Originally posted by: mahwash22
Review of Part One:
Prags, such a wonderful piece this was. Truly held the magic of SaHil and oh, how it touched me deeply.
Out of nowhere, he thought as if that coat symbolized his arms around her, protecting her; and a faint, almost rueful, smile broke out on his lips.
"You still don't remember that night, do you?" He murmured looking at her face, intently. He looked away from her as soon as he thought he would lose himself.
He made her look at him and saw that she is asleep. He traced his hand over her face tenderly before making her lie back down on the bed.
This was the so beautiful and how you recreated the moment. I'm sure that's what Aahil felt in that moment once seeing her in a unconscious state.
Gah! It's deju-vu all over again and I love it so much. It was one of my favorite moments ever, even on the show. Seeing him how he traced his hand over her face.. This is so good. 👏
And the way he smirked at Sanam knowing that she hated being called Jannat. EPIC!
The intensity in his eyes, the fire in his touch, was robbing her off all the thoughts she had, or wanted to say. The feelings in her heart, overpowered her thoughts.
I don't know! I really don't know! All I know...Is...is that...my feelings for you are stronger than I could ever have for anyone. Stronger than you could ever imagine. For whatever I feel for you, I have never felt for anyone. I don't know why I feel like I know, your touch, your hold, your eyes."
Oh, and I also enjoyed the way you wrote Sanam's heartfelt words in the end.. It was so emotional and deep.
Excuse me, while I take a moment to swoon over your ability to write so profoundly...
And the little; "She chose him.." - such simple words, but holds a bigger impact. 👏❤️
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Review of Part Two:
WHOA... You see, I always read the story and let the thoughts sink in. So I read this again and I kid you not, I have the exact flushed face as I did the first time.
THIS WAS PERFECTION! 🤗
I adore the idea of him being with just the way she is - Jannat - and as he said, wait for her to become Sanam.. Even if it takes a lifetime. That's true love, isn't it.. Haayee..
Her voice - it had the same effect that it used to have. The same voice, he loved listening to. He closed his eyes as he took in how enchanting her voice sounds.
These words are the most romantic thing I have ever heard. Listening to someone voice and just lose yourself.. Truly beautiful, Prags. 😳👏
"What should I say?" He almost asked distractedly. "Kuch kehne ke liye chhoda hi kahan hai tumne" He muttered under his breath.
I actually chuckled reading Aahil's response.. Aahil was totally a cute dork, stuttering and laughing at his own joke. 😆
You, my love, are so special whenever you write. I will never get tired of telling how amazing you are. It's always a fan-girling moment for me whenever I see you have uploaded something. Yay, for creative minds.. 😉
He smiled a little against her lips "Thank you" He murmured so softly. Words can never be enough to describe how he felt at that moment. He was almost choking with the emotions. He felt he won the world or something. He smirked at the thought, of being the ARI he used to be
She brought her hands up and held his face "I don't know who am I. But when I am with you, I suddenly start knowing myself. I don't know whom I belong to, but when you touch me, I feel I belong to you and only you." Her eyes started welling up as they found their way down her cheeks.
"Do you have any idea how happy you make me? Do you even realise what your love for me does to me? You complete me. You make me...ME. I don't care who you are, I don't care which name you carry. I love you! I love you for being you. I love you for the moments you spend with me. I love you for touches we exchange. I love you for the feelings I have when you are with me, I am with you and we are with each other. I love you for your being in my life. I love you for having ME in your life" He whispered breathily.
There are so many touched moments which are my favorites.. Reading their heartfelt confession, Sanam being so vulnerable and not being able to get a hold of her mind.. Not knowing who she really is.. But all she really wants, is be with him..
He looked at her amused and laughed softly. "I have a farmhouse." He smirked. "The question is, are you sure to leave everything behind and come with me?" He asked looking deep into her eyes.
She moved a little closer and held his face in her hands "I have come too far to go back. I don't want to go back. I don't want to turn back"
Prags, you the Queen of describing love between Sanam and Aahil. 🤗
I'm not even just throwing this out there. I really mean it. You have this unique style of need, passion and togetherness. You have no idea how much I enjoyed this. The turmoil, confusion, attraction, need and love.. You have managed to portray every single thing so brilliantly, that I have the urge to read it all over again. ❤️
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