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Niki.

@Niki.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: asya_luver
wow!!
i loved dis!

i hope asad gets to know everything!

thank u for the lovely comment

yeah lets see asad ko patha chalta hain ya nahi 😳

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Niki.

@Niki.

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: ajanshul
Wow It's superbly amazing

thank u lovely reader😳

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simmi

@-simmi-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Res
Half unres 😆
Read till chapter 4
Awesome and unique story
Really liked it 😃
Zoya is princess and asad is theif hmm like it
I loved their first meeting and that razia aghhh 😡 evil witch kahi ki 😡
U r present it really well
Now 3 more chapters i have to read uske baad baaki ka comment 😉

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Niki.

@Niki.

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: -simmi-
Res

yeh tu ithni jaldi kaise pounch gayi...haila😲

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Nice updates
Asad & Zoya fight & both went on seperate ways. Enemies tracked her & kidnapped her. So now asad will be there as well. He will save her. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Nice

So asad is mad

Well she is a princess she don't care abt jewellery

Aww but he is totally hooked by her beauty

Omg so tanu have the hots for him 🤢

So now asad and his team is going to look for treasure at eldorado

And. Zoya is also kidnapped by el dorado

So I guess asad to Zoya rescue

Continue Soon

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: nikii11
oh gosh it takes lot of hard work to pen it neatly...
kithna mushkil hai tauba tauba..

mehnat ki baat hai

how do u do it di.. ithne sare stories.😲

well hats of to u 😉

u r amazing as a writer..😎
well that's a big compliment yaar
thanu so much
nd yes mehnaat ke aage sab kuch jhukta he
so keep it up to u too
m off to read now😃

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

6...

hey nikita sry m late in commenting...6 days..omg
m really sry😳

ok coming to update m surprised how well ur improving/...
ur writing is faoirly imaginable...
kep it up
i love it how zoya enjoys the narnia...asad being mesmerised by her was so nicely potrayed👏👏👏👏👏

omg that pee scene was so hilarious🤣
the eyelock was gud but they parted ways...
hmm...now heading to 7th one😊

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#149

aww!!!!!!!
i just love this pic nikita😳
can't help posting...
it is sooo gud

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#150

7.

finally i read this part...
aww!!! how cute is asad
he was openly telling them he liked zoya...
nd asad calling tanu jungli billi...🤣
great job...👍🏼
but omg!!!!!!!
wats gonna happen next.?
i guess zoya will be taken to enemy's place nd asad will reach there with his team...
nd the thief will save the princess...
update soon now 😃

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