Res š yipiii Hello beautiful Jas, can I say again I am so sorry for being late and absent?
Look how cute am I looking? I am sure you won't resist to it š. I know I can see how you melt to my beautiful eyes
So coming to the update, I read them all paka but I just didn't comment.
So the last 3 chapters, it was all around Zoya's character and her encounter with Dilshad (how I love this character and in your story, she is toolovely š).
I must confess at the beginning, I was like ok, Dilshad will be the link between them but what I didn't expect is how their relation will go deeper and deeper, to reveal to us different shades of Zoya. And I am glad to be surprised so much.
Zoya shared a part of her that I didn't expect to see, she talked about her and I saw her humanity, her weakness, her past and how she became a wonderful woman now.
Here, I can appreciate Zoya more, she was not "just" a capricious actress, she was even more and in this last chapter, I saw her and I felt for her, deeply. Her character was beautiful and if I said something bad about her in previous comment, I am so sorry. I was blind by her action and clueless about her.
Previously, I felt for her because she was rejected but now I felt for her for her past.
At the beginning of the story, I didn't know why she was acting like this, I mean really really spontaneous but now I understand. She is a girl who missed love from her parents and craved for it.
I was even surprised to know that she was not orphan, I don't think you mention her parents before this last chapter? She was now ready to live her life, to say the word of love before it's too late. This is really respectful. Many will have grown up, rejecting love, but with her, it was the opposite, she chased love. She didn't want to miss a moment without love.
Anyway, I could also appreciate how you made her character grow up in one chapter, how she moved from lucky charm to be forgotten by her parent. How she grew up thinking that she wasn't love by them? How she blast on them and how when she grew up, and became enough adult, she knew about her mistake or the biggest misunderstanding.
I guess this is what we called maturity, it's about to learn how to understand nd to accept the answers of our questions, to have enough emotional baggage and enough background to accept our mistake to change them later.
I really loved this part, the way you describe it so easily but it was deep for me, really deep.
Dilshad in this as parent was the perfect miror of her story and I must say redemption. Zoya talked to her like she wanted or did to her mother. This part was full of love and I just love it. Most of the times, we barely said : I love you mom or dad, but we said them differently, and I found this in her speech. Simple words but a ton and ton of love.
And the last part, my favorite, the moment Zoya froze looking to Asad and Dilshad watched this. That was FAN-TAS-TIC, I mean just wow. I read it 3 times and it puts smile on my face. I could imagine it perfectly. And Dilshad's reaction was priceless. š
And once again, another moment, when Zoya looked at him for the last time, it pinched my heart for her. It was short but emotionnal moment for me, longing to something you can't have, I mean what I can add this moment. It will not praise enough your writting skills in this part. You totally nail it girl.
But strangely, just like Asad, I don't know why Dilshad ignore her son? I mean he didn't do anything wrong, he is just a man. I didn't expect such a reaction, maybe you will light in the coming chapter. And if I understood well, Zoya didn't say anything bad about him, she just said that he didn't share her feeling. Maybe Dilshad felt hurt because he didn't share with her? Or she has something else in her mind?I don't know, It was the only not logic part for me in the chapter.
Waiting for the next chapter and I don't why but Dilshad will cook something for them š. Can't wait to see what you have for us?
Lot of love to you my beautiful friend and lot of hugs. Stay always blessed Jas
Edited by radadolcevida - 9 years ago
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