ASYA OS-LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT

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Sathya

@IamCrazySeven

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

wow it was really awesome OS

loved this naughty AAK 😎

lastly asad's revelation of love at first sight was too cute 😃

and thanks for the pm

i really loved it this one 👍🏼

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: -Sathya7n-
wow it was really awesome OS
loved this naughty AAK😎

lastly asad's revelation of love at first sight was too cute 😃
and thanks for the pm
i really loved it this one👍🏼

thank you so much for your valuable comment
glad u liked it

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Aww the second part was even more cute!

Love at first sight...the story from asad's side was so sweet.

They r married thank god! Initially I thought zoya was crying due to the separation

Keep writing more like this :)

Good job

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Gulaabo
Aww the second part was even more cute!
Love at first sight...the story from asad's side was so sweet.

They r married thank god! Initially I thought zoya was crying due to the separation

Keep writing more like this :)

Good job

glad you liked it and thank you so much for your valuable comment

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: azsumay
Hey buddy
Nice OS
Over protective aak
They are falling in love in college
But why asad thought like love at first sight

Pm me yours other work
Thanks for PM
Sum😊

thank you so much dear for yor valuable comment
well according to zoya she fell for him eventually but for asad it was love at first sight ever since he had seen her on that trip

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Shaila

@raspi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

that was sooo cute stry yrr and tnx fr pm

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Aahana.

@Aahana.

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

loved the cute os

goodness they are married

loved asad part of story

for him it was love at first sight⭐️

for her it was love eventually

keep writing moreee

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fifi1297

@fifi1297

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Cute os 😉
They r married
Love at first sight 😳
Nicely written 👏
Loved it ⭐️

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

res

unres

Finally get the opportunity to unres and I am so sorry for the delay

First, it was really beautiful from the start till the end, and especially the end. At the beginning, I though it was Zoya who fell in love but you suprised me when you mention it was Asad and not Zoya, that was impredictable.

The beginning started smoothly and in the present, we learnt a lot of thing like, she was sad because she was missing him and she was pregnant. I really love how you introduced it so beautifully in the story.

My favorite part was her speech about falling in love, it was so real and indeed, she was aware of her attraction and could differentiate between attraction and love, that was amazing part and especially her definition of love, I could have said the same word also.

But the unexpected was Asad's pov, we learnt that he fell in love in first with her and always want her, he only took time to let her come, and this is the best proof of love, giving space and time to our beloved.

It was really a beautiful piece and I feel that some part could have been develop more but it still good enough to appreciate the story.

PS: I love the last, I guess we will be the witness of his secret too 😆

Edited by radadolcevida - 9 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

hi dear

I got ur PM but mistakenly it got deleted & it took time 2 find it on my own that's why I m late😳

coming 2 d story it was absolutely fantastic😃

I guess its ur 1st writing & if so u did a fab job👏👏

Loved d start of Asad meeting as teens & it was only revealed later that Zoya fell in river bcuz of Asad's frnds only who pushed him resulting in d fall😆

Than their match & Asad sorry part was very nice & sweet

than they again met in college & frndship soo turned 2 love & they tied their relation in a beautiful bong of mrg ❤️

& d ending was so nice Zoe is pregnant & they discussed how they fell in love & Asad's dialogue in d end 2 d baby was super cute😳

Hope u keep writing more such wonderful stories😃