The Man and the Girl

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An innocent girl, hopeful because she just had flashes of memory where she remembers how the mysterious man to which she is strangely attracted, brought her to life and confessed his love. She is determined to confront him and put an end to this hide and seek for once and all. So in she goes and wakes up the man of her dreams. The man tries to be indifferent and rude but she sees through the pretense. She doesnt ask the questions, she demands reason and confession. She doesnt want to know if he cares for her or loves her because she needs no confirmation for this fact. Her eyes and her heart are proof enough. She confesses even at the risk of sounding too fast, that she likes him too, that his feelings are reciprocated. The man feigns ignorance about what she is talking, desperately hoping that she would not continue it further. But the girl is not about to buy that, she straightaway asks why does he pretend to be rude and uncaring, when he in fact cares for her so much, what is stopping him from confessing again when he has done it already and she remembers it. The man is in a fix. The girl was too close to the truth, but that truth could never be the reality of their lives, no matter how much he wants it. Her safety was in staying far from him and for that the truth needed to be proved as a lie, and her faith an illusion. He could have said that he doesnt care for her, that he is not interested in her, act rude and ordered her to go away. But he has been saying and doing precisely these things from first day. And yet she has saw through the facade, she has discovered his underlying love and concern, no matter how sternly he tries to put the mask of indifference and rudeness. And now she has even got confirmation of what her heart suspected, and wont leave without an answer, answer that convinces her. He needs to do something else. Something so harsh and cruel that it overpowers every memory of truth she remembers and believes in, turns every dream she is trying to live in a nightmare. And so he does it... Mocks her physical appearance, insults her mental imagination, injures her self confidence. Tries his worst to convince her that her belief was an illusion, what she imagined is not just an improbability but a complete impossibility. The girl is shocked and hurt, and yet is not ready to give up even now. His misery should continue. And then fate offers him another cruel opportunity, and he decides to make further use of his misfortune. He insults the girl further and tells her his preferences lie elsewhere. He would rather be with a nameless diversion than to give any name to their relationship. Humiliation is complete. The girl is shattered, and the man too, and so are their hope, love and dreams.

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PizzaHolic. thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is written so well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazingly written
azad should be ashamed on his saying😡
Edited by kusharberry - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow Enn !
tumney toh poori essay likh daali ! title honi chahiya fault in their stars !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I will never ever forgive fim for saying such horrible things to my poor mahira esp taunting on her looks. this is the thing i detest to the core...Men are so shallow who fall or reject women for their looks ! Azad could have thout better ways of rejecting her.
no matter howmuch good intention he has for her, this is plain unacceptable.
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Originally posted by: PizzaHolic.

This is written so well.



Thank you so much :)
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Originally posted by: kusharberry

amazingly written

azad should be ashamed on his saying😡



Thank you...
I am sure he would be.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Enchantedly written...

My heart wemt to both.
Methinks...Mahira is going to get herself overhauled...and come back...maybe with another guy...

Lets see...
Interesting track
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Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

wow Enn !
tumney toh poori essay likh daali ! title honi chahiya fault in their stars !



Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

I will never ever forgive fim for saying such horrible things to my poor mahira esp taunting on her looks. this is the thing i detest to the core...Men are so shallow who fall or reject women for their looks ! Azad could have thout better ways of rejecting her.
no matter howmuch good intention he has for her, this is plain unacceptable.



Essay😆 If only such essays were asked in examinations😛
May be he thought that was his best shot at convincing her. To make fun of that one thing that people find awkward about you. It hurts the most. But that was very, very cruel. I am glad that Mahira is so strong and has so much confidence in her own self that she neither wants nor cares for others approval. She doesnt judge herself by standards of others, she knows that she is a very special and beautiful person. I wont forgive Azad if her self esteem suffers.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: beekay1

Enchantedly written...


My heart wemt to both.
Methinks...Mahira is going to get herself overhauled...and come back...maybe with another guy...

Lets see...
Interesting track



Thank you so much :)
What is the need of other guy when we already have one in the house? Amaad Miyan is waiting to jump at such opportunities to make his bros already difficult life more difficult 😳.

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