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Originally posted by: NaughtyRiya

awesome update
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Originally posted by: -simmi-

Res
Half unres 😆
Read till chapter 4
Awesome and unique story
Really liked it 😃
Zoya is princess and asad is theif hmm like it
I loved their first meeting and that razia aghhh 😡 evil witch kahi ki 😡
U r present it really well
Now 3 more chapters i have to read uske baad baaki ka comment 😉

Chappy 8

Asad ; lets go guys nd they follow the caravan... I guess they are carrying luxurious goods and spicies to their kingdom... aak motions ab hume patha hai hume kya karna hai...😉

Tanveer comes in front of the carvan nd starts acting guiddy...plz koi help karega main akeli ladki ithni dhoop main I am also 2 months pregnent😲😲...thoda pani...plz pani..nd acts lik she is in a dizzy state

The gaurds surround her. They easily get distracted ...behind their back comes asad nd ayan they slowly covers their mouth without letting them breath hits 3 gaurds and carries nd takes them near bushes nd wears the elderado soldier dress covering their face nd keeps one of the soldirs dress near the bush...it was their plan😆

Tanu : hurries from ther near the bushes nd takes the soldiers dress nd puts them

Ayan : This way we enter the city elderado grinning😆

Asad : smirking... and saying city of gold here we come..

Palace scenes

The ministers it has been 4 days nd our king is in this condition...now wht will be narnia's future...coz even narnia's princess is missing

Razia in gaffur's room taking out some legal scrolls which only required a royal seal...

Well now that king is unwell we need someone-else in his place... well prince akram my brothers son from my kingdom corona can be the right person to temporarily take charge.😈.smirking nd sealing the legal scrolls...

She shows it to the ministers I guess we need to ask my nephew to take over the kingdom...

And razia shows the legal scroll with the royal seal in it..

Ministers agree for it...And they say this is only for temporary period till the king gets well ...

Razia asks the messenger of the palace to take some letters written in a scroll to akram 🤢

Aftr 2 days

Aftr 2 days akram receives the letters and smirks😈...its time to be more powerful...narnia is the most powerful kingdom...and I crave for more ...

And aftr 2 days jouney away from Narnia asad ayan tanu reach elderado The city of gold..

The trio smirk😆... asad its time to bid these soldiers bye...

Before asad could continue

Other soldiers say asad to open the carvan door..

Asad thinking well lets do them this favour 😉... opens the behind door of caravan wth the keys tht he has taken frm 1 of the soldier

And he suddenly sees a hand ready to punch with all force he ducks nd zoya punches ayan's nose...

She screams with all her strength helppp anybody somebody these monsters have captivated me...😭

And she jumps from the carvan to the light...aak sees her with his mouth opened..😲

Zoya : plz help someone... 8 soldiers surrounding her... her voice shrinks...nd rest of the soldirs slap her hard nd she falls on the ground with tears rolling from her cheeks😭

Soldier 1 : you better keep your dam mouth shut orelse😡

Tanveer whispering to asad yeh ladki kon hai...😕why have they captivated her...😕❓

Ayan : wah masha allah..sar se leke pav tak kayamath hain..⭐️

Asad gets stunned to see her there😲

Asad pov...

I see her again...😲wow she always mesmerizes me😳..her beauty her eyes but this time she is in truouble..why does she always get into trouble ...first time I met her.. The narnian gaurds were after her..And now narnian enemies..looks lik this chick is the most wanted chick of the town...😲😉

But she is just a maid..why are soldiers after her...she looks so innocent so angelic..😳

Grr she drives me crazy..🤢

And for what crime have they captivated her... does she have anything precious again ...there is something to her...she is mystry..I must find out🤔🤔

But wait a minute these elderado enemies slap her ..i mean they slap her... how dare they ???😡

She is so fragile so delicate so soft so tender...

And she fell to the ground...

No I cant see this happen..

And he moves forward and asks tum 5 log akeli ladki ho maar rahe ho😡...

Dum hai tho muje maar kar dikao...😎

Zoya is baffled to see this soldier helping her

Soldiers: looks like a intruder in disguise 😕❓

Asad Seeing zoya asks ..you alright offers her his hand😳

Zoya gets up on her own totally weak and in dizzy state 😭

Asad gets furious nd hits them left right 😡..They hit him back ayan joins him... Both of them togthr beats them black nd blue😡

One soldier comes wth the sword to stab on asad 😲...and 1 of the soldier runs to inform other soldiers of the kingdom...😲

Asad holds the sword nd his palm starts to bleed😭

Zoya seeing all this blood-shed faints😒

Tanveer screams asad...😳

Asad nd ayan hits the day lights out of them

People start surrounding nd whispering

Asad furiously don't ever mess wth me.. wipes out the blood from his palm

Tanveer : yeh kya kiya asad tumne..😲 hume yaha se chup chap jaana tha..na ki yeh sab hungama..🤢

Hum iss kingdom main ajnabhi hai...we r strangers to this new kingdom...🤢

And we have come here on our mission...how can u forget that...now that u have hit the soldiers in their kingdom..we r gonna fall into bigger trouble...😭

Asad : I don't giv a dam...aak bg music

He goes near zoya..i guess she needs help...

Ayan : yeah she looks weak..

Asad carries her in his arms 😳 ...let's get her some food

Tanveer : whts gotten into you...was that you who said that we r gonna go in disguise of gaurds and aftr entering the city elderado we'll sneak out without anyone knowing...now this city people have come to know they will surely inform the king

And soon more pile of soldiers come to the place...aak carrying zoya sees them coming

Taveer sees them...oh no more soldiers...I told u asad ..its their kingdom ..iss ladki keliye hum sabko musibat main dal diya.. now wht ??

Ayan : voh log 30 or hum 2 ab kya hoga..

Asad : kuch nahi bass bhago😉...bhago guys runn...and the soldiers see them

Soldiers shout intruders these soldiers do not have the royal symbol R ELDE on their neck...There they are get them...

Asya ayan tanveer split their directions ... run around and try to confuse the soldiers..😕

Asad carrying zoya runs other way round ..😳

And ayan runs the other...but in all this confusion asad ayan tanveer go in different directions😕

And manage to escape the soldiers...😕😳

Asad sees some vessel of water and sprinkles it on zoya...zoya gets consciousness...

And sees him 😳

Who are you ??? 😕

Asad : no time for chatter ...grabbing her hand lets just move

Zoya : But you are elderado soldier...why on earth are you helping me

Asad : coz u r in touble 😉

Zoya : I doubt you ...so just leave me ..Is this some kind of a plan... I said leave ...stuggling to let go

Asad : stop it kid hehe 😆

Zoya bites him

Asad ahhh whining in pain zoya biting him even more let go...

Asad : just stop now😡...grabs her close to him

Zoya breathes heavily his arms are so strong...tht she cant escape him so in frustration she blurts out

Plz let go of me ...orelse king of Narnia will wage a war against your kingdom for harming his daughter...a tear drop escapes😭

Chapter 5: it was fab job you did specially zoya's emotion u know the feeling of first tym that thing was just WAAH!! 😃
And that evil witch 😡
Woh kbhi nhi sudhregi 😡
Uske khane me toh zeher mila dungi tu dekhti rehna 😡

Hey nikku🤗 so lovely update yaar aww asad fight for zoya😳 n now he also know the truth n they r alone also😉 par tumne precap nei diya update tho jaldi dedo

resss😉
unres
hey nikita
loved the update
with lot of action
nd the best part was aak's bg tune 😆
ND oops nw asad knws she's the princess
eagerly waiting 4 next update

awesome
now asad knows the truth

awesome story

Nice update

Loved it...
Now asad knows truth