Thread II, Asya FF: the runaway bride, Epilogue,(LAST) 15-11-15

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Loved the update...
Continue soon..
Hope everything will be okay soon..

❤️

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asyakabhidreamy

@asyakabhidreamy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Oh my god that was heart melting update

You wrote all that with so much intensity that my heart went away for that two love birds ..

Poor Zoya she need time nd love from Asad same goes to Asad !

That was best part evr so much well written

Loved their love making !

Please please please update soon coz I can't stop dreaming what will happen next now !

Aha welcome to sleepless night now !

Update soonish ..

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Maha

@maha2012

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Loving this new storyline 😳
initially the story had been zoyas denial of love..
now loving their life after marriage 😃
asad should also realize her pain..both arent understanding each other
the intense moment between them was wow 😛
plz update soon..looking forward to read 😊

Maha

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ayat

@ayat20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Very emotional part..

Hope zoya try n rectify her mistake n make everything good for both of them..

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

mindblowing updt.thnks 4 PM.

u describe whole situation so well.ths pregnency issue is very sensitive&i saw ths kind situation by myslf of my some neighbour or relatives so i cn undrstnd.

also some ppl's taunt...jo iss situation ko jeeta hai wo ache se janta hai..

i m a very emotnal person & reading ths updt i started cry...asya's argumnt-asya's pain...&lst situation very well written.

i m nt married & yet i will say love-trust-communication is must in hubby-wify relatn at any situation...

very good updt..love ur writings...btw,whn r u going to updt ur anothr story??

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Ranjani

@Gouri_Joshi

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Nice part rada

I am feeling bad for asya

They are suffering so much

Update soon

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captjs

@captjs

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

i just loved the intensity of this chapter... well written... pls continue soon

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Loved it but oh! That gamble was unexpected
well written btw.
Continue pls ;)

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Wow Dhamake daar mind blowing brilliant update

Well written

Emotions ki bhandaar😉

I hope Zoya will realize her mistakes now

Pls update soon

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

a very emotional updt but a brilliant 1

so Asya went 4 2nd test 2gather which was planned by Nisha

both wanted 2 protect d other which they told eachother

but when even after treatment nothing worked it caused disaster

both kept slowly going away from each other physically & emotionally

That 1 fight over Zoe eating on bed i really felt bad cuz in last part u wrote both never takes grudges 2 bed but that night both slept in different rooms after fight 💔

Zoe got nightmare & Asad consoled was nice scene

D fact that she killed some1 is d whole problem i guess she can't forgive herself as she feels guilty even if d person she killed was Akram

d 2nd major fight break all d restrains both said painful things 2 hurt d other, they made love that night which was also outcome of their pain & frustration

Zoya nxt morning was happy wid it but Asad felt guilty & left

PS- Elena ka naam phir aya so i guess mayb Zoya's insecurity or jealousy will come back again not in a bad but healthy way & hope it works 2 rekindle that love again❤️