AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 36

Originally posted by: heartbroken1

awesome!

Originally posted by: mineforever

Fabulous. Hats off to u for writing this. 👏

Originally posted by: -shimmer-

addicted To Ur story Shreya!!

iam loving the way ur story is shaping!!

Overall fantastic episode!!

btw azaad k bache ne Side kicks ko kiu bheja 😡

window pane scene n magical mirror scene is fab!!

AzMa kp screen space de Na Zadaaa 😡

Next Updateee kab milegii Shruu Ji??

Originally posted by: BabyHimavari

such an awsome chapter di... the story has got its pace now and so interesting to read with the mystery touch...this kind of genre is always my fav... and i am enjoying it so much...

so on the first day mahira got a huge more than 200 years old massacred library with billions of old arranged books and scrolls to arrange and find her required work pieces from there.. quite a tough impossible work i say😆... But offcourse our mahira as always ready for challenge...😎... i quite loved her reaction when she find that she had to arrange the whole library and cursing the chieftain in her mind.,.🤣... great scene u have portrayed i must say,.
In between her work mahi felt like someone was watching over her secretly but as expected there was no one.. Ahem Ahem!!😆... i can guess who must be the stalker!!😆
I bet u do 😆

Mahira's conversation with Adak khan and bari begun's is significance of the chapter.. it also shows that how the eq with those two different people will be going to shape up...

yes, two different people with different motives. letz see who succeeds !

In that old library mahi found a mysterious mirror... ohho mirror mirror on the wall, tell me who is the fairest of them all...😆... i was felling that badi begum will stand in front of mirror and chant those lines 🤣.. silly imaginations... 🤪...BTW the image of the lady whom mahira saw in mirror...I feel her description is quite similar to Razia AKA SI😆... Is she is also making an entry in the story?!😆

tor boddo besi buddhi lol !
And lastly my most fav scenes...
1. Mahira secretly admiring her super humanly perfect hero..😆... The way u put the scene naa it makes a deep imprint in readers mind...i would say BEAUTIFUL!!😳
sukriya ! sukriya !

2.When mahira found the crumbled piece of her paper... that scene really has so much depth.. mahira must be so hurt and shattered feeling almost dejected... but she didn't know what an emotional turmoil azad have been through while reading those lines... somehow i felt like he didn't crumbled the paper purposely to insult her... i think here is also the same case like serial,.. he is trying hard to repel her but wave is hitting the shore with so much force...
Azad didnot crumple the paper because the verses were ill-written. it actually did its work, touching the chords of his heart which he kept heavily guarded. Same as the show,dear. he believes he is cursed. and mahira will die if she tries to come closer to him.Thatz why he did not want to get her hopes high. Moreover, there was something else too. He felt so miserable for his shortcomings , the reason he could never come close to her, that in his frustrated agony he balled his hand into an iron fist. the paper was in his palm then.so it got violently crushed unintentionally.later when he realised what he had done, he just dropped it and left the room. and Azad never imagined she would find that parchment .

Overall excelent work di... will be waiting for next chapter..
will update soon.

Originally posted by: PurpleCrayon

unresd : here

PS: Did you notice the pic change? 😃 glance to the left of this sentence. Who is it?

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

who is this baalon ka dookan ! let me guess, someone from hobbit ?😉

Originally posted by: NanduVijay

Thanks for the pm.
Loving Mahira day by day. Felt sorry for Mahira when Mir told her that Azaad had mentioned her as a thief. But from your comments i understand that he is playing pranks with her. Looks like he is a mischief apart from all his sorrows. Really liked this side of Azaad. Further, hope that Mir will also be a good support to Mahira along with Adaq.
Is it Azaad who was watching her after Mir left?
what do u think, sweetheart 😆😉 who else😉
I loved when Adaq came to see Mahira when she has skipped her meals. At least she has someone who cares for her in the castle.
yes I want him to be like mahira's absent father.
Azaad's character is intriguing and want to know more about his past.
From the mirror scene it seems, Mahira had some special powers and also someone might harm her. But sure, our jagirdaar will be there to save her.
Amazing update.
thank u !