AsYA (KaBhi) Story....LET ME HEAL YOU, Part Three(B) updated (Page 21) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey this is just amazing and a lovely strt plz continue soon can't wait to read the nxt update😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Awesome start Deepti..
Waiting for more..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kvsurbhi

Hey this is just amazing and a lovely strt plz continue soon can't wait to read the nxt update😃


Thanks a lot dear
I am glad that you like it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman

Wow! Awesome start Deepti..
Waiting for more..
Continue soon
thanx for pm..


Thanks a lot dear
I m happy you like it 😊
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Thanks a lot dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Friends🤗

I am so happy that you like the story...Thanks a lot for your

appreciation...so here is the next part of the story


PART TWO

Asad reached home thinking about that girl & her beautiful eyes. He found the door was open, he entered & his hand instantly reached his forehead with irritation. The luggage was still there near the door & Ayaan was fast asleep on sofa with his shoes on. Shaking his head he picked up the bags & walked in. placing the bags near the sofa he went towards Ayaan. He tried to wake him up while removing his shoes. Ayaan stirred in his sleep.


"Bhaijaan aap aagaye", he asked in a sleepy tone.

"Ayaan utho, jake fresh ho jao" Asad said again.

"Uff Bhaijaan...aap bhi na sone bhi nahi dete" Ayaan said while sitting up, ruffling his hair with his one hand & rubbing his eyes with the other.

"waise Bhaijaan aapko itna time kaise hua" he asked further. After a moment he again called Asad as he didn't get any response.

"Bhaijaan... kaha kho gaye aap..." he asked shaking Asad by his shoulder.

"um...haa...wo kuch nahi...main fresh hoke ata hun", he replied coming out from his dreamland. "uff...why I am thinking about her" he thought & picking up his bag walked towards his room.

"Bhaijaan wo Gaffur uncle ke ghar pe dinner ke liye bulaya hai", Ayaan said looking at his back.

"haan Ayaan Ammi ne bhi phone kiya tha...tum pehle jake fresh ho jao" he said from the door of his room & went inside shutting the door.

...

Siddiqui Mansion

"Humeira dekho kaun hai", Razia said to Humeira who was helping her in the kitchen. Humeira ran to open the door while the rolling pin is still in her hand.

She opened the door & raised her hand to push back the curls falling on her face. Seeing her action the person at the door moved back a little.

"Are...are...aap hamesh yeh rolling pin leke hi ghumati hai kya...aisi hi sabko welcome karane ki aadat hai kya aapki...ya phir apke ghar main chor bell bajakar ate hain", Ayaan said mischievously.

"Um...wo...nahi...main...aap aiye na andar", she said nervously & went to kitchen to inform her Ammi.


Asad & Ayaan entered & settled on the sofa.


"Are beta kaise ho...pure 15 sal bad dekh raha hun tumhe", Gaffur said coming down from the stairs. Asad & Ayaan stood up & wished him while he hugged both of them. Soon they got engrossed in chit chat


"Are baatein to bad me hoti rahengi chalo khana kha lo pehle", Razia said coming out of the kitchen & they all settled on the dining table. After serving them Humeira turn to go.

"Are Humeira...beta tum nahi khana khaogi?" Gaffur asked her.

"Wo nahi Abbu main Zoya ke saath bad main kha lungi"

"Are haan Zoya hain kaha?" he asked again

"Abbu wo apni room main hain, use abhi bhookh nahi hain" Humeira said looking unpleasantly at Razia. Gaffur shook his head knowing what may be the matter was & then glancing at Razia start with his dinner while Humeira went from there. They all finished the dinner with normal chit chat & talking about some business matters.


Finishing with the dinner Ayaan & Asad got ready to go back to Khan Villa.

"Uncle kal ki meeting kitne baje hain" Asad asked gaffur walking towards the door.

"Meeting toh 11 baje hain, tum log breakfast ke liye yahi pe ana...hum sath main hi office challenge"

"Thik hai uncle Khuda Hafiz" Both Asad & Ayaan walked out wishing him.


...

After some time Humeira came to Zoya's room; she stood near the door looking at Zoya who was stood by the window staring at nothing. "Zoya..." Humeira called & Zoya turn around. "dinner nahi karna?" Humeira asked moving in her room & sitting on the bed while Zoya also came & sat beside her.


"Bhukh nahi hai Humie"

"Zooth mat bolo, Ammi ne mana kiya tha na sabke saath dinner karne ke liye" Humeira asked getting a bit angry.

"Are nahi Humie...aisi koi bat nahi hai" Zoya said looking down.

"mujhse toh zooth mat bolo...aur abhi agar tum nahi aogi toh main bhi khana nahi khaungi" said Humeira getting up with holding Zoya's hand. Zoya looked up at her, tears brimming in her eyes & she hugged Humeira.

"Hey...kya hua...please don't cry...I know Ammi was rude but please don't take her words to heart..." Humeira said hugging her back. "I don't understand why Ammi always behave like this" she mumbled to herself .


"Nahi Humie wo bat nahi hai...but I feel some strange uneasiness today...don't know what but it feels like something big is going to happen again in my life..." Zoya said releasing herself from hug & turn towards the window again. "kuch bhi nahi hai abhi jo khone ka dar hai...but still I m scared today..." She said gazing at the dark night.

Humeira walked upto her & standing beside her placed her hand on Zoya's shoulder. "Ohh...that's mean Abbu aur main tumhare liye kuch bhi nahi hai"

"Are nahi...mera wo matlab nahi tha Humie" Zoya said turning to her & holding her hand.

"Chalo ab...you are thinking too much today...aisa kuch nahi hoga..." Humeira said faking to be angry at her.

"Humie...sorry...please" Zoya said holding her ears.

"Chalo dinner karte hain...I am so much hungry...itna toh reham karo mujh par..." Said Humeira folding her arms trying not to smile.

"ha..ha chalo..Drama Queen" Zoya said & Both came out of the room...outside the window night became darker...

...

Party was going on, everyone was busy in chit chatting & enjoying.

A girl around nine years old came running down from the stairs to stop her Ammi

"Ammi please meri bat suno na..." She held her Ammi's hand. "main nikaah nahi karna chahti...mujhe kahi nahi jana hai apko chod ke", she pleaded her mother while tears were rolling down from her eyes.

"Are beta aisa kuch nahi hoga...let him do whatever he want now...I promise you my princess your Nikaah will happen as per your wish only...you don't think about it now...abhi tum bahot chhoti ho beta..." Her mother wiped her tears.

A man came towards them, "you are not ready? Go & get ready now, I want to make an announcement... & what are you doing here...all are asking for you", he shouted at them & both of them turned to go. The girl stood there middle of the staircase looking at her mother sadly. Thinking something she wiped her tears & again ran down from the stairs. Her leg twisted & she slipped down. "Ouch..." she cried & sat on the stairs holding her leg.

A boy around eleven years old came to her & sat beside her.

"Kya hua tum ro kyu rahi ho?" He asked worriedly.

"Kuch nahi...tumhe kyun batau...waise bhi koi bhi meri baat nahi manta", she said & stood up. "Ouch..." she again cried in pain & sat down.

"are tumhe toh chot ayi hain...dikhao mujhe" the boy said & tried to look at her leg. But she didn't allow him & again start crying holding her face in her palms. Removing her hands from her face he tried to wipe her tears but she pushed him back.

"tum jao yaha se...mujhe kisi se kuch bhi bat nahi karni", she said & getting up tried to walk with her injured leg holding the wall.

"Ok... tum bat mat karna but main tumhari chot toh dekh sakta hun na" he again tried to help her but she again pushed his hand away & wiping her tears went to her room. He stood there looking at her. "Yeh ansoo tumhari ankhon main achhe nahi lagte" he felt bad for her & prayed to Allah for her happiness.

Asad got up from the bed, confusion was written all over his face...raking the fingers through his hair he went towards the window & stood there staring at the dark night. He was confused that why this faded memory popped up today. He tried to remember that party or any other thing related to it, but he only remember that while playing Ayaan got injured & they left from there abruptly.


"Today really strange things are happening with me...first that girl is not getting out of my mind...It's weird I can't stop thinking about her... & now don't know why suddenly this memory comes out of nowhere"...he thought & rubbed his face in his palms.


"Bhaijaan...aap abhi tak soye nahi" Ayaan asked entering his room & sat on his bed. "Kya bat hai Bhaijaan aap khoye khoye se lag rahe hain, kahi Bhopal me aate hi dil toh nahi kho baithe" Ayaan giggled.

"Ayaan tum abhi tak soye kyu nahi", Asad asked him ignoring his comment.

"I am not feeling sleepy", he replied while his mobile beeped & he lay down on the bed opening the message he received.

"Aahh...Bhaijaan suniye... Arz kiya hai..." Ayaan started & Asad sat beside him pressing his temple. "Nahi Ayaan...sone do abhi"

"Bhaijaan suniye toh...for a change it's not mine, friend ne bheji hai..." Ayaan said & started his Shayari


"Mulakat thi adhuri si wo...Kuch adhura sa tha didar ...

Kashish thi un aankhon me...bikhara sa laga Aashiyaan...

Yaadein dil se hain takrayi aise...na jane kya tha wo paigam...

Ulzi ulzi si in raho main...apna sa laga tha wo anjaan ..."


Ayaan said & looked up at Asad. He was lost somewhere

"Bhaijaan..." Ayaan called & he came back to his senses.

"Let's sleep now" he said ruffling Ayaan's hair & laid down on the bed.

Recalling Ayaan's shayari he closed his eyes & that Angels face appeared again in front of him...he smiled tiredly & soon sleep engulfed him.


So here is the next part...I hope you like it

I m so thankful to you guys...your likes & comments are really a lot for

me. waiting for your reviews for this part...

Love you a lot 🤗


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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Once again a grt update😛
Luv humeira and zoya's bonding asad and ayaan too
Feeling sad for zoya
Want to know what happened in her past
Continue soon😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved Zoya and Humeira's bonding...

And Asad...he is in dreamland only...😉

Loved Ayaan too in this update...

It was a good update and thank you so much for the pm!!
Edited by --Aishwarya-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Amazing. Awesome.
Loved it.
Asad is thinking about zoya.
What happened with zoya?
I think razia hates zoya.
Asya have met in their childhood.
Curious about zoya's past.

The shayari:
"Mulakat thi adhuri si wo...Kuch
adhura sa tha didar ...
Kashish thi un aankhon
me...bikhara sa laga
Aashiyaan...
Yaadein dil se hain takrayi
aise...na jane kya tha wo
paigam...
Ulzi ulzi si in raho main...apna
sa laga tha wo anjaan ..."
is wonderful.
It touched my heart.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
awesome update
like it
thanks for pm

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