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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tinunaik2069

Awesome... one

Love the hole update
Continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago

thanku surya😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

Awesome update.sue

Its superb yaar

Asad zoya scene was amazing

mr dailouge chor ke ishq ka rang was so lovely

but very sad kya kiya tune wo dono mil hi nahi sakte

Really very well written yaar

dono shadi hoga na?

Continuee soon... Yaar


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hahaa abhi bhi doubt he shadi pe???
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Wow!

I finally got the time to read this and i simply loved it!

Different concept in terms of place location and the updates were just fabulous!

Update soon! Eagerly waiting for the nikaah and lot more AsYa romance!


welcome to the story aashka🤗
and thanku so much yarr😛
yes nikaah coming up next😉
stay tuned😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Thank god that you finally updated

Awesome update
Loved reading it
Looking forward to the wedding
Please continue soon 😊


hehee sry musu exam thi na😆
thanku so much😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

SORRY I DIDN'T READ UR POST BEFORE READING THE UPDATE...😳😳


THANK U SO MUCH FOR DEDICATION
AND B,DAY WISH...😊😊


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Awesome part moved it

Asia moments wow soo sweet
Excited for asya marriage
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next


thanku so much nilu😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

First of all,How are You?😊
It was Awesome Part.😊
Zoya wanted Asad(KSG) to take her to India,it was so Interesting.😊
Zoya wanted to make Good Memories There,I Likes it.😊
ASYA(KABHI) Moments were so Cute.😳
The way all are Teasing Asad(KSG) was so Cute.😳
The Feelings of ASYA(KABHI) were so Lovely explained.😳
Waiting for ASYA(KABHI) Wedding.😊
Take care,Dear.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

To My Sweetest Friend,
From
PriyaCherry.


me good wbu???
priya ur comments are always so sweet
thanku so much😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello all lovely readers😃😃😃
quick this tym!!! m i???😆😆😆
so here goes the most awaited chapter
asya's marriage
i hope u did the shopping😉
this update goes to all of them who hit the like on previous update
thanks a lot😃
enjoy😛




credit- Niya_789


😛part- 30😛


Location: regal princess

If something can define beauty then it had to be regal princess. Adorned beautifully with all the flowers in the world one could find...it was a magic of NY's wedding organizers as well as the ship's working crew.

Many respectable people...many middle class along with the high class category...all were admiring the beautiful ship. The top deck of the ship was full of guests and the merry children could be seen running here and there making their way in between the crowds.

Rickwood stood with Asad talking to many of their common fellows. Dilshaad and asad's other two phopi's were arranging all that can be done before zoya comes. Arbaaz was helping nikhat and his wife Sonia for giving out information to maulvi. Rinky aunty,nani baa were attending guests and seldom they were teasing each other as the two ladies were having something going on between them from day 1 since they met...which is unexplainable in some cases with ladies like these who boast on their jwellery! Ayaan too was busy attending many of his and asad's friends which have arrived from India. Eric was just going to walk towards his girlfriend dilshaad when something caught his attention. Rather it was someone who caught his attention. Clad in a silver and black lehenga was nuzzhat walking towards him.

"uh...i wanna talk to you" she said

He held her hand and lead her to the upper deck behind the cabin as the ship began floating over the water slowly.

"eric i..." nuzzhat couldn't muster the words but eric spoke first...

"u wanted to say something?"

"ya...i...I'm going back tomorrow" she said not meeting his eyes.

Eric felt an unknown emotion but he couldn't do anything about that. "and?" he whispered

" and I wanted to clear somethings with you before I leave...uh.." she bit her upper lip and said closing her eyes not wanting to see his sad face... "eric this might not be the right time for us to happen" she opened her eyes and saw his already fallen face fell more.

"I mean it isn't that I don't like you...ur good...and"

"no I'm not that good...and I know that...i like you nuzzhat...maybe more than that...i love you...very much...and I'm ready to wait for you to fall in love with me someday" saying so he left her there alone. She'd seen his eyes which were honest and she knew she should be giving herself some time to think clearly. As her bhaijaan has told her that decisions taken in haste often sends us in trouble. The ohs and aahs coming from downstairs told her that the bride has come. She smiled and pulling up her lehenga ran to see zoya.

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Asad saw his zoya through the curtain on the other side zoya lifted her eyes to believe all this was happening for real. It was her nikaah and she had actually haven't got time to think about what her nikaah would be like before in her life. And this was finally happening ...and most importantly to the man sitting in front of her. She could feel his gaze from behind the curtain. Not only he but the whole crowd watched her and appreciated her beauty. Adding to her elegance was zoya's nikaah joda which contended so many colors and screamed how colorful her life is now.

zoya's wardrobe- simmi😃

Rickwood pecked her forehead and she saw dilshaad put a hand on asad's shoulder with a glistening smile.

Dilshaad along with humairaah and nikhat came to zoya's side and made her sit. Zoya's herartbeats were on a ride as maulvi sahib started reading the nikaah. Dilshaad held her hand reassuringly and zoya pursed her lips. Eventhough she has got the best family in the world...she was missing her late family. Every kid like her in her childhood dreams about her marriage someday...in front of her family... And now it was the most important day of her life ...

She suppressed a sob and dilshaad hugged her.

"mera baccha mai hoo na yaha"

At the same time zoya heard asad saying qubool hai. She broke the hug and looked down.

"qubool hai" his voice came as a tender caressing conveying her that he's there. She closed her eyes to hear once more

"qubool hai" this one carried a happy tone and she smiled too. She glanced at dilshaad as the Mubarak ho's filled the atmosphere.

"ammi" she whispered tearing up and dilshaad handled her before she could cry.

The consent was now asked to zoya and rickwood came forward to zoya. On either side zoya had her family members...her father like figure and her phoopi and now her ammi.she glanced up at the man waiting for her answer behind the curtain. She would be his. She should be his.she must be his.

Lowering her gaze she said it "qubool hai"

Asad smiled as he heard her voice mixed with the breezes coming to his ears as gentle as a soft newborn leaf.

"qubool hai"

This he heard as a reassuring words trying to convey she was alright and the third one came as a happy one and he could sense her voice getting better as she was happy.

The ship echoed the congratulations and the curtain was raised from between them now. Zoya held her breath...never had she imagined asad to look so handsome in what he wore!

asad's wardrobe-simmi😃

She was stunned would be an understatement followed by the mere red in her cheeks when asad smiled at her.an ecstatic nzma came running to hug zoya and she hugged her back. Many congratulations followed and asad was never happy this much. He saw her eyes filled happy tears of joy and he couldn't have thanked his ammi more for fixing his marriage with zoya whom he used to call badtameez and ill mannered.

The music was being played by the violinists and the guests were scattered all over the ship. Some helping themselves with food and some looking around the ship admiring it and enjoying by themselves. Asad and zoya both were busy as the guests were still engaged with them. The khan gang along with eric,arbaaz,Sonia and ayaan were having their sweet time planning the night for the two. Zoya's cabin was specially done by them for asad and zoya were going to spend their night on the ship.

"asad zoya tum dono ne khana khaya?" dilshaad asked and both of them stared at each other and giggled. No matter how modern the generation goes...mom's are always concerned if their child ate something!

"haan!!! Apni ammi par hasoge? Tum dono ne team up kar liya he kya? Mai bhi tumhaari ammi hu" dilshaad narrowed her eyes.

Zoya made a puppy face and hugged dilshaad. " I love you ammi"

Dilshaad caressed her back "pata he mujhe aur ye bhi pata he ki I made the right decision."

Zoya came out of the hug and dilshaad kept her hand on both of their shoulders. They could see their mother's eyes glistening with joy.

As for asad and zoya this was all little unexplainable situation. They both now stood close as a married couple. Amidst the photographs been taken and the guests admiring them asad held her hand...their first touch after marriage.

She still couldn't believe they were married...all this was happening so fast.

"mr. khan..." his eyes spoke volumes of love and the intensified gaze shut her up...glancing down nervously she stared at the wooden floor.

"Asad for you..." he whispered and she looked back at him again.the time froze...it didn't mattered anymore that they were given many glances...they were lost in their world...they were married...tied in a bond for a lifetime and the feeling which engulfed them was unexplainable as well as unrecognizable to them.

It was just the two of them and the music played by violinists .her hand still in his, their eyes did the talking as if they weren't gonna get the night.

Eric was watching them lovingly lost in his own thoughts somewhere. He has seen this lady dying in the name of the man she just married.her love was pure and it got completed. Zoya has always played a role model for eric in someways. Of course he was rowdy and what not...but zoya handled his spoilt character so well. And she again taught him that no matter what if the love is pure...destiny honors the chance. He smiled. Rickwood was happy too...the backbone of zoya all of these years have seen her grow into a beautiful lady and he believed the struggles she did...the phase she'd gone thru will fade before asad's love.

The music came to a stop.nzma was day dreaming when the waiter collided and the glass fell down.it broke asya's moment and looked consciously at the crowd. But they weren't embarrassed coz simply there was no reason to be. They were married after all.

More guests...new Yorkers,...family friends...close business people and ofcourse rinky and lara too all got the couple tired. Finally after a long time the youngsters were done with the final arrangements of their wedding night.

Nikhat and nzma took zoya inside her cabin. Zoya was surprised to see the elegant beauty and ethnic values of Bhopal mixed in her cabin. The fireplace and mantle were adorned with black decorative giving it a royal look with the golden flowers. The bed,which once used to be all mushy pink was now in white and pale shade with the beautiful rose and jasmine garland tied in the centre of the bed at some height spreading its branches down to the circumference of the bed.the 2 hearts mingling on the bedsheet made her blush a little. She looked towards the windows...each with a golden curtains and dainty red ribbons flying in the wind. The exceptional light emitted out from the ancient lamps were just adding to the beauty of the room.

The khan girls whispered among themselves and giggled all this while zoya was busy in admiring the beauty. But it wasn't like she wasn't listening to them...she was and the red in her cheeks were proof to it.

Nani baa kissed her forehead and left with the girls scuttering them away to leave dilshaad alone with zoya.

"I've never been this nervous" zoya dropped her eyes fiddling with the corner of curtain.

"zoya...u know what is the most important thing in any relationship?" zoya stared at dilshaad.

"yes its trust...u got to have faith in allah and then ur soulmate...u have to fight ur fears" dilshaad caressed her head.

"i...I don't know i'm not ...uh" zoya was finding it difficult to say to his ammi

"trust him zoya...he'll not let u down...he'll not do anything against ur wish"

Zoya hugged dilshaad and dilshaad tried to relax her. "and dare not feel guilty of the things we haven't even thought of!"

Zoya chuckled and dilshaad pecked her forehead.

" And don't forget to meet us at the airport tomorrow"

Zoya smiled blinking at her "ji ammi"

Dilshaad left and she sighed looking out of the window. Ofcourse she trust him...but it was the guilt she was carrying which seemed to her so foolish and silly now! It was her family and now they understand her and her sensitivity to intimacy.she sent a honest prayer upwards thanksgiving to have such a wonderful family.

She stared out the window and noticed the ship was moving away from the docks into the dark beauty of the ocean. That means the guests have left! Where the hell is my so called husband leaving his beautiful wife alone!' she thought and turned towards the door and there he was.

Her gaze travelled down his body "what happened?" she asked pointing at the mark on his sherwani.

" I think the waiter didn't like me and nzma" he said amusedly. She giggled in a short and sweet sound.his eyes adored her in the lehenga she wore.

"you look beautiful mrs. Asad ahmed khan!" he exclaimed much to her reddening cheeks.

"thanks" looking up she saw him lost.he even forgot his OCD as this much lost he was.they were still standing at a distance more than there should be.he came closer and a smell filled her nostrils.

"what's this smell?" asad stopped and looked at his clothes. "uh oh! This" he grimaced

She shook her head and smiled trying to control her laugh at his expression. The next moment she was shouting when she saw him trying to pull up his sherwaani.

"noo!!! What are you doing?"

"relax zoya! Why r u shouting?"

She checked her tone and glanced down shoot! i can't handle his six-packs!' she thought nervously and said

"ur...why r u removing that?" she let it out stuttering and he frowned.

"why for its ruined. I can't wear it zoya" he replied looking keenly at his flushing bride. and before that she knew he was out of his sherwaani,his body glowing in the golden light from the lamps...she gulped ...dare she trail her gaze down at those six packs! She turned around closing her eyes. why is he being so hot tonight?' she could feel him coming closer. No definitely no! she can't stand so close to his body. That body!

He noticed her nervous shifting of weight to one and other leg has ceased. He was not touching her but wasn't at safe distance too. Her breathing ragged she didn't know what's gonna happen.

He took the step forward...if she was affected he was too. The backless choli wasn't helping him.wrapping his hand around her he gently hugged her from behind breathing in her scent.

Warmth!!! Despite of the shivers running down her spine he gave her the warmth. the moon shown above them blessing the newly wedded.

"I love you" he whispered against her neck making her open her eyes. "I can't believe m finally married to the man I loved so much since then." She started whispering too.

He made her turn around in his arms and placed her both hand on his chest as she widened her eyes.

She got to know that she wasn't the only one who's heart beats were too fast.she lowered her gaze and then shut her eyes and he smirked.

His hands moved up to make her look up and he saw in her eyes...nervousness,insecurity,a small guilt fading away with a newfound trust...and above all love.

He enveloped her in his arms tightly as she hugged him back, her hands hesitant over his back. In her mischief, she had touched his six packs while her hands moved back and asad chuckled.

"aap hi ka husband hu mrs. Khan! Kahiye to zara...hum jaan bhi dedenge ye six packs kya cheez he"

Zoya bit her lips trying to suppress her giggling and she hugged him more tightly "hume jahapana six packs se bohat mohbbat he"

He grinned and coming out of hug raised an eyebrow at her.she blushed and while admiring her his eyes got the glimpse of that sherwaani.

"I'll put that in laundary" he left with his clothes.

Zoya rolled her eyes "allah miya wats wrong with him! Itni khoobsurat biwi yaha he aur inhe sherwaani ki padi he."

She sat down in front of the dresser unpinning her hairs and removing all the jewelleries and pins in her lehenga.while removing her make-up she was more relaxed and lost. Asad came beside her taking her both hands in his "what is my wife thinking?"

She shook her head smiling "nothing"

"c'mon then lets go to sleep" he moved towards the bed leaving her and she was swallowing the lump. She followed him and laid down beside him. Both of them faced each other living their dreams. Her distant eyes were telling him an another story. And in no less than a few mini seconds he saw her eyes watering.

"zoya...kya hua...hey" he shifted to her putting his arms across her.

"I didn't want you to ever think that I was a bad girl in the first place...when u came here I hoped my love would flourish but we never got to good terms."

"hey...but ur not a bad girl zoya...why are you suddenly remembering that day...i was a fool and when u said u an eric met in bar...i didn't know what got into me. M sorry"

He wiped her tears not understanding why was she growing so emotional. After some time she was just staring at him god knows what was she thinking!silly girl.

Asad asked the question "zoya...eric told me you and lara were there in the bar...i mean how did you get there?"

"after leaving india I was living in the campus. This life was all new to me. The customs...the people all the things...and I was alone. My roommate had a boyfriend and he often used to sneak in our room and I told her I was not comfortable...at first I used to give them privacy by going out but I had nowhere to go...and his visits in our room increased. One day..he..." zoya sighed sadly remembering the young girl she was to witness that. Asad was listening patiently

"he murdered my roommate and since nobody knew he used to come here I seemed to them a possible suspect."

"what!" asad exclaimed anger growing up with a mix of shock.

"that sight disturbed me a lot and that was the only time I met lara. I always used to hangout at rinky aunty's store helping her closing it while the lovers in my room had their time. The doubts were that I killed her but they weren't having any proof but somehow I got to jail." She looked at him for his reaction. He was processing her words and she could feel his grip on her tightening.

Rinky aunty's son arbaaz had lara as his guide...he was doing law. Lara came into picture and helped in my bail. I was proven innocent. I told the whole thing to lara...she seemed nice and understanding grew between us. One day lara took me to that bar so that I can tell her who was the real killer." Asad had relaxed and now was rubbing the length of her arm smoothly.

"that night my life changed. I met eric" she giggled

"u know when we first met what did he ask me?"

Asad growled "yes that idiot wanted u to let him kiss you"

Zoya chuckled at his expression which said if he would have been there he would have punched him hard.

"lara slapped poor eric.lara was uncle's lawyer too and legal adviser. Eric knew her and then I got home...i was out of that campus and finally found a family in uncle and eric."

He smiled down at her and pecked her forehead.he was happy for her.

There was more zoya wanted to share which she never did with anyone.coz ever since they met they hadn't have time to actually talk. Life was busy for zoya and asad too and when they finally confessed...more bad things came there way and they were emotionally exhausted...but this night they were married and all the good things were going to come their way. They were ready to embrace the love and not only the eyes but their hearts had a good talk which was much needed.

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That's it for now guys! I know not a very good enjoyable marriage but an emotional one! Then again we did a lot of masti in sangeet na so suck it up! 😉

Up next is ofcourse the romance so the update will be up only when u show me how desperate u are! And for that u have to hit like and comment!!!

Love you guys! Lets meet up in comments 😃

Cyaa... 🤗

Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago
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res for simmi
i love you simmo🤗
thanku so much for selecting their dresses
*umaaah❤️

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