#3 Asya ff unique love part 24-27 *thread links in the index @ pg 1

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#831

Awesome Part Dear

So, Asad is Zoya's Romeo n Asad calls Zoya as his Juliet

Asad went for some work in another city

Asad has seen Gary n got angry

So, Zoya was not raped

How come Eric not know of such an important thing 4m 5 years?
Asad knows d half truth but Dilshad knows d full truth

Loved how Zoya made Eric spill everything wid her anger

So, d papers Zoya burned were important

Asad plans to confront Gary wid a gun

Zoya getn nightmares abt Asad

Asad's letter was lovely but emotional in d end

I did not liked a part where Asad said in d letter dat if he don't come then she sud not be someone's else as I expected him to tell her to move on. Well, I don't want anything to happen wrong n dat letter scared Zoya again after dat scary nightmare of Asad dying.

Loved d fight between Asad n Gary

Gary seems to be very physIcally strong for his age in 50s

Why Asad need to take trouble in saving those 2 men by carrying one on his arm dat also on d parachute wen Zoya is waiting for him?

So, Gary's death news is fake to hide his real whereabouts

How can army has d right to punish any man?
Hope Gary is punished severely

Hope Asad returns widout any problems

I want a nice AsYa talk where they confess their love to each other n also have a talk abt dat rape matter n Asad consoling Zoya for dat

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#832

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Isiliye toh I said na it was something real kyunki realty mein HEro maar khata bhi hai..aur maarta bhi hai..
Humey sirf Asad ko Mukka Ahmed Khan ke roop mein dekhne ki aadat thi toh naya laga yeh.
And Yes @BOLD...jaldi karo ab...Intezaar ki Beinteha hee hoogayi.

haan sahi he...par naam bhi to padho ff ka
it has to be unique nai?😆😆
hahaaa..beintehaan seriously mayur?🤣
ok abhi replies karke finish karti hu update

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#833

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

agai late lateef😆
thanku for unressing😉
hello shello😆
thanku ji🤗

iss baar jaldi unress kardi na😳

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#834

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

haan aahi gayi😆
hasi ki dukaan naya naam milne par party kar rahi he akele akele?
mujhe bhi kuch thusne ko laade
m hungry yar😳
nd thanku...i hope ye fresh and unique he
abhi lambi update he
read karne me tym lagega
aur replies karke update karti hu😃😉

Teray liye pori shop

Edited by NnonaA - 10 years ago

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#835

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Awesome Part Dear
So, Asad is Zoya's Romeo n Asad calls Zoya as his Juliet
Asad went for some work in another city
Asad has seen Gary n got angry
So, Zoya was not raped
How come Eric not know of such an important thing 4m 5 years?
Asad knows d half truth but Dilshad knows d full truth
Loved how Zoya made Eric spill everything wid her anger
So, d papers Zoya burned were important
Asad plans to confront Gary wid a gun
Zoya getn nightmares abt Asad
Asad's letter was lovely but emotional in d end
I did not liked a part where Asad said in d letter dat if he don't come then she sud not be someone's else as I expected him to tell her to move on. Well, I don't want anything to happen wrong n dat letter scared Zoya again after dat scary nightmare of Asad dying.
Loved d fight between Asad n Gary
Gary seems to be very physIcally strong for his age in 50s
Why Asad need to take trouble in saving those 2 men by carrying one on his arm dat also on d parachute wen Zoya is waiting for him?
So, Gary's death news is fake to hide his real whereabouts
How can army has d right to punish any man?
Hope Gary is punished severely
Hope Asad returns widout any problems
I want a nice AsYa talk where they confess their love to each other n also have a talk abt dat rape matter n Asad consoling Zoya for dat

hey juhi😃
welcum back onboard😆
kaha gayab thi haan?
chal koi na thanku so much for the loon comment😃
eric doesn't knw...haha i was waiting for this question yar
socha koi to puche😆
eric tab bohat young tha and remember jab mene eric ka pov diya tha tab usne kaha tha ki use kisi ne khud hokar ye nahi bataya ki she was raped...he watched it on tv and thought that was truth...
therefore he always thought she was raped and felt miserable when she was in hospital and hence told the same to asad.
and that is why he was speechless on south beach when zoya told him she wasn't raped and then he flt even more terrible...thats why she dropped him home.
hope its clear now
haha eric ki rag rag se wakif he zoya...pta he use kese baat bahar nikalwana he😆
yes there asad did got selfish as he didn't expect her to move on...
har story me asad mr. perfectionist thodi hoga...😆 human tendency ke hisaab se dekh
gary is physicaaly very strong...there's more to come on that matter...u stay tuned
and asad saved the two men coz they just worked under gary...they were told to and paid for...they weren't at fault./...he saved them coz he wanted to do the right thing.
abt army's rights...i'll again say there's more to come
just wait!😉
confession talk hai next update me😊
rape talk i think i'll add after marriage😃
thanks again for the beautiful review and honest one true
aaj laga ki someone truly reads my updates and analyse it like critics