Originally posted by: -enchanted-
Would you mind it very much if I say that I liked this update the best so far and totally loved Mahira for the first time? I like my heroines to be focused, determined and with fair share of pride. And Mahira was all that in this update.
yes, I wanted mahira to be a smart and full of self respect type woman. not any doormat selfsacrificial type heroine. heck, I even hate that type !
The library seems huge, and looks like Mahira has an arduous task in her hands. I like. Mir Baksh seems another interesting character and I see hope for some camaraderie if he has to assist Mahira on a regular basis. What would be his age? He seems quite young from this update. and Azad had the gall to keep a check on Mahira in case she steals? Not fair Jagirdar Sahib. But I can totally understand why he would do so. She is a new girl after all and they have no prior knowledge of her background except what she tells herself. And she has at her disposal such precious books, so some caution is required.
yaa, more than that I think badmas Azad miyan, tangkhichaoing her.😆
But of course Azad would know soon that it's not his book that needs to be guarded against being stolen by Mahira, its his heart 😉 .
right !! books ka kya, uska toh din chori honewale hai
Moving on Mahira was mortified by what Mirbaksh said, and poor guy didn't know where to look. He cou ld have kept the precious information with himself. And Mahira still wants to know if Azad had any reaction to her love letter, I mean sample. That was adorable. As I said I like everything about Mahi in this update. Waise it would be interesting to see what Mahira discovers while translating the texts. I am sure some secrets of Azads forefathers would be revealed to her.
yes, that part is coming soon.
So Azad did come to deliver the reply of her love letter in person, while she was taking a short break to day dream about him. But it was a heart breaking reply. He crumpled the sample and left it on ground. That was cruel Azad Miyan :(.
no no ! that letter incident happened before mahiras entering the library, early morning. and Azad didnot crumple the paper because the verses were ill-written. it actually did its work, touching the chords of his heart which he kept heavily guarded. Same as the show,dear. he believes he is cursed. and mahira will die if she tries to come closer to him.Thatz why he did not want to get her hopes high. Moreover, there was something else too. He felt so miserable for his shortcomings , the reason he could never come close to her, that in his frustrated agony he balled his hand into an iron fist. the paper was in his palm then.so it got violently crushed unintentionally.later when he realised what he had done, he just dropped it and left the room. and Azad never imagined she would find that parchment .
No wonder Mahiras spirits took a major setback. But good thing is that she took it out on her work by focussing even more. And Adaq Khan perceives again that something is wrong and advises again to not judge the Darinda too quickly. The mirror was again a very intriguing twist. So Mahira has some special powers too. Azads mother is a creepy lady. And what actually did Mahira see in mirror? Azads mother as she would have actually looked now, instead of the younger version that is on display? That's what I understood, or was it something else?
something else, ab itni hi kehsakti hoon !😃Overall a very interesting update and my favorite so far, even though it had no Azad. On that note, can we have the first proper conversation between Azad and Mahira in next update or two? It's about time :)
Next chappie ! I promise
Now this is such a lovely response, Enn! To take time making a nice appreciation post. u know, a writer's greatest treasure is her reader's applause. it helps her to keep the story in track, to thrive for absolute perfection.
And I shall try my best to extract many more nice star rated reviews from u !
PS- I love the banner of your FF. It's beautiful. Fantastic job by the maker.
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