AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 37

Originally posted by: beekay1

I loved both Chapter 5 and Chapter 6

I just finished re-reading them. You have a way with words...love that...

Loved chapter 5 a lot... Mahira and her run-away mouth...simply loved that...


yaa, ideal foot in mouth condition 😆 but she is so innocent and cutie pie, u just cant be angry upon her

Chapter 6...oh my God...you kept the suspense... every next paragraph, I thought we were going to get an AzMa scene 😆... Loved the mirror bit...
azma scene on nxt update pukka !

Waiting for next chapter, Shreya...and I hope its some hot AzMa scene :D... a dream sequence 😆
thank u so much Bk ji !! remain glued to the story...more to come soon !

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

no no ! that letter incident happened before mahiras entering the library, early morning. and Azad didnot crumple the paper because the verses were ill-written. it actually did its work, touching the chords of his heart which he kept heavily guarded. Same as the show,dear. he believes he is cursed. and mahira will die if she tries to come closer to him.Thatz why he did not want to get her hopes high. Moreover, there was something else too. He felt so miserable for his shortcomings , the reason he could never come close to her, that in his frustrated agony he balled his hand into an iron fist. the paper was in his palm then.so it got violently crushed unintentionally.later when he realised what he had done, he just dropped it and left the room. and Azad never imagined she would find that parchment .
Ok.. that happened in the morning. I had guessed that Azad would have crumpled that note only because it hit a raw nerve inside him and certainly not because it was bad poetry. But you neednt have given rest of the part away as it would decrease the suspense. Learn to torture your readers 😆

something else, ab itni hi kehsakti hoon !😃
See you learnt so fast... You arent giving any hint as to what Mahira saw in the mirror😛

Next chappie ! I promise
Yay!!😳

Now this is such a lovely response, Enn! To take time making a nice appreciation post. u know, a writer's greatest treasure is her reader's applause. it helps her to keep the story in track, to thrive for absolute perfection.
And I shall try my best to extract many more nice star rated reviews from u !

Aww... I am honoured and humbled Shreya. Rest to I have said in the PM itself. Will only add that eagerly looking forward to next update

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Originally posted by: NanduVijay

Thanks for the pm.
Loving Mahira day by day. Felt sorry for Mahira when Mir told her that Azaad had mentioned her as a thief. But from your comments i understand that he is playing pranks with her. Looks like he is a mischief apart from all his sorrows. Really liked this side of Azaad.

yes he is a prankster when he is not melancholic !
Further, hope that Mir will also be a good support to Mahira along with Adaq.
yes, they will all stand by her in need.
Is it Azaad who was watching her after Mir left?
who else, darling !
I loved when Adaq came to see Mahira when she has skipped her meals. At least she has someone who cares for her in the castle.
haan, a father figure.
Azaad's character is intriguing and want to know more about his past.
From the mirror scene it seems, Mahira had some special powers and also someone might harm her. But sure, our jagirdaar will be there to save her.
oh yes, hero hai kis kaam ke liye 😉
Amazing update.

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

Ria !
Maane ja daralo seta nijer monei bhebe ney...mukhe bola jaabe naa, rohosso fans hoejabe !

Originally posted by: BabyHimavari

Okk di.. top secret...😆

BTW.. i made a small VM on AzMa.. please time pele check koro.. heres the link.. hope u don't mind posting it here...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4478677/azma-vm

Originally posted by: -Amri-

Finished reading your tale, and damn, this was amazing, gal.

The feel of an old-age romance, with the exotic, almost eerie setting. A whiff of a historical novel, with the main male character being lord of the realm, and the lady being a penniless scholar who wants to receive his patronage. Also, a suggestion of the supernatural.

Brilliant. Not only is the story line good, you have also accomplished something that not every writer can- atmosphere.

Waiting for more, and thanks for the PM!