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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONU2408

lllooovvveeelllyyy...awsmly written...

continue soon..



thank you and of course 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: FATIMA78651

welcome :) superb writing and story, i am missing this lateef on show



thank you 😊 I am missing Latif too. I don't like that Latif's a negative character now 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kratiagrawal

Amazing... Very beautiful. Please continue soon



Thank you so much! And I promise I will update by Fri 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Welcome to IF and the QH forums, ssimmy!! 🤗

This is one of the best debut fanfictions I've ever read. What amazed me is the kind of graphic detail you have included! 👏 I could totally picturize this!


I can imagine 'Jannat' running away from the pseudo-marriage! Seems like she's inherited her mother's traits! 😉 Gosh! What I wouldn't have given to witness Shaad's flabbergasted reaction to the intimacy SaHil shared in the last part?! 😆


I'm eagerly waiting to read the next part! Update soon! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice..please continue soon..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sahil TS: I remember Part 2
I am so sorry for the super late update! All my finals were happening and I really needed to study😕 But the funny thing is that I didn't do so good on them anyway😛 Well here I am with Part 2. Hope you guys enjoy!😊

*Just to make it clear, words in '___' are thoughts, and words in "____" are dialogue

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She was in someone else's arms.
Aahil's arms.

Shaad stood their stunned as he watched his wife relish herself in someone else's arms.
'What is Jannat doing?' He took long strides towards Aahil's room and stopped at the doorway.
"Jannat?"

Sanam broke her long embrace with Aahil and turned her head to the deep voice she heard. Her eyes moved to the tall figure standing in front of her. Shaad saw her turn around; her hair was frizzy and she was clearly crying. He walked towards her and grabbed her wrist. "Jannat why did you run away from the nikaah? Is there something you want to tell me?" Shaad asked in his naive tone. Sanam cringed as she felt his hand touch hers.

'Dhokebaaz.He's been lying to me for so long..'

Sanam jerked her hand out of Shaad's and moved away from him. "I AM NOT JANNAT! I AM SANAM AAHIL RAZA IBRAHIM!" Shaad was speechless.
''Sanam'? What the hell? What is happening with Jannat? Did Jannat not take her meds?'

He reached his arm out to her once more. "Jannat, if this nikaah has gotten you nervous, there's no problem. We can postpone the marriage. Just please don't say these ridiculous things to me." His words made her blood rush to her head. She couldn't believe this man.

"DID I NOT JUST TELL YOU TO NOT CALL ME JANNAT?! I AM NOT JANNAT! I AM AAHIL RAZA IBRAHIM'S WIFE! I AM THE NAWAB BEGUM OF BHOPAL! DON'T YOU DARE CALL ME JANNAT! AND MARRIAGE? HECK I AM NEVER MARRYING YOU! NOT IN THIS LIFETIME! MY HEART BELONGED TO, BELONGS TO, AND WILL ALWAYS BELONG TO MY AAHIL!"

'Did she really just say that she was Aahil's wife?' Shaad started to remember what Nayi Sanam had told him once.

"Aahil is a Nawab.. Once he sets his eye on something, he does not rest until he gets it.."

'Oh, so this is all of Aahil's plans. He has brainwashed my innocent Jannat.' Shaad turned to Aahil.
"Mr.Aahil, I am indebted to you for letting Jannat and I reside in your house... but it is extremely cheap of you to chase after my wife and tell her that she is your Sanam. It is disgusting that you took advantage of my Jannat's amnesia."

Aahil and Sanam both glared at him. Aahil was just about to open his mouth until Sanam grabbed his hand. She shook her head at him and patted his hand to assure him. This was Sanam's fight. And she was going to fight it on her own.

"Jannat, Mr. Aahil has brainwashed you... please regain your senses.. It's your husband... Shaad"

'How dare he speak ill of my husband in front of my own eyes?'

"Aahil has not brainwashed me. YOU were the one to brainwash me. You thought you were sly, right? You found a woman on the streets, found her to your liking, and decided to call her your wife?" Sanam began to walk towards Shaad as he anxiously walked backwards.

"And you didn't even bother to find who I actually was. You made these fake stories of us eloping and that my family was angry with me. When in actuality, my family was here waiting for me." Shaad gulped as he hit the wall behind him and Sanam came to stand in front of him.

"You didn't care that I had my own loved ones. All you cared about was yourself. You lied to me about my identity, and almost made me marry you! And you're accusing Aahil of brainwashing me? You are the most selfish person I have ever met! My poor husband had to watch me with another man.. Ugh.. It's so disgusting!" Sanam held her head with her hands as she remembered how close she had gotten to Shaad.

"Jannat... Sanam... I am sorry... But I told you in that letter of mine... I thought you accepted me..."

"What letter are you talking about? You mentioned nothing about that! I have no idea what you're talking about!" Sanam raised her eyebrows in question. "Anyways, I don't care for what justifications you have. I want you to leave my life. I have found my husband and that's all I want."

Aahil stood there dumbfounded as he watched the encounter between Shaad and Sanam. He never knew Sanam could get so defensive. He walked towards Shaad, whom was now standing in the corner of the room.

"Shaad, the truth must have struck you hard. I should have told you this earlier. But everything Sanam said is true. She was my wife, but she got lost and somehow landed in Pakistan." Aahil pulled out his wallet from his pocket, unfolded it, and handed it to Shaad. Shaad stared blankly at it. It was filled with pictures of Sanam and Aahil. The biggest one was of their nikaah, Aahil wearing a blue sherwani, and Sanam in a gold lehenga. 'Everything makes sense now...Jannat saying Aahil's name.. messing up my measurements... making an apple pie instead of chocolate cake...' Shaad looked back up at Aahil and stared into his eyes. I was looking for my Sanam for ages. I must thank you for saving her life and returning her to me." Aahil patted Shaad's back and motioned him towards the door. "I am afraid you must leave, Shaad. It is for everybody's benefit." Shaad looked at Jannat, whom seemed to be completely disgusted by his presence. Shaad shook his head and held back his tears. "Okay. I am sorry Jan-... Sanam. I am sorry Mr. Aahil. I promise I'll leave your lives forever." Shaad solemnly said before walking out door in a rush.

"Sanam, don't you think you were a little too harsh on him?" "I'm sorry Aahil, I let my emotions get a hold of me. But he was a very bad person. I'm glad he's gone. And that I have you back."

That night...

Sanam lay in bed and tossed and turned when she couldn't find sleep. Aahil, who was already fast asleep, woke up to find his restless wife. "Sanam, what happened? You can't fall asleep?" "Yeah, I guess it's because I haven't slept here in a while..." Sanam sat up, as did Aahil. Aahil tucked her bangs behind her ear and smiled at her. "Sanam, I know these upcoming days are going to be hard for you... but always remember that I'm always by your side." Aahil leaned forward and kissed her on her forehead. Aahil lay back down as Sanam cuddled into his arms. He draped his left arm around her and pushed her closer to him and held her tightly. Sanam pressed a kiss against his chest and fell asleep in his arms...

Okay I am done! :) I hope you guys liked it. I have many more ideas for other sahil stories so I will be writing again soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Thx for the update.
Shaad deserved a smack on his face. How I wished SaHil had done that...

Looking forward to your new stories on SaHil 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
This was lovely! 😃

I'm glad you showed this to be Sanam's fight. It was she who was compromised throughout and she has the sole right to decide how to tackle the situation. 👍🏼


I'm eagerly looking forward to your other work on SaHil. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sahil333

Thx for the update.

Shaad deserved a smack on his face. How I wished SaHil had done that...

Looking forward to your new stories on SaHil😊



No problem! And maybe we can watch Sanam slap Shaad once she gets her memory back! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: FireNIce

This was lovely!😃

I'm glad you showed this to be Sanam's fight. It was she who was compromised throughout and she has the sole right to decide how to tackle the situation.👍🏼


I'm eagerly looking forward to your other work on SaHil.😳



Thank you! 😊 I figured that it would be interesting to witness a fight between Shaad and Sanam. Sets him right!

Thank you for your lovely comment, it motivates me even more 😃

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