AZMA FF-Ishq da Ruthba Chap 9New note pg76 - Page 34

Created

Last reply

Replies

600

Views

36.5k

Users

43

Likes

641

Frequent Posters

asifiqbalsh thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Loved it
Adaq khan & mahira convo was nice. He told her not to judge him. His fatherly eyes saw that she was not ok. Badibegum & mahira scene was good. The way mahira tackled her was wonderful. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
milinda.shreyz thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Thank ya !!😃
milinda.shreyz thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kurkuresandwich

wow it is amazing...

m getting addicted to your story...


thank u so much dear !
reain addicted ! lotz of stuffs are about to happen😉
milinda.shreyz thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aahana.

Amazing update

Mahi saw the crumbled parchment

That was bichari's sample...Poor mahi😭

Azzad ne uski tareef tak karna zaroori nahi samja😲😕

haan woh toh usse chor sabit karney mein busy hai😆

He didnt even feel lik comig and telling her that she is in

She is recruited😕

He sends his sidekick adaq

To tell her the first day duties😲


Banda sharmila hai !😆

Adaq notices mahi's pale face

So adaq khan says not to judge azzu

He has bad past..uska koi tutor bhi nahi tha ...

He taught himself how to read and write

Oh poor azzu everyone had abandoned him ?? hmm🤔❓

yes lots things happened in the past...bad things .so people left in fear. only his band of devoted followers remained.

Yep the people seem to think he is a monstor

His mom and him...Dont seem lik they even talk to each other🤔

They dont share a good eqation may be...😕

His cousin brother...we didnt even get their convos 😕

oh u will get azad-amad convo v soon !

Loved the scene where mahi observes azaad from the windowpane


hai na ! Mahi was drooling over handsome guy like us !

And begum ek moka nahi chodthi mahi ko taunt karne ki

Churail aurat badibegum !😡

Hmm mahi discovers a magical mirror

She had noticed the mirror before itself

Uss mirror main usne witch ko deka

As matronly women wearing old trinket

Uski cruel eyes hmm

I guess she saw aged women hmm

no azma in this update... want more azma in the next

milinda.shreyz thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Yaa mahira was admiring his hero...lol kya kare reality mein tho the writer herself was gawking at the guy and having hot dreams of his broad shoulders and sexy abs 😆

hahaha I bet u did😆 Ufff!!!! about those broad shoulders (Can't imagine how it would feel to be wrapped with them) I have become a badtameez ladki thanks to Azaad lol.

His abs 🤢 hayeee We need to get another scene where he is shirtless. That scene we got before where he's doing pushups was too short and plus he went to save Mahira and to our bad luck he had worn his kurta by then 😆



ooh Dua !
apney toh meri man ki baat keh daali ! that push up scne was too bhief and if was gone in a blink...they should have shown him doing some more workouts and flexing his muscles after that...and most importantly, he should have run shirtless...arre damsel is in distress , who remember to be civil and fully clothed ! agar bina kurta ke bhagteh toh it would have been more natural and a source of pure delight to our sore eyes lol ! haye ram ! kya besharam hogayi main 🤣
Edited by milinda.shreyz - 9 years ago
milinda.shreyz thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

superb update pls cont. soon



Sukriya sukriya sukriya !🤗
milinda.shreyz thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

No problem, dear !

Njoy !😃
milinda.shreyz thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Loved it
Adaq khan & mahira convo was nice. He told her not to judge him. His fatherly eyes saw that she was not ok.

yes, such a kind fatherly man. I love writing about him.

Badibegum & mahira scene was good. The way mahira tackled her was wonderful.
hai naa ? cleverly tackle kiya hai ladki ney 😃
Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

BabyHimavari thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
such an awsome chapter di... the story has got its pace now and so interesting to read with the mystery touch...this kind of genre is always my fav... and i am enjoying it so much...

so on the first day mahira got a huge more than 200 years old massacred library with billions of old arranged books and scrolls to arrange and find her required work pieces from there.. quite a tough impossible work i say😆... But offcourse our mahira as always ready for challenge...😎... i quite loved her reaction when she find that she had to arrange the whole library and cursing the chieftain in her mind.,.🤣... great scene u have portrayed i must say,.
In between her work mahi felt like someone was watching over her secretly but as expected there was no one.. Ahem Ahem!!😆... i can guess who must be the stalker!!😆

Mahira's conversation with Adak khan and bari begun's is significance of the chapter.. it also shows that how the eq with those two different people will be going to shape up...

In that old library mahi found a mysterious mirror... ohho mirror mirror on the wall, tell me who is the fairest of them all...😆... i was felling that badi begum will stand in front of mirror and chant those lines 🤣.. silly imaginations... 🤪...BTW the image of the lady whom mahira saw in mirror...I feel her description is quite similar to Razia AKA SI😆... Is she is also making an entry in the story?!😆

And lastly my most fav scenes...
1. Mahira secretly admiring her super humanly perfect hero..😆... The way u put the scene naa it makes a deep imprint in readers mind...i would say BEAUTIFUL!!😳

2.When mahira found the crumbled piece of her paper... that scene really has so much depth.. mahira must be so hurt and shattered feeling almost dejected... but she didn't know what an emotional turmoil azad have been through while reading those lines... somehow i felt like he didn't crumbled the paper purposely to insult her... i think here is also the same case like serial,.. he is trying hard to repel her but wave is hitting the shore with so much force...

Overall excelent work di... will be waiting for next chapter..
Edited by BabyHimavari - 9 years ago
AmyChoco thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Badi Reswa😳

And tadaaa...

Chap 6

*Recollects Mir Baksh*..aah for me, Vinay Pathak..Ok frame in place..ready set go..😃

I first imagined Harry Potter library..but naahh urs is too untidy for that. Cant put my finger on it, but I have seen one similar to the one you described.

Library no entry zone hai kya for naukars? All these years and no one has bothered to tidy it up?😕

You do excel in descriptions..and just like the garden in the previous chap, here its library.Good job!!⭐️

Whaat..Noone sees the fella!! No wonder Adaq chacha was so surprised when Azaad showed himself!!

Poor girl..if I was her..seeing the sheer work, would have rolled my eyes and gone "You must be kidding me"

*slow claps* She is thinking of defence formations...and here I was thinking of finding some long lost love letters amongst all the parchments *hides face in shame*😆😆😆

So she is 18..How old is Azaad?

Oh no..he didn't!! Implying Mahira to be a chor!!😡

Haan yeah the writing..wanted to ask you..Could you explain that to me in detail?

Oooh..so Azzad miya chupke chupke watching the girl eh? Gandi baat, gandi baat..😳

WT..Awww..I mean seriously Awww...the pain of seeing her work thrown aside like that!!

By afternoon, she swept, dusted & started her work too!! Superwoman hai kya? *offers her a cooler*😃

"You are looking at a man, Mahira whom everyone had abandoned" Liked this sentence a lot.👏

Ahahahaha..you describe a man so sexily ..and then you complain that I am drooling over him.

*Tune maari entriyaan, dil main bhaji ghantiyaan*😆😆😆

Ohh..a mirror borrowed from Hogwarts??!! "Mirror , mirror on the wall..who is the fairest of them all?"

What does Aalim-e-sitt mean? That phoosat bhuddi appears again..hmph🤢

Uh..uh ..Oh no, u didn't ..You despicable woman!! Baap pe nai jaane ka..😡

Smart of her..not to provoke the chudail..What does the witch want?

Shreya tune creative writing ke saath, magic mein bhi course ki hai kya?😆

Who is this new hag now?

Wonderful update!! Quite a riveting one I must say...This is my fav chap..followed by the previous one, then the chap where she meets Amaad

Note: U know what..this isnt my fav chap anymore..Chap 7 is!!! I just had a quick glance at it..Pheww...bahut lambi update hain..Had to stop in between..That requires more concentration if I hav to review!! Be prepared for a whole lot of ooohh,aaah, awww, hayyyeees

Edited by _AmyChoco_ - 9 years ago

Related Topics

Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: minakrish

7 months ago

💘Karan & Surbhi for ZOUK | Valentines 2025💘 [Added New Pics]

What a brilliant start to 2025, with Karan and Surbhi collaborating for ZOUK Bags for Valentines!💘 👜 Sharing photoshoot pictures here:

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: Coloursoflove

2 years ago

*New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor *New chapter updated* Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor

Asya FF: Rendezvous with Honor Asad Ahmed Khan is the prodigal son. All the tabloids say so. Coming from an affluent family in Bhopal, he's done...

Expand ▼
Qubool Hai Thumbnail

Posted by: --Aishwarya--

8 years ago

Dil Ka Mizaaj...Ishqiya...! AsYa FF (New Chapter Updated - 20/01/2025)

Hello to everyone over here!! So, here is the surprise I was keeping in store to my usual readers...The thing is too much of serious dark

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".