#3 Asya ff unique love part 24-27 *thread links in the index @ pg 1 - Page 83

Originally posted by: Gouri_Joshi

Superb chapter sue

update soon

thanku gouri
yes will do soonish😃

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Sue😃

Thanx for the RES*😊

Update was well writeen👏 , High on Emotions and Actions as well and also was close to realty also⭐️👏

Asad ko kafi pitvaya yaar tumne...khair aacha kiya uss GARY😡 maara nahi😡🤢

itni jaldi par koi tension mat laana uske case se ab😕

Zoya ka pura part emotional tha and was presented in a good manner...but ek baat hai subah ko kisi ko marte hue dekhle yaa mara hua dekhle kehte hai uski umr badh jaati hai😛

Zoya itni tension main bhi boss waali attitude chodti nhi haaan😆

Enjoyed reading this part😊

Waiting for the next pat eagerly...😳

CONTINUE SOONISHHH😃

hey mayur😃
aww purple comment
i love it😆😳
did u really feel it was somewhat real??/
hash! thanku so much yar😃
pitwana padta he yar
esa thodi hota he sirf hero maare jaye
villian powerful he ye bhi to justify hona chaiyee na...
par gary was a coward and hence fall in the trap of asad
nope...koi tension nahi laaungi relax!😆
ab smooth chalegi story😉😛
yes accha hena asad ki lambi umr hgi😃
haan bossy to he vo
kaha tha mene cs me😆😆
u knw somethings never change😆
baap re continue soonish bold me likha😲
chalo ab to update jaldi deni hi padegi😳

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

hi sue

awesome chapter yaar

i really loved it

finally asad ko pata chal gaya zoya ka rape nahi hua tha

garry ka game over ho gaya

fight scene is awesome

i m proud of u asad

ab sab kuch theek hoga

waiting for next chapter

update soon...

hey paru??
kaha he yaar?
i thought u disappeared...chal milte raha kar😆
thanku so much for dropping by
haan ab sab theek hoga😃
will be doing soon😉
keep track

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

oye ab sorry mat bol😡
yaha mere thread pe nahi chalta ye sab
hahaa..guruji thing ka the end kar yar ab
bohat hua...i imagine myself as a rishi muni everytime u adress me guruji🤣
itna accha bhi nahi likhti me😆😳
chaljaa diya ashirwaad😊
maarungi to nahi but kas ke huggie dungi
kyuki ur adorable🤗

chal teekh hai khatam kiya guru ji wala chaker sirf teray liye.

Originally posted by: katkaif55

hello
yayy an update
and wat an awesome job sue👏
the action sequence was well penned
i actually enjoyed it
asad ne bhi mar khai that was good nahi to villian powerful nahi lagta
and gary was no doubt a coward person
thank god faasi ho jayegi
saari problems tal gayi
and asad ki to daad deni padegi
he didn't killed gary neither did he left him to die
khud pain me hokar jaan bachai
but ultimately gary has to die
very well written part with logic
and it was natural👏
waiting for asad to come home
and sangeet😃

hey mini di😃
wah !! i love ur dp
salmaan frm partner right??😆
he looked cute
pta he mene ye picture dekh ke papa se zid ki thi mujhe esi dress khareedne ko😆😆
khair...i was silly i knw
😳 anhaa...logical han? thanks😆
are baap re natural bhi?itni taareef...mai dhany ho gai🤣
thanku so much🤗

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

whaat??😲 u read it thrice???😆
aww thanku so much nona
ur crazy sach me hasi ki dukaan❤️
no i wasn't a fighter😆😆...but i think i have a well developed imagination power...😳
m not boasting...ye ek hi cheez he jo me khud ke baare me surely state kar sakti hu😆😳
ohk will do once i proof read😉

Originally posted by: nikii11

res unres

Lol yeh gary aak se zyada powerful kaise hosaktha hain..??

I didn't lik him choking aak

hota he yaar...khair jeet to aak ki hui na kyuki aak demaag se powerful tha😉

And didn't lik tht part where gary was above aak..

And aak has six packs

Kya gary ka bhi 6 packs hain huh...

are villian powerful nahi hoga to maza nahi aata na

isiliye thoda sa use bhi pitwaya😆😛

So plane was in fire

Aur parachutes sirf do thain

Aak being the hero cared even for his enemies

And took gary with him

Zoe restless thi

Usse nightmares bhi aaye

And tht too early morning

She was worried for aak so she hugs her I pad wich had aak's pics in it ussi waqt she sees email

It was yesterday's email she reads and it was aak's

But the email was abrupt...it ended in a negative ray

She cried sobbed dillu saw her in this condition and comforted her

And she gets bit comforted ussi waqt lara gives good news of gary ka death

And she gets feared abt aak

She tries to collect info's and finally she gets aak's info from zoad's private agent

Stating tht he is returning back

And she also gets the new info, tht gary is given to the military

So he is not dead

Aak wapas aaraha hai...

waiting for asya Milan nd romance...

update jaldi😆

wow!!! m surprised tune itna accha review diya badmaash?? thankewww
hehee bacchi sudhar rahi he🤣
gary mehendi waali subah marega...
and haan asya milan and sangeet in next part
😃

Originally posted by: NnonaA

Yay!!

Meri baari aa gai...🥳

Humai aap se ye naam qubool hai...

Even I am sure of ur developed imagination power...

It's unique and fresh...

Jaldi ker proof read...😃

haan aahi gayi😆
hasi ki dukaan naya naam milne par party kar rahi he akele akele?
mujhe bhi kuch thusne ko laade
m hungry yar😳
nd thanku...i hope ye fresh and unique he
abhi lambi update he
read karne me tym lagega
aur replies karke update karti hu😃😉

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

hey mayur😃
aww purple comment
i love it😆😳
did u really feel it was somewhat real??/
hash! thanku so much yar😃
pitwana padta he yar
esa thodi hota he sirf hero maare jaye
villian powerful he ye bhi to justify hona chaiyee na...
par gary was a coward and hence fall in the trap of asad
nope...koi tension nahi laaungi relax!😆
ab smooth chalegi story😉😛
yes accha hena asad ki lambi umr hgi😃
haan bossy to he vo
kaha tha mene cs me😆😆
u knw somethings never change😆
baap re continue soonish bold me likha😲
chalo ab to update jaldi deni hi padegi😳

Isiliye toh I said na it was something real kyunki realty mein HEro maar khata bhi hai..aur maarta bhi hai..
Humey sirf Asad ko Mukka Ahmed Khan ke roop mein dekhne ki aadat thi toh naya laga yeh.
And Yes @BOLD...jaldi karo ab...Intezaar ki Beinteha hee hoogayi.

Originally posted by: NnonaA

chal teekh hai khatam kiya guru ji wala chaker sirf teray liye.

Dhanai bhaagh humaray aap ka ashirwaad le ker.

Arey itna acha?? Tum boht acha likhti ho...

Huggie was really tight😆

And adorable me? 😳 😳

yes ofcourse ur adorable😆
chal chod deti hu
lekin agli baar sry bola to kas ke hug karungi isse bhi😃
yaad rakhio⭐️