ASYA OS-LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT - Page 7

Originally posted by: ankiecool

yiu guessed my name right
and glad u liked my story
and i have sent you a buddy req please accept it

request accepted ankie!! 😎

Hey Ankita..
Thanx for the PM..
Well if i am not wrong...the whole plot of this OS was changed...because the first time i have read this it was a TS and with different events...hahahha..
But this one is good...very good indeed..
A cute OS...
AsYa*s journey was well scripted...
I always wonder...QH just completed 3 yrs...and after 3 yrs also Najma is still preparing for her exams and Dilshaad is always at 2 yaa maybe 3 places mostly...
A curing Khala's house , A relative's wedding and at Dargah...hahahhahaha.
Sorry for my Rant..
Liked reading this part.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Ankita..
Thanx for the PM..
Well if i am not wrong...the whole plot of this OS was changed...because the first time i have read this it was a TS and with different events...hahahha..
But this one is good...very good indeed..
A cute OS...
AsYa*s journey was well scripted...
I always wonder...QH just completed 3 yrs...and after 3 yrs also Najma is still preparing for her exams and Dilshaad is always at 2 yaa maybe 3 places mostly...
A curing Khala's house , A relative's wedding and at Dargah...hahahhahaha.
Sorry for my Rant..
Liked reading this part.

yes it was changed because one of my friend found zoya should have reacted a bit more when asad told her that the guy was him so i changed it and kept it as a secret which asad confess in the last part but zoya was asleep so his secret remained a secret and only
and about najma n dilshad well i have written that this story is entirely duff from qh storyline Lol

Hi.Ankita
Nice os.. when I read the first line I thought maybe asya got separated ...but nothing is like that its a cute love story...I loved it how they met and become friends ...that badminton match was nice. Asad gave flying kiss and winked at her...bechari zoya kya karti ...they were in college together ..and friendship turned into love...
Wow asad is such protective husband ...he got angry on dillu and nazma for leaving zoya alone...
then his secret ...zoya slept without listening ...well it will be secret between baby and abbu ahmed khan...

Really a cute os ...is it your first work? ... if you have written anything on asya then pls give the links..I would love to read them...and I think you should try to write more...you are good at it...

Thank you so much for the pm...pls do pm me for your future works too
Sorry for not commenting earlier ...

Originally posted by: soumya.g

Hi.Ankita
Nice os.. when I read the first line I thought maybe asya got separated ...but nothing is like that its a cute love story...I loved it how they met and become friends ...that badminton match was nice. Asad gave flying kiss and winked at her...bechari zoya kya karti ...they were in college together ..and friendship turned into love...
Wow asad is such protective husband ...he got angry on dillu and nazma for leaving zoya alone...
then his secret ...zoya slept without listening ...well it will be secret between baby and abbu ahmed khan...

Really a cute os ...is it your first work? ... if you have written anything on asya then pls give the links..I would love to read them...and I think you should try to write more...you are good at it...

Thank you so much for the pm...pls do pm me for your future works too
Sorry for not commenting earlier ...

thank you so much dear i am glad that u liked it

Originally posted by: -simmi-

request accepted ankie!! 😎

thanks

Nice story...
thanks for the pm

beautiful

It's a really cute OS. 😊
Loved reading it.
Thanks for the PM. Do write more on AsYa 😊

Hey

Sorry for coming back so late

I re read the OS

And loved it as much as I did the first time, it is a very cute story.

You capture their feelings very well, their journey from meeting to coming together was beautiful

When will you be writing another one would love to read more from you.