SaHil/JanAah Two Shot: Breaking Free. Part 2 Updated, PG 4.

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Afrin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

That was Amazing:o

Hats off to you ^_^

Would comment longer soon

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Pragya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Amazing part
Loved reading it
This should have actually happened in the serial
So looking forward to the next part
Please continue soon 😊

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! :)

Yep this SO should have! Anyway, will be up with next part soon! 😛

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Pragya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: PizzaHolic.
That was Amazing:o

Hats off to you ^_^

Would comment longer soon

Hey thank you so much! Would be waiting for your comments! 😛

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Pragya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Nice!

Thank you! :)

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AGirlHasNoName

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Pragya..you have done it again👏

Aahil..our Passionate Aahil...special quality he had, that we all loved..you captured that very well in your story! One look into his eyes..and all go latoo, toh yeh Jannat kya cheez hai😆

With all those lectures and Jannat's on going rants about true love, her army officer shauhar...blah blah blah used to annoy the hell out of me. I wanted to grab her from my laptop screen and smack some sense into her. But you definitely utilized her annoying screeching well in this story...it made sense and you could tell how conflicted about her feelings she was. How she wanted to grab Aahil and tell him that she loves him (which she totally did)☺️.

Again, how can anyone resist Aahil Raza Ibrahim anyways

Loved part 1..looking forward to part 2! Update soon!😛

Edited by Booteefool - 9 years ago

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flora212

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Shit man 😲😆 dont ask me why I said that 😛 you will know the answer later 😆 but this was amazing😳 I loved how you wrote internal turmoil of Janu I mean Jannat😆 update soon😃

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Pragya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved it

Thank you so much! :)

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Pragya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Booteefool
Pragya..you have done it again👏
Aahil..our Passionate Aahil...special quality he had, that we all loved..you captured that very well in your story! One look into his eyes..and all go latoo, toh yeh Jannat kya cheez hai😆
With all those lectures and Jannat's on going rants about true love, her army officer shauhar...blah blah blah used to annoy the hell out of me. I wanted to grab her from my laptop screen and smack some sense into her. But you definitely utilized her annoying screeching well in this story...it made sense and you could tell how conflicted about her feelings she was. How she wanted to grab Aahil and tell him that she loves him (which she totally did)☺️.
Again, how can anyone resist Aahil Raza Ibrahim anyways

Loved part 1..looking forward to part 2! Update soon!😛

Deepz! Thanks darling! For such an amazing comment! ❤️

Lol yeah! Ain't that the truth?! 😛

Yeah, I am glad you recognised my intention here behind here rant spree 😆 Trust me thats the only thing I had in my mind, to put her screeching into some good use.,And yes, here feelings were too much she can't help but blurt those out, poor Aahil 😆

Yes I would be updating it latest by tomorrow 😛 Thank you once again! :)

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Pragya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: flora212
Shit man 😲😆 dont ask me why I said that 😛 you will know the answer later 😆 but this was amazing😳 I loved how you wrote internal turmoil of Janu I mean Jannat😆 update soon😃

Naff! 😆 You sound so cute when you are like this 😆

But thank you so much for loving this! 😳, I was sure you would love THIS type of confession 😆

I'll be updating soon! 😛

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sahil333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

This is so beautifully written Pragsy 😛

First the sadness and heartbreak of Aahil part 😭

"You still don't remember that night, do you?" He murmured looking at her face, intently. He looked away from her as soon as he thought he would lose himself. The pain felt as piercing as a thousand nails being pierced through his chest. He brought the quilt up and covered her with it. He looked at her one last time and couldn't help but lean and place a kiss on her forehead, ever so softly. "I love you Sanam, I will always love you. Even if you don't remem..." He whispered against her skin as his voice choked in his throat. 😭

- His Sanam. But he wanted herself to come around, to make herself realise who she is. He can wait for her forever.

Or maybe, just maybe, somewhere in a little corner of his heart, somewhere in that small part of his mind, somewhere unheard or unspoken, he just wanted her to "choose" him.

Thank you that she finally gave up and choosed him even without remembering him. Just like the movie "The Vow", she fell in love with her husband again without even remembering their past. And this is based on a true story and they live happy together.

Yeah, that's Jannat and what a rant she had Just to cover her feelings for HIM. So glad it's finally out and made it very clear to HIM what her true feelings are.

So now what?!...

Wait...she told him her feelings for Mr. Aahil, but has she really chosen him already?

Can't wait for the next chapter.

TQ for the pm! Sorry for being a little late