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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: -enchanted-



Thank you so much :)
What is the need of other guy when we already have one in the house? Amaad Miyan is waiting to jump at such opportunities to make his bros already difficult life more difficult 😳.



Yeah it could be Amaad too...
Going to be interesting...
Want to see Surbhi looking hot and sexy 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: -enchanted-

An innocent girl, hopeful because she just had flashes of memory where she remembers how the mysterious man to which she is strangely attracted, brought her to life and confessed his love. She is determined to confront him and put an end to this hide and seek for once and all. So in she goes and wakes up the man of her dreams. The man tries to be indifferent and rude but she sees through the pretense. She doesnt ask the questions, she demands reason and confession. She doesnt want to know if he cares for her or loves her because she needs no confirmation for this fact. Her eyes and her heart are proof enough. She confesses even at the risk of sounding too fast, that she likes him too, that his feelings are reciprocated. The man feigns ignorance about what she is talking, desperately hoping that she would not continue it further. But the girl is not about to buy that, she straightaway asks why does he pretend to be rude and uncaring, when he in fact cares for her so much, what is stopping him from confessing again when he has done it already and she remembers it. The man is in a fix. The girl was too close to the truth, but that truth could never be the reality of their lives, no matter how much he wants it. Her safety was in staying far from him and for that the truth needed to be proved as a lie, and her faith an illusion. He could have said that he doesnt care for her, that he is not interested in her, act rude and ordered her to go away. But he has been saying and doing precisely these things from first day. And yet she has saw through the facade, she has discovered his underlying love and concern, no matter how sternly he tries to put the mask of indifference and rudeness. And now she has even got confirmation of what her heart suspected, and wont leave without an answer, answer that convinces her. He needs to do something else. Something so harsh and cruel that it overpowers every memory of truth she remembers and believes in, turns every dream she is trying to live in a nightmare. And so he does it... Mocks her physical appearance, insults her mental imagination, injures her self confidence. Tries his worst to convince her that her belief was an illusion, what she imagined is not just an improbability but a complete impossibility. The girl is shocked and hurt, and yet is not ready to give up even now. His misery should continue. And then fate offers him another cruel opportunity, and he decides to make further use of his misfortune. He insults the girl further and tells her his preferences lie elsewhere. He would rather be with a nameless diversion than to give any name to their relationship. Humiliation is complete. The girl is shattered, and the man too, and so are their hope, love and dreams.

Wow superb post.Are you a writer?you have described it so beautifully.Whatever azad did today he can never be forgived for how can he be so rude?I felt v bad for mahi.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Superb 👏 Wonderfully Written :)

I felt so bad for Mahira. Azad really broke her heart :( But I'm also very intrigued to see where things will go from here.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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My heart is broken after watching episode. Poor mahira.
You have described whole thing so beautifully <3 very well written.
Edited by -jawaria- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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u wrote it so well
thnx
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhikideewani

Wow superb post.Are you a writer?you have described it so beautifully.Whatever azad did today he can never be forgived for how can he be so rude?I felt v bad for mahi.



Thank you so much... I am not a writer, but aspire to be :)
Azad was indeed harsh yesterday
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Bohemian..

Superb👏 Wonderfully Written :)

I felt so bad for Mahira. Azad really broke her heart :( But I'm also very intrigued to see where things will go from here.





Thank you so much. Yes even though Mahi is devastated, even I am curious about how things would shape up. Welcome break from never ending murder stuff at least. Also I don't prefer too much of mushy romance, so even though the foundation was cruel at least we would get the angst and pain.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -jawaria-

My heart is broken after watching episode. Poor mahira.

You have described whole thing so beautifully <3 very well written.



Thank you so much :)
It was a difficult episode to watch. But Mahira is a strong girl. She would stand tall even in her heartbreak.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for the compliment and it was my pleasure :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Wow beautifully written.
Azaad had his reasons for pushing her away. He was hurt more than her.

I'd hulk thinks he is unworthy of her and doesn't want her building any hopes, this was a cruel way of dashing her hopes. He can hurt himself as much as he wants. But he has no right to hurt another this way.
His tears are not going to wipe her tears.

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