AsYA (KaBhi) Story....LET ME HEAL YOU, Part Three(B) updated (Page 21)

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Very Good and well written update Deepti..
So Zoya lives with Siddiqui's ..for a change..don't know their relation as such..as of now.
Asad is confused and also little mesmerised by the Girl*...and then he also has a past memory in his dream.
Liked this part..
I guess their were little clues fo us to have a insight into this story.
Interesting update.
Continue soonish.

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Binzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

wonderful update...
is raziya is zoya's stepmother..
why she refused zoya to eat with everyone..
humeirah is really caring..
asad can't forget about zoya interesting...
is the girl in asad's dream is zoya..
marriage at such a young age..couldn't understand..
continue soon...

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Chahat Doshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Nice update

So Asad did not meet Zoya at Gaf's place; he lost in the memories of her beautiful eyes

ZoHu bond was very good ; show mein nahi dikhaya tha 😡

I guess Asad ki memories must of childhood; ladki Zoya hi hogi

Razia wohi ki wohi hai

Update soon

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

gr8 part

zoya is also in sm

excited to know more about asya

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next part

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simmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Res 😳
Unres
That was very well penned
Specially the childhood part that just touched me 😳
i really liked your writing from the very beginning u r superb 👏
Pls continue 😳

Edited by -simmi- - 10 years ago

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sasir

@sasir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Nice
Loved it.
Y zoya so sad n dull... I don't like razia...

Plz update soon

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-PizzyLuvAsya-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Hey u r an awesome writer
Loved both parts
Keep it up dear !

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--Sumi--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Oh very nice update

Razia step mother of zoya hoe rude she is.

Miss Asya meeting

Dreams haunted asad in sleep

I like aayan Shayari

Waiting for next part

Please pm me

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Annie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Lovely story dear! Asad is so smitten by her :D

Update soon dear :)

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

"Yeh ansoo tumhari ankhon main achhe nahi lagte"

11 saal ka baccha itni bhari line...😆 it reminds me of the dialouge ' i hate tears re!! pushpa...'🤣

"Mulakat thi adhuri si wo...Kuch adhura sa tha didar ...

Kashish thi un aankhon me...bikhara sa laga Aashiyaan...

Yaadein dil se hain takrayi aise...na jane kya tha wo paigam...

Ulzi ulzi si in raho main...apna sa laga tha wo anjaan ..."

i'm loving this one...pls tell me did u wrote this by urself?😳

perfect...and i loved the way u described the whole li'll exchange of words...

zoya...complicated now...9 years and y wud she marry someone...????

coz i that girl in asad's memory was zoya...

how cute asad's thinking abt her while sleeping

gud going pls continue soon deepti👏👏👏👏

thanks for pm😛