Hope u keep writing more such wonderful stories😃

thanks a lot for such a beautiful comment
it means a lot to me
and yes it's my first asya story

Originally posted by: fifi1297

Cute os 😉
They r married
Love at first sight 😳
Nicely written 👏
Loved it ⭐️

thank you

Originally posted by: Aahana.

loved the cute os

goodness they are married

loved asad part of story

for him it was love at first sight⭐️

for her it was love eventually

keep writing moreee

thank you so much

Firstly I would like to apologise to you for not commenting sooner...well to be honest I thought I had...! I read your OS almost as soon as you posted it...and I loved it!

It's super cute and sweet...Asya married and expecting a baby are always a delight to read...
You write so beautifully...loved the overprotective AAK who was going to have words with his Ammi and sis for leaving a pregnant Zoya home alone!

I loved how Zoya protected the ladies in her family by justifying their reasons for leaving her...

Please write more...and I will comment sooner for sure! xxx

Originally posted by: fatima30

Firstly I would like to apologise to you for not commenting sooner...well to be honest I thought I had...! I read your OS almost as soon as you posted it...and I loved it!

It's super cute and sweet...Asya married and expecting a baby are always a delight to read...
You write so beautifully...loved the overprotective AAK who was going to have words with his Ammi and sis for leaving a pregnant Zoya home alone!

I loved how Zoya protected the ladies in her family by justifying their reasons for leaving her...

Please write more...and I will comment sooner for sure! xxx

thank you so much for your valuable comment and yes i think that a girl should have a daughter like relationship with her MIL and only the love of the husband is not imp but tge love of in laws also matter a lot that makes the home a beautiful place to live

very cuteee os ankie dii

Originally posted by: nikii11

very cuteee os ankie dii

I had read it before and also had hit like button⭐️

but was had not commented

so I thought I should comment hehe

loved the whole os

starting I thought some separation has taken place coz she was missing him

then I learnt that he was actually had gone to business trip

and zoe was preggy⭐️

loved the flashback scenes of their first meet

so he had pushed her to the river bank

coz of his frnds

he had seen her helping the goat..that was cuteee⭐️😆

and loved badmittion ka khel jismain asad ne cheating ki thi

aank marke😉

later he compromised by giving earings

asad aur gifts ke chakkar qh main bhi yaha bhi

only difference qh main asad had zoe ke earings

here asad gifting her the earings

later dono same college⭐️

and dosti pyaar main badly for zoya❤️

and loved the last part coz secret secret hi raha between honewala baby nd asad🤣⭐️

thank you so much dear this means a lot to me glad you liked it

Hey!! Thnx for the pm 😳
I guess ur name is ankita right??
Okkay the story is really cute 😊



Pulling ur cheeks for this 😆



Their first meeting lol he pushed her into water
Oh they were married when i started reading iti thought it to be sad and then happy 😳

But it was just happy shappy 😃

Hehe Mr. Overprotective ahmad khan 🤣
He always treat her like a baby 😆

Liked it pls write more and r u in my buddy list??? 😲

Originally posted by: -simmi-

Hey!! Thnx for the pm 😳
I guess ur name is ankita right??
Okkay the story is really cute 😊


Pulling ur cheeks for this 😆

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Their first meeting lol he pushed her into water
Oh they were married when i started reading iti thought it to be sad and then happy 😳

But it was just happy shappy 😃

Hehe Mr. Overprotective ahmad khan 🤣
He always treat her like a baby 😆

Liked it pls write more and r u in my buddy list??? 😲

yiu guessed my name right
and glad u liked my story
and i have sent you a buddy req please accept it