ASYA OS-LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed
Hey

Sorry for coming back so late

I re read the OS

And loved it as much as I did the first time, it is a very cute story.

You capture their feelings very well, their journey from meeting to coming together was beautiful

When will you be writing another one would love to read more from you.

thank you so much di
was waiting for your comment
and will surely pm you whenever i will write anything in future

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Joavssk9

@Joavssk9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

best scene was Asad talk to the Baby in the last part. i am not good at words but this is anice and sweet story. :)

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ASYAaishu

@ASYAaishu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Love it..

Feels so realistic...

Bilkul Bhi dramastic si Nahi laga

Enjoyed well...:-)...:-)

Edited by ASYAaishu - 9 years ago

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Linsie
Nice story...
thanks for the pm

glad you liked it

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: iluvasya
It's a really cute OS. 😊
Loved reading it.
Thanks for the PM. Do write more on AsYa 😊

glad you liked it

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Applef
Great story

thank you and glad you liked it

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: ASYAaishu
Love it..
Feels so realistic...
Bilkul Bhi dramastic si Nahi laga
Enjoyed well...:-)...:-)

thank you so much
glad you liked it

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: ASYAaishu
Love it..
Feels so realistic...
Bilkul Bhi dramastic si Nahi laga
Enjoyed well...:-)...:-)

glad you liked it

and it's my fav part too

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Hey aishu... just red it

It was totally amazing👏

Starting scene n badminton scene of AsYa were the cutest😳

i really loved the concept... very nice😊 when r u writing more stories?😉

I will be waiting to read more from you...

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

AWW such a nice way to end! ❤️

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