SaHil/JanAah Two Shot: Breaking Free. Part 2 Updated, PG 4. - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Awesome update

Really very hot and i surely know how they are😉
Loved reading it
Actually i liked the scenario where jannat just chooses aahil just because she wants to. No scheming, no lies, nothing and i think that's the way it should have been done. But...
Anyways this was really very flawless
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Thank you so much Muskaan! :)

Glad you loved reading it and the scenario too! Yes, they are too hot to handle, for each other 😉😆

Exactly, the freedom in choosing the one whom she loves! Thank you so much again!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: JShukla

this is awesome my dear.

I will come back to comment some more...
there are sooo many things I liked. I read both parts together😉
but right now I wanna go to the heaven( Sahil heaven) and make merry...
seems Qh is messed up again..😆


Juhi! Aww, thank you so much for the comments! Yes, I know how it feels when you read the whole story in one go! 😉 Would be waiting for your "more comments" and the "so many things" you liked😛

Oh! I should have known, " the messier, the merrier" eh? 😉😆

Thank you once again! Miss you guys! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
OOo!! Yes yes!!! 😃
This!! 👏
I'll be back to comment...on my phone right now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sahil333

So I've read and commented yesterday evening and when I posted it I got error from the website..ughh😡...Anyway..😃

Wonderful update..😛

What a really hot romance between JanAah ☺️
Her behavior was more Sanam than Jannat. Taking the lead and being straightforward.

"Thank you..."For choosing me"

She brought his face closer to hers as she rested her forehead against his. Breathing deeply she said closing her eyes "Aahil. What if I don't want to remember? What if I...I...want to love you as, me. would you love...ME? I don't know, if I am your Sanam or not. Sometimes I feel, I AM! When YOU call me. Can you love this...Jannat?" She almost cast her eyes down. She didn't know what she was asking. She felt she is Sanam, but she wanted to be loved as Jannat too. Maybe because she chose him. Her feelings for him were as Jannat.

He was about to say something, but she stopped him midway after a long silence."Aahil. Do we really have to remember? Do I really have to remember? We can remember everything later. But tonight, at this moment, can't we forget everything? Even who we are...?"

How I love the above quotes. ❤️ I can accept that she can't remember their past at the moment and it may never return also. At least she as Jannat has fallen in love with him again. Somewhere within her there is HIS Sanam. And I'm glad that they have accepted that her memories won't return any time soon. It happens in real life too, so no problem with that.

Love the infusion of Jallad Jin...Ms Dhabevaali and the farmhouse. That's a nice touch, getting so nostalgic.

I'm so happy that they are finally free to be together

SaHil forever ❤️

Thank you for this awesome TS 🤗


Aww Rie! Your a sweetheart! Thank you for posting such an amazing comment even if you were pissed because it went off! Know how it feels! Sigh!

But thank you so much for those amazing words! ❤️

Yes exactly! Wanted to have actually Sanam here, but still not remembering. Coz well, come on its about not remembering its about having your attitude intact. Who forgets that, duh?! Anyways! Glad it came out good and you loved it too! And yeah, the hot lovemaking, just HAD to be there! 😉😆

You got what she said in the morning? "Can't we run away?" 😆 Just told coz you might not have got the Hindi 😳

Thank you so much once again!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: onlyaahil

Lovely ts! So jannat wants to run with none other than her
husband 😆 Bhag jannat bhag! It was really hot.


Haha yeah! How cool is that, and Hot?! 😉😆
Thank you so much for loving this! 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: darkice7_12

How cute was this update? More than the passion, I loved their cuteness. God, I missed this SaHil.

Aahil was suffering from foot in mouth disease. When have we seen Aahil stutter? But Sanam still has it in her to surprise him. 😆

I also liked how Jannat's ranting was finally leading to something. She was finally letting out her true feelings.

And Aahil rolling his eye at her . . . and then laughing at his own "silly joke". He was being a total dork. I guess that's what happiness makes of a man. ❤️ And how happy is he for being chosen? My heart still aches for that Aahil.

And this Jannat . . . you were able to fully describe her vulnerability. She must be so alone in the world . . .no memories . . . no emotions for the man who calls himself her husband, and the only man she feels emotions for is some stranger who keeps on wanting her to be someone else. She only knows herself as Jannat, and not wanting to let go of that identity . . . you made it all believable. She wants to be loved by the one she loves for herself.

This was a beautiful two-shot. Keep writing more! 👍🏼


That. Was such a sweet comment! Thank you so much for that! ❤️

Glad you found the cuteness. I wanted to make a little funny, more than the hot session, I wanted to have it THIS way! I am so glad it turned out nice! 😳

Lol yeah! Poor guy! What a "pleasant surprise" he had 😆

The bold part is my favorite part! Loved what you wrote there! ❤️

Thank you once again, for those words! Its all so overwhelming! I'll try to write some more! 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Booteefool

OOo!! Yes yes!!! 😃
This!! 👏
I'll be back to comment...on my phone right now.


Aww! Will be waiting for your comments Deepz! 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
I loved how Jannat chose her husband over the Major..
Their confessions was something else..
Loved the TS thoroughly

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
"You got what she said in the morning? "Can't we run away?" 😆 Just told coz you might not have got the Hindi 😳


"Kya hum bhaag nahi sakte?" ----> This part?...No I didn't 😆

Thx for the translation, very sweet of you...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Azraa01

I loved how Jannat chose her husband over the Major..

Their confessions was something else..
Loved the TS thoroughly


Thank you for loving this so much! Yep. I love such confessions myself 😛

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