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Posted: 10 years ago
sue dii waiting for ur comment😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nikii11

haan wada raha ki i'll pm u ..hehe
will update by tomo 😛
stay tuned😉


Will be waiting then..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nikii11

waise tumara naam ???

my name nikita
log muje niks bhulate hai...😆


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My name Tehseen .
Log mujhe Tehs bulate hai.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hehe
My name Tehseen .
Log mujhe Tehs bulate hai.😉
🤣
haan tho me bhi tume tehs bhulongi...😳
aur meri jagah barish pad rahi hai.
zoro ki barish.
issliye ab jaana hoga..
kal update doongi
cya😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nikii11


Hehe
My name Tehseen .
Log mujhe Tehs bulate hai.😉

🤣
haan tho me bhi tume tehs bhulongi...😳
aur meri jagah barish pad rahi hai.
zoro ki barish.
issliye ab jaana hoga..
kal update doongi
cya😆

Great baarish...
Where r u from?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

🤣
haan tho me bhi tume tehs bhulongi...😳
aur meri jagah barish pad rahi hai.
zoro ki barish.
issliye ab jaana hoga..
kal update doongi
cya😆


Great baarish...
Where r u from?
scrap main bola na 😃
Edited by nikii11 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chappy 7
Zoya :Well I can manage seeing the kingdom on my own...I don't need any guide...

And she walks around by herself...

Meanwhile the gaurds of the palace put the missing portrait of Narnia princess..everywher...

Every corner of the city...

Some people start recognizing...

Elderado spies the narnia enemies waiting to attack the city were in disguise sees the missing narnia princess portrait...and smirk..

This is the golden chance to get rid of king gaffurs darling daughter ...hahaha as thy once had attacked elderado and took away the golden statues and gold...now pay back time

Asad goes to his orphanage boiling in anger..

And starts mumbling to himself who does she think she is..

She acts lik a princess...

Didn't even bother to care abt the bag which had precious jewels..who does tht ??

His bunch of frnds appear fab 6

Haider imraan Ayan Rehan Humaira tanveer

ahem ahem rehen to asad kya huva teek tho ho aise kya badbada rahe ho

asad: poocho math ki kya huva don't ask ek sarfiri ladki se takraya..aur poora din karab hogaya..

tanveer : sarfiri ladki..acho starts to cough..ab eh ladki kon thi..

asad voh actually tells them the whole story...

Ayan ; kya...hahaha pehli bhar ladki se ullu ban gaye asad...

Asad : haan ullu tho ban gaya ...uski baatho main hi nahi aana chayiye tha...she is crazy...I would have stolen the crown nd diamonds beforehand ...

Tanveer ; hmm baathon main... jaha tak main tume jaanthi hoon tum kisiki baton main nahi padthe ho...tho fir iske baatho main kaise pad gaye...was she beautiful

Asad : she was out of this world... her figure her face her lips her eyes I was totally drowned in them...says dreamily...

Tanu: accha...ithni acchi thi tho chod kar kyon aaye says annoyingly...

Asad : mera bass chale tho usse chodkar hi na aata...par main ithne gusse main tha...usne voh bag giraya...baas gussa bhouth aaya iss wajese

Tanu :gussa tho tumare naak main baitha rehtha hai...

Humi starts giggling...and here we go again tum dono humesha ki tarah ladna shuru math karo...

Asad ; ladna yeh jungli billi shuru karthi hai ...muje tho koi shok nahi iss billi se ladne ki

Tanveer : tum humesha muje jungli billi kyon bhulate ho..

Asad : kyon ki tume meri har baat main bina waje tang aadathi ho issliye..

rehan :arrey chodo roz ki ladai mere paas ek treasure map hain...jisse humari life set hai..its elderado the city of gold...

asad grabs the map nd sees ..yeh tume kaha se mila..

rehan well was playing cards with a wanted goon feroz nd he lost...and the reward he gave was this treasur map,...

all of them see the map nd smirk...

asad: looks lik we have a mission...time to work on this...

well then I am off

all shout asad u r not going alone lik always..its dangerous nd risky...

asad :playing wth danger is my hobby..and I lov adventure..

tanveer : no way asad...this time it will be team work..

humi :yep asad hum sab saath jayege..

rehan :asad look at this map carefully ther are 2 ways 1 is through sea and the other through dense forest...

asad:so lets split up...nd see who will reach first u guys take short cut route through sea

and I'll take the other route..

ayan ; no not this time

rehean: this time we team up nd go...

asad : okay fine I'll allow only 1 nd u guys decide who

ayan : it will be 3 of us me rehan and u...haider humi tanu can go on the short cut

haider : well its fine wth me smirking

tanveer : no I wanna go wth asad..and thts final

humi softly murmering :tu tho humesha ek mauka doondthi hai asad ki saath rehne ki...

tanveer blushing ab jab mauka mila hai tho mauke ki poora faida utaungi..

asad : muje kisi billi ke saath nahi chipakna..

tanveer : but asad plzz ek bhar..main kamzor nahi hoon...I am strong..i can aim well wth my bow nd arrow nd also defend myself

asad : lol

tanveer : asad plzzz I chance to prove myself..

rehan : fine tanu ayan will go wth asad

tanveer : yippee

asad : lets just go now instead of happy dancing

humi ; saying softly to the ears of tanu: lo teri dil ki kwaish puri hogayi..your heart's desires seems to be fulfilling

asad ayan tanu head towards forest...

zoya moving towards the city sees her portrait..omg iam in trouble...she covers her face till the lips and slowly moves...

wow now father seems to be desperate to find me so tht he gets me married to some stranger who I don't even know...

never ..i am not coming back father...u don't care for me..nor my happiness..

and my step mother she is so disgusting

she goes blaberring to herself

and the weather becomes windy her dupatta which she was using to cover her face flies...oh no ...she runs aftr it..arrey nd the enemis nearby sees her face...

and the narnia enemies move to the direction of the duppata and they manage to gain speed and catch it...

smirking game over princess

zoya tries to run but a blow to the back of her head brings her down...

aftr an hour she openend her eyes and immediately felt her eyes water with the sharp pain of throbbing head Within seconds she realised she is laying in a corner in a moving caravan. There was no light coming in but she could hear the movement of what seemed like soldiers. Her eyes adjusted to the darkness and turned her head to scan her gasping as her eyes made out a man at the opening of the caravan. He was a soldier she saw elde symbol on his neck..nd she knew they wer narnia'n enemies...

zoya thinks I need to escape...but how??

The carvan heads towards the forest...

And asad tanu ayan see the carvan with the royal elderado symbol...

This royal symbol R ELDE

Looks lik we r lucky..we can enter elderado city easily winking

Precap : hehe no ways...pehle hit likes fir dekthe hai..😆😈

ps: guys ignore the mistakes plz..
its not proof read
and this chappy had less asya but next will have asya don't worry..hehe😆
Edited by nikii11 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey niku super update yaar so tanu is interested in asad n zoya ko dushmanone pakad li 😲 ab kay hoga aur asad bhi usi main jayenge na 😳 n u did't give us precap 🤢 then continue soon 🤗
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow!!
i loved dis!
i hope asad gets to know everything!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

Hey niku super update yaar so tanu is interested in asad n zoya ko dushmanone pakad li 😲 ab kay hoga aur asad bhi usi main jayenge na 😳 n u did't give us precap 🤢 then continue soon 🤗

As always tu first🥳🥳
hugs u back🤗
haan zoya ko dushmano ne pakad li bichari...
haan yeh tanu ko asad pasad hai..😆

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