Thread 2 Asya FF....Mere Humnawah Part 13 updated(15/7/16) - Page 6

Originally posted by: -CRJ-

Amazing

Res

congrats for new thread..

Whoaaa !! New thread...


Congratulations sweet heart...
Many more to come...

Congratulations For New Thread...👍🏼

Awesome Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Was Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Beautifully Written...⭐️

Update Next Part Soon...😃

I 've just come late 😕
Res 😃
unres

I am on page 8, really!!!! I should stalk you better, I know now why I can't be a good jassoos 😆

Anyway, coming to the chapter. Nothing much happen in this chapter, in action I mean, but we can see now that Asad was more in comfort with her. I love three part in this chapter :
First, the best moment was when they both sneeze, it was so cute 😳, I was almost blushing and imagining them smiling to each other.
I love the way you take your time to make them close to each other and in real life this is what should happen. And you do it perfectly. Slowly, she entered in his heart without even being push. She is really good in her way to want him, she just force destiny to meet him and her heart do the rest. He was receptive to her and thank God, he was not in akdu mood 😆 (even I don't mind at all).

The second best part of this chapter was when the word of date came into his mind, naughty Asad but he removed it fastly, little he knows that he was in real date.
I hope you will put more action in the up coming chapter, I really wished a long lunch, talking and having fun with each other and they will walk together and 😳 (I let your imagination here).

And finally, it's when they were about to cut the call, I feel that he didn't want to cut the call and was still in shock that she called him. it was few words but really intense moment.

I can't really point to something I don't like in this chapter. however, i am not really good in hindi, so I miss some words but I understand all of their convo : his concern, their teasing, her naughtiness 😃.

Nice chapter,and I can't wait to see their "date" 😆

PS : congrats for your new thread 🥳, i am so jealous 😃

Awesome update

Congrats for the new thread🥳

Originally posted by: asyafeelz

<font color="#660099">Hi frnds</font>

<font color="#660099">This is d PM id</font>

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<font color="#660099">if u want PM 4 this story u have 2 buddy this acc. only</font>

<font color="#660099">Plz don't send reqsts 2 my real id Jas91</font>

<font color="#660099">& plz leave ur reviews.</font>

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<font color="#660099">Again hadn't got 1 more post 2 res 4 my awesome frnds cuz already 4 spot le liiye the & sare kehte sara pg khud hi lele😆😆</font>

<font color="#660099">Waise toh sabne phirse apna apna res kar hi liya hai itne din se🤣🤣 but still I m doing it from my end😊</font>

<font color="#660099">Res 4 my IF family</font>

<font color="#660099">Heenu mumma, Pinku papa,Ashi, Aloo, Affu, Yumi,</font>

<font color="#660099">& also</font>

<font color="#660099">Goti, Adu, Srash, </font><font color="#660099">Rada, Jules, Janna(Bano), Sam di,Chandu darling,Trish, </font><font color="#660099">Aishu(Aishwa), Aish(Aishwarya), Anu(Annie), Mayur, Khush, Nikki, Binnu, Shailu, Sum, Sue, Tehs, </font>

<em><font color="#660099">Hope I didn't left any1 aage se [kka kar dungi </font>😳

Hello Jas...
Thanx for the Res* & PM...
Well Well This was very good , Adorably cute and a wonderfully Written part...
But itna Chotu Update tha...ki mein AsYa* ke flow mein aise chala gaya...pata hee nhi chala ki ek update bhi khatam hoo gaya...
Khair koi ni...abhi joh mila...bahut hee pyara part tha..
I don't know why do i feel as such...agar tum koi badi Bollywood producer-director hoti to Seedhe YASHRAJ & DHARMA Productions ke level ki Picturein banati tum..Because they way you capitalize and capture Zoya's emotions , nunances is perfect...and on spot.
AsYa* convo was very good...and the about Adorably cute part goes to this Convo only.
Lovely part...enjoyed reading it..
Continue soon.