SaHil/JanAah Two Shot: Breaking Free. Part 2 Updated, PG 4. - Page 6

Originally posted by: chicksoup

This is one hot two shot, Prags...😆

Sorry for the late reply.

I am finding myself getting more and more intolerant of Jannat after the show got over, actually...The first part- made me remember all those ugly episodes...along with all the unnecessary off screen drama F32 promoted.🤢

By the time I got to the second part, I was remembering how this story should have gone...would have gone, if Gul didn't drag it unnecessarily.

Enjoyed the way you brought in the scenes from their past... mujhe chhodke mat jao Ahil. ❤️

Though that Sanam was butchered as a character in the show, I loved the twist you gave..Yes, this is how some of us had wanted it...For Jannat to love Ahil, and for Ahil to love Jannat ...as a part of Sanam...

'He cupped her face and brought her in. "Sa...Jannat" He whispered as he corrected himself. Smiling at her he kissed her forehead. "Do you have any idea how happy you make me? Do you even realise what your love for me does to me? You complete me. You make me...ME. I don't care who you are, I don't care which name you carry. I love you! I love you for being you. I love you for the moments you spend with me. I love you for touches we exchange. I love you for the feelings I have when you are with me, I am with you and we are with each other. I love you for your being in my life. I love you for having ME in your life" He whispered breathily.'

I loved this part...This doesn't make just Ahil connect to Jannat, it makes me too. A brilliant piece of writing! 👏 Miss Dhaabewaali and Jallad Jinn come back too...😉😆