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Niks it was awesome.

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice updates
Asad & Zoya fight & both went on seperate ways. Enemies tracked her & kidnapped her. So now asad will be there as well. He will save her. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

thank u for commenting😳

Originally posted by: sasir

Nice

thank u😳

Originally posted by: ankiecool

awesome

thanki😳

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice

So asad is mad

Well she is a princess she don't care abt jewellery

Aww but he is totally hooked by her beauty

Omg so tanu have the hots for him 🤢

So now asad and his team is going to look for treasure at eldorado

And. Zoya is also kidnapped by el dorado

So I guess asad to Zoya rescue

Continue Soon

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Nice update

thank u😛

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

6...

hey nikita sry m late in commenting...6 days..omg
m really sry😳

ok coming to update m surprised how well ur improving/...
ur writing is faoirly imaginable...
kep it up
i love it how zoya enjoys the narnia...asad being mesmerised by her was so nicely potrayed👏👏👏👏👏

omg that pee scene was so hilarious🤣
the eyelock was gud but they parted ways...
hmm...now heading to 7th one😊

muje laga read hi nahi karogi diii

aww!!!!!!!
i just love this pic nikita😳
can't help posting...
it is sooo gud
yeah it is dii

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

7.

finally i read this part...
aww!!! how cute is asad
he was openly telling them he liked zoya...
nd asad calling tanu jungli billi...🤣
great job...👍🏼
but omg!!!!!!!
wats gonna happen next.?
i guess zoya will be taken to enemy's place nd asad will reach there with his team...
nd the thief will save the princess...
update soon now 😃

wahhh u r right thief is aftr all her knight so the thief will recuse his princes😆

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Niks it was awesome.

I don't believe Asad actually left Zoya n went away.

He dint go behind her for her safety.

But no probs.

He will meet her again n save her.