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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully written dear!azma 's situation is difficult of course... Azad is totally helpless and he can't be risk fr his true love that's why he wants her to go away frm him... She ws almost dead... She turned to stone.. It's not a joke, I know lots of bashing fr azad, fr me he can't take it anymore, he loves her bt can't get het fr his life...he loves her so much thAt he can stay away frm her nt hurting her... Azad hats off ...love u.. Mahira rocks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Wow beautifully written.

Azaad had his reasons for pushing her away. He was hurt more than her.

I'd hulk thinks he is unworthy of her and doesn't want her building any hopes, this was a cruel way of dashing her hopes. He can hurt himself as much as he wants. But he has no right to hurt another this way.
His tears are not going to wipe her tears.



Thank you so much. Azad and hurt go a long way back. I sometimes wonder if he has ever been truly happy... Since childhood he must be struggling with his identity and the fact that he is not a normal human being but a monster. Then Afreen pisode, whatever it was. Then his disappointment at not being able to do anything for his mother and sister. Even when falling for Mahira he was continuously tormented by the fact that his love has no destiny. And yesterday was the last nail in coffin. He knows that it was cruel to treat Mahira the way be did, and he is counting on not being forgiven. I just don't want Mahira to lose her self esteem or confidence. I am glad she is walking away with her head held high. But of course KB wont prevent that somehow.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: flowergarden

Beautifully written dear!azma 's situation is difficult of course... Azad is totally helpless and he can't be risk fr his true love that's why he wants her to go away frm him... She ws almost dead... She turned to stone.. It's not a joke, I know lots of bashing fr azad, fr me he can't take it anymore, he loves her bt can't get het fr his life...he loves her so much thAt he can stay away frm her nt hurting her... Azad hats off ...love u.. Mahira rocks!



Thank you so much. Situation is indeed difficult and tormenting for both of them. Azad at least knows the truth. Mahira has been made to believe a cruel lie. But it would be interesting to see how things progress from here.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Enchanted...The way u explained d whole scene with the underlying emotions of the characters is intriguing...If u r aspiring to be a writer, this is d only thing u want in utmost priority...I am happy that I have joined IF becoz I get to read beautiful work-pieces of writing from writers like u that I wont find even if try to!!!And coming 2 my opinion everyone just summed up all possibilities and I dont have anythg different to say!!!Excited 2 see how Mahi will be stopped...One thing is clear..she needs to give a tough tym 2 Azaad becoz I want her to be with Self-Respect all through!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ajay227

Dear Enchanted...The way u explained d whole scene with the underlying emotions of the characters is intriguing...If u r aspiring to be a writer, this is d only thing u want in utmost priority...I am happy that I have joined IF becoz I get to read beautiful work-pieces of writing from writers like u that I wont find even if try to!!!And coming 2 my opinion everyone just summed up all possibilities and I dont have anythg different to say!!!Excited 2 see how Mahi will be stopped...One thing is clear..she needs to give a tough tym 2 Azaad becoz I want her to be with Self-Respect all through!!!!



Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement. It means a lot really. And totally agree about IF. I hardly qualify, but this forum has so many talented and creative people that you just feel thankful and inspired. Yes, everything else aside,last nights episode has really set the foundation of future track and it would be really interesting to see to whom Mahira gets engaged to.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovelyyy yr

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