Thread 2 Asya FF....Mere Humnawah Part 13 updated(15/7/16)

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OMG I can't believe it 2nd thread alreadyšŸ˜›šŸ˜›. Yippeee. 🄳
Congratulations 2 all of us kyunki reader ke bina writer hi kyašŸ¤—
Honestly when i started i didn't knew i will get so many readers😳. What 2nd thread toh expected thašŸ˜†šŸ˜† tumne socha thread bolungi.🤣 Are inni achi pyari aur badi IF family hai meriā¤ļø,.. unhone hi 1st thread main story finish nahi hone deni thišŸ˜† par phir i got new readers who soon became frnds & i wanted 2 hug u all cuz thanku & sorry apne yahan nahi chalta.šŸ¤—šŸ˜‰
Special thanks 2 silent readers sachi yeh log itne mast hain start main toh meko mere frnds ke likes kum inke zyada dikhe the so aap sab ka silent support means a lot. šŸ¤—
But i'll still say plz come out of ur shell or shyness & speak a few words we writers won't bite šŸ˜†šŸ˜†& i have come 2 know that many frnds who were silent b4 but now that they become active they r so difficult 2 remain silent now.🤣🤣 They nonstop chat & spam here.šŸ˜† So trust me wid being intellectual u'll make so many new frnds & enjoy more.šŸ˜‰ I myself m an example. Thode time main bhi shaant thi phir aake yahan ashanti phela di.🤣🤣
LOL mujhe toh Shukriya bolna tha kya Astha channel khol diya 🤣🤣 Plz excuse mešŸ˜†
Shukriya to all my readers silent bhi spammers bhi honest bhi patient or impatient bhi. I really love u all a lot. Keep reading keep supporting & giving ur honest response...
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I love all u supported me & welcomed my story wid open arms. Not naming any1 kyunki koi chot gya toh boht mar padegi mujhešŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Keep showering ur love & support. Hugs 4 keep liking & commenting till now😃
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Index
Chapter 1-5 - Thread 1
Chapter 6 - below
Chapter 7 - page 33
Chapter 8 - page 61

Chapter 9 & 10 - page 71

Chapter 11 - page 80

Chapter 12 - page 91

Chapter 13 - page 100


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Chapter- 6
She couldn't believe what she saw. Didn't knew how to react but shock soon vanished making her smile the widest. She didn't thought her Allah Miyan would be so mehrbaan on her. She felt so glad that she wanted to squeal jump in excitement but was so weak to do that. She saw Asad's business card which has his name written boldly & has his phone no. on the end. She smiled widely and then kissed his name written on it. At the same time she sneezed again & cursing her running nose she took another tissue. But even the cold could not decrease her happiness so she tightly hugged his coat again.
Just after few minutes her maid Merry entered again with some breakfast for her. She saw Zoya's mood was better than she last left her. She wished & offered her breakfast which she took happily & started eating. While she was busy Merry thought to untidy her room. As soon as she came near the coat Zoya stopped her...
-Merry usse rehne do mera breakfast ho gya. She got up quickly.
After having her medicine she asked Merry to leave as she wants to rest. As she left Zoya came back to her bed & took Asad's card from side table. She thought to talk to him so quickly took her mobile & dialled his no. But before it would ring she cut the call.
-Allah Miyan what's wrong with me! Bina kuch soche sidha phone kar diya, main unse kahungi kya? Kya baat karungi? Woh busy hue toh! Kya karun main. She exclaimed worriedly becoming totally confused. No Zoya you can't get nervous. You are the Zoya Farooqui. Aur Zoya Farooqui duniya ka koi bhi kaam kar sakti hai. Phir yeh toh choti si baat hai bas baat hi toh karni hai. Come on let's do it. Taking a deep breath she dialled his no. again. She kept the phone near her ear & waited impatiently for him to pick up her call.
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Asad was sitting on the chairs & table set in the garden doing some work on his laptop when his phone rang. He kept typing & after 2-3 rings he picked his phone & noticed there was some unknown no. He frowned but when it kept ringing he thought to answer the call.
-Hello !
Zoya quickly put her hand on speaker to calm herself but just the next second she heard him speaking again. Closing her eyes she again brought her mobile near her ear & whispered in a faint sound...
-Hello Mr Khan! It's me Zoya.
-Zoya...I mean Miss Farooqui Aap. How you found my no.? He asked frowning his brow.
-Good Morning Mr Khan! Woh apka no. mujhe aapke coat ke pocket main aapke Business card se mila.
-Well good morning to you too Miss Farooqui. It was very unexpected actually so...
-I know Mr Khan it's ok i completely understand that...
-Achuuu...I m sorry!
-Mr Khan kya hua aap theek toh hai na? She got a little worried.
-Yeah absolutely. It's just the cold. Rain doesn't suit me much you see. Asad said using the tissue from the box kept on table.
-Oooh I'm so sorry Mr Khan yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai na kal main bhigti aur na...Achuuu...I m sorry!
-I see toh lagta hai kal ki masti ka khamyaza aaj aapko bhi brabar bhugatna pad raha hai. He teased.
-Mr Khan...Aisa kuch nahi hai i usually don't get sick woh toh kal kafi der gile kapdo main rehke thand lag gayi. She defended.
-Yes Ofcourse main toh bas aise hi keh raha tha aapko tease karne ka koi irada nahi tha mera.
-That's better.. She said naughtily....but still I'm sorry Mr Khan khamkhan aapko bhi meri wajah se...
-Come 'on Miss Farooqui. Aapko bilkul bhi guilty feel karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. It's just a small thing aur ismain aapki koi galti bhi nahi thi. So plz aap apne aap ko blame mat kijiye.
-Par
-No par war maine kaha na ab agar aap is tarah khud ko blame karengi toh main zaroor aapse naraaz ho jaunga.
-Ok Ok I promise Mr Khan main khud ko bilkul bhi blame nahi karungi. She quickly agreed.
-Very good! Waise aapne dawaai li aapka khyal rakhne ko hai koi aapke paas.
Zoya smiled seeing his concern.
-Jee Mr Khan meri maid Merry hai jo kal raat se mera ache se khyaal rakh rahi hai aur mujhe kadwi kadwi dwaayian bhi khila rahi hai. She said making ugly face.
Asad chuckled on other side imagining how she must be looking as even he & his dear sisters also doesn't like taking those bitter medicines.
-Ab theek hona hai toh dawayi toh leni padegi. Par i m glad ki aap akeli nahi hain. Waise aapne phone kyun kiya tha koi kaam tha aapko.
-Kaam...Zoya gets nervous & started thinking to give him some excuse. As she was looking here & there to get some idea her hands felt the coat lying in her lap & shouted happily. Yes...Realizing how loudly she screamed she toned down her voice & started saying again. I m sorry, actually i called to thank you for last night. Kal aapne meri boht help ki. I'm really grateful agar aap nahi hote toh I don't know how i would have managed. So thank you very much.
-Miss Farooqui Aapko thank you kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai maine jo kiya woh mera farz tha aur meri jagah aur koi bhi hota toh wahi karta.
-Oh Come 'on Mr Khan. Ab khud ko itna underrate bhi mat kijiye aap. Aap jaisa acha aur nek sirat insaan aajke zamane main boht mushkil se milega.
-Well I take that if u say so.
Both chuckled at this.
-Mr Khan mujhe aapse ek aur baat karni thi. Woh...
-Han Miss Farooqui boliye na kya baat hai.
-Actually baat yeh hai ki kal apne meri help ki itna ache se mera khyaal rakha uske liye kyunki ab aap mera thanku accept nahi kar rahe hain toh uske badle main ab apko mera saath lunch pe chalna padega. And you can't say no to this too. She raised a finger in the air as if he was standing in front of her.
-Par..
-No par war Mr Khan.
Both giggled again as Zoya repeated the same thing which Asad said few minutes before.
-So Mr Khan mera yeh offer toh aapko accept karna hi hoga.
-Aaa..
-Come 'on Mr Khan main itni bhi buri nahi hun ke aap mere saath ek lunch na kar saken. Please! She said softly.
-Miss Farooqui Ab itna bhi emotional blackmail karne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Waise kya kabhi kisi ne aapko kaha hai ki apne acting bilkul sahi profession chuna hai cause you really know how to get your way.
-So is that a yes? She got elated & asked.
-Do i have a choice.
-No.
-Ok than we can meet tomorrow kal Sunday ko mera off bhi hai so if that's fine with you cause i'll be busy on weekdays.
-Tomorrow is perfect Mr Khan. I'll see you tomorrow.
-Hopefully.
-Ok I'll text you the time & place.
-Alright.
-Aaa... So we should hang up now.
-Yeah i guess if there is nothing more to say.
-Ok
-Bye Miss Farooqui. Have a wonderful day. And plz look after yourself.
-I will. Thanks! You too take care & Bye.
-Bye
A beep sound confirmed that Asad cut the call from other end. But she still had her cell pressed on her temple. Her eyes were close & she could still hear Asad's voice in her head. She smiled remembering his velveteen soft voice which erupts goose bumps on her body. She giggled thinking she was going mad in his love but she liked it. She loved this new feeling. She had immersed in this emotion called love for the first time & she was loving to be in love. It was her first love & she has the right to feel all this. Smile goofily like a lunatic & weave dreams of a happy future.
She soon opened her eyes her face having a graceful & content smile. Now she wanted to get well quickly before the lunch tomorrow. Thankfully she doesn't have any work tomorrow so she was relaxed on that side but she needed to hunt for a beautiful dress for tomorrow. It wasn't like she hasn't got any but how can a girl be satisfied & content with her wardrobe, even if it contains all the gorgeous & expensive dress from world renowned designers. So she picked herself up to sought out her look for tomorrow after all she had a date with her handsome stranger & she had to look her best.
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Asad on the other hand was surprised getting Zoya's call. But what amazed him more was how they talked so casually as if they are friends & know each other for so long. And he was left shocked when he realized that he has actually agreed to go on lunch with her.
I mean what? really! lunch with the most successful & one of the most beautiful woman of Bollywood.
-Was it a date?? Asad mumbled & than shook his head to quickly shrug that thought out.
-Stop thinking so much Asad it's just a casual friendly lunch which is just out of gratitude. Don't think too much into it. He chided giving himself some pep talk.
-Asad
-Aya Ammi.
He look his laptop & files from the table and started walking back in the house.
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That's it 4 today guys. Finally a casual conversation btw Asya. šŸ˜‰ They will meet in nxt part. Hope u enjoyed it. Thanx 4 reading.😊
Apologies 4 being late again life is just not letting me sit & pen it up. I have had d plot but thinking scenes dialogues & than writing & edit does quite lot of time sometimes. I'll try 2 b regular now onwards. Thanx 4 ur precious support 4 my not so good story. I really m very grateful 2 each 1 of u.šŸ¤—
1 more thing i wanted 2 say is that plz if u can than give some descriptive comnts which will let me improve. Till now most of u have been sweet but i want u 2 b honest critics too & frankly tell me how u like it.😊 I myself have always tried 2 b honest & expect u guys 2 do d same. If u feel d updt is crap or not upto d mark say it. Don't b oversweet & praise my bakwaas write ups toošŸ˜›šŸ˜†. I won't feel bad instead i'll b glad u r taking interest in my work & story. But yes do avoid bashing or abusing me cuz than i will definitely mind that.🤣🤣
In d end like always hit & like & leave some comnts.😃 & forgive errors if any.😳
Silent readers u have left likes till now plz keep doing that.šŸ˜›
Bye 4 now see u in nxt updt which i will start typing soon.😳

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Hi frnds

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Again hadn't got 1 more post 2 res 4 my awesome frnds cuz already 4 spot le liiye the & sare kehte sara pg khud hi lelešŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Waise toh sabne phirse apna apna res kar hi liya hai itne din se🤣🤣 but still I m doing it from my end😊
Res 4 my IF family
Heenu mumma, Pinku papa, Ashi, Aloo, Affu, Yumi,
& also
Goti, Adu, Srash, Rada, Jules, Janna(Bano), Sam di, Chandu darling,Trish, Aishu(Aishwa), Aish(Aishwarya), Anu(Annie), Mayur, Khush, Nikki, Binnu, Shailu, Sum, Sue, Tehs,
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Res for me , kadoo, yoyo, heenu muma, ainu, badi api n apiya
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Unres

Apple phle to big huggie for new thread... well deservedšŸ¤—
It was an awesome update.. I loved there conversation but that's not fair to har bar choto choto update dete hai . *pouts* I want big updates with lots of AsYašŸ˜› next time no delay😳 huggie again

Ye wala awesome tha but next Blossom hona chahiešŸ˜‰
Edited by asyaarshilover - 9 years ago
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Hey jas
First heartly congrats to your new thread
You definitely deserve it šŸ‘
Thanks for res 😳

About update loved it
Simple and elegent

You are writing very well
Finally Asya date šŸ˜‰
Ready to go for date asad also šŸ˜³šŸ˜‰

Please give long update
Thanks for pm
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Mine
unres

first of all

huggiieesss šŸ¤—

congratulations darling for the new thread

u deserve many more 😳

coming to update

itnnaaa chota

wo bhi etnyyy din bad

i want more bestie

i loved zoya here

the way she kissed his card

their call

their talk

everything was perfect

Acchuu was cheery on top

so dinner date haan

jaldi lao

jaldi lao

amazingly written bestie
chaa gayi

love u ā¤ļø
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šŸ‘Congrats on new thread.šŸ‘
Awesome Chapter.
Zoya got Asad's business card in the coat's pocket, Wow.
Zoya called him n Asya had a nice chat.
Lovely Asya Chat moment.
They r about to meet n go on a date, Eagerly waiting for it.
Your writing is very good, don't underestimate yourselves.

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Mummaaa congratulations šŸ¤—...

You deserved it...


Luv u so much...


Aur coming to update...

M.A superb...


Zoya ki khushiii


Kya naseeb haiii...

Date aaraha hai oye hoye Asad MiyanšŸ˜‰[...
Edited by Persiko - 9 years ago
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Hey jasšŸ¤—
So lovely update yaar love itā¤ļø
Tho woh card tha
Asya conversation is sho cute
They r going on date wow excited continue soon😊
Edited by shailu123 - 9 years ago

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